Douluo: the Junior Sister of Jian Zong Is a Saint in Wuhun Hall

How can I put it... I quite like the character and the direction of the plot. She is completely independent and strong, calm and rational but protective of her shortcomings. She is not a virgin and does not show mercy to her enemies. She is my favorite type of strong woman. However, the author's character creation is a bit broken and the writing is not very good. Sometimes I can feel what the author wants to write in those scenes. Unfortunately, it just didn't create that kind of atmosphere and feeling. The most satisfying thing about this book is that the protagonist is really talented. And sometimes I wonder if the author has some objections to Bibi Dong. After all, how could she be the one who ruined the preparation she had made with so much hard work and many resources just for personal vendetta? Finally, there are two points that I am most dissatisfied with. One is the emotional scene between Xie Yue and the heroine Ye Ling'an. First, they met too hastily without any foreplay or foreshadowing. I have seen the top nine exams of the Ice God's inheritance, but still did not fill the gap for the heroine's obsession with facial tattoos. Also, the heroine went up to touch Xie Yue's face when she first met him, just because she was confused by a facial pattern? This is so OOC. The heroine is also the genius of the Sword Sect. What kind of cultivator has I not seen in the world of immortality? Isn't there a disfigured cultivator who uses facial tattoos to cover up his scars? Has the heroine never seen facial tattoos in her two lifetimes? It's a very far-fetched feeling. The second is the description of OOC and strange emotional changes of many characters. For example, between Wang Li Xiaowu and the heroine Ye Ling'an, from the original childhood sweetheart to the subsequent breakup, this part is a bit stiff. One moment it is said that the heroine is determined to break up with Xiao Wu, and the other moment it is said that the heroine is reluctant to let Xiao Wu go, and the entanglement continues until Tang Hao shows up. Can't there be a simpler way? In other words, the part where the princess pretends to be talking to Xiao Wu alone is not bad. The psychological pull and character dialogue in that part can be said to be the most helpful part in shaping the characters...

The best fanfic I have ever read. I feel that the emotional line in the later stage is very appropriate, and it also makes me really feel sad. The early stage may not be very good, but the main reason is that the later stage is very good.

It's super interesting, but I haven't seen the life of Xie Yue and Ye Ling'an in the God Realm.

Can there be less "ah"? Just 3 or 4 in one paragraph

It's beautiful. It's really beautiful. It's such a pity for the protagonist and Xie Yue.

2026.5.13