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Tokyo: Just Mastered the Celestial Master's Thunder Method, Strange Talk Invades1

Weird Talk Or Not

1.2M07

The demons and monsters are resurrected in Tokyo. This was supposed to be a terrifying era where demons were rampant and strange stories were everywhere. Unfortunately, they met the Taoist priest Shen Guye who was reincarnated from Longhu Mountain. The local onmyojis struggled hard to survive by following the rules, but they were surprised to find that this boy who ignored the rules was always safe and sound. Thunder light shone in Kamiya Ye's palm. "Rules?" "I'm a Taoist priest, what rules should I tell Guai Tan?" "Talk to me, Refa!"

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Virulence ⭐⭐ I deleted the first chapter and started reading directly from the second chapter, which will not reduce the reading experience at all. He is a seasoned author who knows how to write.

The Beginning of the Mysterious Resurgence Controls Sadako3

Chang'an Sky

1.2M8.4143

Sadako, Kayako, the Clown, the Slit Girl, the Pen Fairy... Ghosts that only existed in movies and TV series in the past have gradually come to the world of mysterious resurrection in real life. In the evil world of the five turbidities, hell is empty, evil ghosts are resurrected, and the world is like a prison. My name is Wang Liang, and I unfortunately traveled through time to become Teacher Wang, the head teacher of No. 7 Middle School who was the first to receive a box lunch in the original plot. The knocker is just outside the classroom, but don't be sad for me, because I have mastered... Sadako, this terrifying supernatural being from another world. ... Years later, people caught in fear heard such words echoing in the ruins of the city. "My name is Wang Liang, and I will end this supernatural era."

Curator1

Virulence ⭐⭐ This author will post uncensored pictures in the Easter egg chapter, so be careful when reading them in the middle of the night. I saw an uncensored girl with a gaping mouth in the early hours of the morning, and I was horrified to death.

I Have Just Become a Recovery Warlock. Do You Think This Place is Wrong?4

Mickey Mouse

205K7.915

"I can't help but hum when I think about how I, as the legendary hero of the second round, will use his superb stick skills to avenge the beautiful girls!" Kayal Ge, who traveled through time and became a recovery warlock, holding a stick warrior template, was full of expectations. But. Looking at the familiar girl god, the useless blond elf, and the teasing gray-haired poster girl in my memory... He fell into a brief thought: "A restoration wizard who restarts his life will meet a beautiful girl in the dungeon?" ... Some years later. The black-haired girl with twin ponytails, the god, finally faced the feelings in her heart that she couldn't let go and transcended her family. The golden-haired swordswoman brings her dowry of a thousand fairies. The useless elf has once again found a goal that needs to be protected with everything it has. "Mr. Kayal." "This time, we have to seize the future!"

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Virulence ⭐⭐⭐⭐ In summary, the author has successfully created a gentleman-sword-style protagonist who says one thing, does another and thinks another. 1. In the previous article, the protagonist's thoughts and the agreement with Hestia (hereinafter referred to as Blue Ribbon) clearly stated that "the recovery magic will not be exposed until you have the ability to protect yourself", but it was exposed later in the article. By the time I removed the bookshelf, in addition to Blue Ribbon, three waves of people had already known about the protagonist's magic. 2. After the protagonist develops the plundering skill, he agrees with Blue Ribbon not to use it casually, and then turns around to go to the healing family members, expose the magic, and plunder the opponent's ability value while he is being treated. His behavior is very similar to that of a hydrogen star god king. 3. The god teaches the protagonist martial arts, and his family members train with the protagonist. Before the protagonist develops plundering skills, he plans to sneak into this family and plunder ability points in the name of treatment. Big brother, you have a way of repaying kindness with hatred. At this time, a kind person said, "If you lose some ability points, switch to the protagonist to treat them, and save the cost of recovery medicine. It's a win-win situation." If the protagonist didn't make an agreement with Blue Ribbon, and if the family members the protagonist planned to plunder were kind to him, then there would really be nothing wrong with him. In addition, this author is also very good at criticizing. Posts raising character issues were posted early in the morning and disappeared within ten minutes.

This Naruto is a Player5

I'm Such A Fat Man

661K7.921

In the 48th year of Konoha, the savior of the world, the supreme ninja of the ninja world, the ultimate changer, the eternal sun and loving father of the Fire Country, the Supreme Emperor of the Water Country, the co-lord of the Wind Country and the Earth Country, the destroyer of the Thunder Country, the successor of the Wooden Ninjutsu, the greatest businessman, painter, politician, and the man who carried forward the Uchiha clan - Uzumaki Naruto, came to the world. This Naruto, he is a player! Ps: Invincible flow, daily writing, relaxed style, I hope everyone likes it.

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Virulence ⭐⭐ Summary: In Japanese translation, look at the pictures and write the text, and add some polish. Compared with the events in the original work, the beginning is the same, the ending is the same, and some processes are the same. As if there is any correction power, the plot development has not deviated at all. If you think about it carefully, it is very consistent with the way of watching movies, that is, there are no barrages and audience reactions, and the main characters of the movie are omitted. The golden fingers given by the main characters to the plot characters are directly given to the plot characters, and then the plot characters are the protagonists. I don't know how I got to Sanjiang. Later, I saw a post in the book review section that asked a similar question. When I checked the post a few days later, it disappeared and the case was solved.

Naruto: Talent Entry, Starting with Otsutsuki Bloodline6

There Will Always Be Haze

818K8.3170

When he woke up, he was transported to the world of Naruto and was in the same class as Nazuo. This was undoubtedly the beginning of hell. Fortunately, when he was one year old, Izayoi awakened the talent entry system. As long as you defeat your opponent, you have a certain chance of obtaining the opponent's talent entry. A gift package for newbies, giving you a chance to copy an entry. As soon as I received this benefit, Izayoi immediately wanted to use it on Naruto to copy his immortal body. However, with a flash of inspiration, Izayoi gave up this idea and decided to use this copying opportunity to Otsutsuki Toneri, who came to Earth with his father and took a sneak peek at Hinata. In this world where the whole story is about the Otsutsuki family's struggle and bloodline is paramount, there is no cheat that can be more powerful than the pure Otsutsuki bloodline.

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Virulence ⭐⭐⭐ Summary: As soon as the protagonist becomes stronger, the villain will immediately follow suit. After setting up the main character's photography hobby, I wrote a lot of plots posing with the heroine on a daily basis. It was abrupt and awkward, but it was still acceptable. To strengthen Nagato, use White Zetsu and Sage modes to strengthen it. This time it is explained that the same combat power is easy to brush up the entries, and Madara has done the same thing in the original work, which is well-founded and acceptable. Then came the Kingdom of Ghosts, and a Six Paths Sage was airborne to pass on to Madara, who immediately caught up with the protagonist who had just strengthened. This is lifeless. There is no need to read any more at this point.

Douchi Continent7

Golden Warm Mushroom

715K01

This is a world that thrives on growing mushrooms. Mushrooms can be grown on the ground, in water, in the air, or even on your body. A frozen mushroom that controls ice and snow, The Xumi mushroom that opens up the void, The blue enchantress who emits blue fire and so on, There are also those strange mushrooms that grow in the wild, have strange looks, are as beautiful as heaven and earth, and possess mysterious energy. Rumor has it that the number one on the list of exotic mushrooms is a stunning beauty with legs below her neck. Twenty-five thousand years ago during the ancient emperor's reign, a huge mushroom rose from the ground, soared into the sky, and covered the sky and the earth. "My name will last forever, and from now on, I will have the final say here."

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Virulence ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ To sum up, for a long period from the beginning, there will always be obstacles to whatever the protagonist wants to do. He is unable to grow for a long time. The plot is extremely frustrating, and it is not against the mainstream of sadism. The protagonist of the Tang Dynasty, the protagonist is just that Tang Dynasty. The author said that he ate mushrooms in the hospital just to hang himself while raising mushrooms. The reason for hanging his life was to maintain his life with nutrient solution (really just for the nutrient solution). (In addition, I saw later that I was suddenly weak after being sucked by a mushroom, took nutrient solution orally, and then recovered a lot immediately. Well, there is a reason for the protagonist Tang in Tang Dynasty) Later, it was said that eating mushrooms in the real world only looks fatal but actually does not lead to death. Then the protagonist eagerly eats mushrooms in front of the doctors and nurses. Then he is misunderstood and stopped from eating mushrooms. He is sent to a mental hospital. In the mental hospital, he spends a lot of money to buy nutrient solution. I am confused. Since you can use nutrient solution in another place, why do you have to eat mushrooms in a hospital ward with many people and monitoring equipment? Forcibly stitching Sun Huowang into a Tang Dynasty protagonist was really too Tang. Some people may say that there are only three days left. If you fail the assessment after three days in a different world, you may be used as a seedbed for mushrooms and be sucked to death. Then let me ask you, why does the author give a retreat (the granddaughter of the elder lets the protagonist embark on the road of steel wire balls, and there is no other description, and the danger of this retreat is not emphasized, and later it is mentioned that the outer disciples are like tigresses), this death crisis has a retreat and is dangerous and lonely. Really, what a great protagonist.

Japanese Entertainment: from Special Photography Actor to Action Superstar8

Zhuolu Central Plains

1.5M014

1976, Tokyo in a parallel world. Gu Ming, a former martial arts stuntman, was reborn here. "The First Ultraman", "Ultra Seven", "Kamen Rider"... Gu Ming will start as a leather actor in tokusatsu dramas and embark on his own path to become a hardcore action star.

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Virulence? ? ? The post in Chapter 135 was a surprise. A reader made a suggestion about the plot. The author was worried that too many similar suggestions would cause the rhythm and would ban the person forever. Later, he explained the reason below (the reason is as above). Later, some readers said that it was not good for him and that it would ruin his popularity, so the author became stubborn. They are permanently blocked and unblocked, and the person who was unblocked speaks and then takes the initiative to give a long explanation. This way, it feels like being on the opposite side of the readers. Either don't block it, or block it but not unblock it, or after unblocking it, either don't explain it, or explain it a little or two and then don't speak anymore. I only dare to say the above paragraph in my book list, otherwise it will be ruined if I am banned. High emotional intelligence summary, this author has the arrogance of a scholar.

Cover the Sky: Luck Will Last Forever, Pushing All the Heavens Across the Sky9

Changing Name

3.1M7.9391

The second incarnation of the Supreme Being (ongoing) travels across the heavens to arrive at the Supreme Being, witnessing different scripts, exploring the mysteries of transcendence, and catching a glimpse of the divine legacy. The Immortal Emperor fights against the other side, the Sacrifice Dao competes with the oldest one, the Dao Fruit VS the Sacrifice Dao above. ... After going through reincarnation, he understood his past life, solved the mystery in his womb, and a familiar yet unfamiliar world appeared in front of Qin Tian. A world of incomparable brilliance, the years are like swords slicing the geniuses, sighing enchantingly on the road to immortality, a sad picture, the beginning of Blood and Bone, the Cauldron of Immortality, the Mirror of the Void, the Bell of No Beginning, and the Devil's Jar that Swallows the Sky. The thirty emperors of the human race throughout the ages have many splendid paths to heaven on their way to eternal life, singing songs and covering the sky with a snap of their fingers. Covering the Sky (Complete), Perfect World (Complete), The Supreme Being (Ongoing)

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Virulence ⭐⭐ The character design is inconsistent, the left and right brains are fighting each other, and the pointy head responds with a sharp mouth.

Dragon Clan: Undercover at the Beginning, the Road to Becoming a God10

Majesty

2.6M8.6225

Su Mo, who strayed into the Nibelungen on the subway, was caught by the Dragon King Jörmungandr. Only then did he realize that he had traveled to the dragon world. Under the threat of Xia Mi, Su Mo surrendered decisively and chose to become an undercover dragon. Xia Mi thought that he had obtained a good insider and informant, but then he gradually began to doubt his life. Why does he, the boss, have to run errands for undercover agents every day? Why does he, the Dragon King, still have to work hard to make money to support his younger brother? Who is the subordinate and who is the tool? Moreover, the most unacceptable thing is - "What's going on with this little red-haired girl? Why did she call you brother?" Xia Mi glared at the man in front of her with a pair of golden eyes - this book is also known as "Miss Xia Mi Wants Me to Confess", "After Three Years Undercover I Became a God", "Killing Herzog a Thousand Times" PS: No torture, no knife

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Virulence ⭐ The front is fine, but the moisture content is 20%-40% in the middle and later stages. Specific performance one is that when the main line is advancing, it gets stuck, and the line is branched halfway, and when the branch line is pushed, the branch line of the line is branched. Specific performance two is monotonous rereading of character labels, such as the weakness of one of Xia Mi's Seven Deadly Sins, Rei's mother character, etc., Writing about common daily problems. Specific manifestation three: There are many explanations of concepts, nouns, etc. Sometimes I have to explain something after saying something or doing something. Similar to the other half of the very watery books in the book list, the format is fixed at "a few words of dialogue or behavior, and dozens to hundreds of words of explanation."

Simultaneous Travel: All Abyss Difficulties12

Caramel Coke

2.9M7.236

Fang Yu and his countless clones traveled through time! Talent sharing, skill sharing, ability sharing. But... Why are the starts so miserable? Naruto Fang Yu: In Uchiha, there are only ten months left before the night of genocide Pirate Fang Yu: The Red Lotus Hell in Impel City has been closed for seven years, brothers, come on Marvel Fang Yu: I don't know what I can do. I can only ensure that I will not be arrested by the immigration bureau. Fang Yu from the Main God Space: When I get through the breeding team and others, and ask the Main God to restore my state, I can do a big job! Wait for me! DC Fang Yu: God knows why I can live across the street from the Joker. The difficulty of jailbreaking in Arkham Talent Market is too high! Journey to the West Fang Yu: I just finished asking around. The place I am staying here is called the Lion and Camel Kingdom. Brothers, see you in the next life... Dragon Ball Fang Yu: Good news, I was in the age of Little Goku. Bad news, I couldn't even beat the audience of the World's No. 1 Budokai, Kame Sennin didn't even look at me. ... A few years later, someone commented on Fang Yu. "He walked with blood and tears every step of the way... He will definitely hate evil as much as he hates it!" [The world is tentatively determined: Naruto, One Piece, One Man, DC, Marvel, Spell Return, Main God Space, Dragon Ball, Journey to the West, and more will be added later]

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Virulence ⭐⭐⭐ In Chapter 10, there is a big one. He was ridiculed while shopping, and then forced to show off his Sharingan. Those who want to be Liang Feifan can take a look.

Strangeness is Coming: I Became an Immortal by Myself13

Kill Nine Pigs In Ten Steps

1.1M7.8

That day, the Heavenly Master, who was known as the leader of the righteous path and whose magic was all-powerful, died. The master found me before he died... "Good disciple, I will teach you the supreme forbidden technique of the Heavenly Master's Mansion, and the Heavenly Master will save you!" As soon as he finished speaking, countless visions of heaven and earth suddenly appeared. Looking at the splendid scene in front of me, I fell into deep thought... "No, Master, this thing has two big words "System" written on it. Do you call this - Tianshidu?" "Master, don't sleep, open your eyes and take a look!" I pointed tremblingly at the scorching sun on the dome, where a scarlet pop-up window imitating Song Dynasty GB2312 font suddenly appeared-- [The system is loading and is devouring the previous administrator] ---------------- [PS: suspense + cultivating immortality + decisive killing + imagination, you must fill in any pitfalls, and it will never be unfinished!

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Virulence ⭐⭐ In order to create suspense, there are too many Riddlers in the book, and before the first riddle is solved, a bunch of subsequent riddles come. There are many riddles that are far-fetched, deliberate, and blunt. It also does not provide readers with a safe platform, that is, the protagonist has been walking on a tightrope between canyons without a safety rope at all. Add the two together and the reading experience is poor.

My Childhood Girlfriend is Nishimiya Glass14

Is There Any Problem With This?

948K8.035

As a lover of light novels in my previous life, I encountered an accident and was born in neon. When he was a baby, he met the Nishimiya family who moved next door. Three-year-old Glass was diagnosed with hearing impairment, and Glass's father decisively abandoned his wife and son after confirming the diagnosis. Compared with Glass in comics and anime, here she changes her life because of my appearance and gets self-salvation. From then on, I had a little follower beside me. From kindergarten to elementary school to junior high school to high school to university to work to marriage to middle age to old age. I was involved in every stage of her life. While growing up with it, I unexpectedly discovered that there were no light novels or anime from previous lives here, and I immediately decided to bring some shock to the light novel world here.

Curator1

Virulence ⭐ The writing of daily interactions is very boring and anecdotal. In each plot, the author wants to write out all the subtle movements of the characters, and there are many close-ups. The character creation is also very thin. The protagonist is good, everyone praises him, the heroine is attached to the protagonist, the protagonist is childish, and then it disappears. The plot is written based on these points back and forth. The story takes place in a few places such as home and kindergarten, and there are no new elements. The summary reason is that there is no expectation point for the development of the plot.

Red Dragon Club Immortal Technique15

The Immortal God

716K7.510

"Kill!" Facing the surging dragon slayer. The red dragon took his time and cast a spell. The golden beans fell to the ground and they all turned into golden armored warriors. Call for the wind and rain! The laws of heaven and earth! Drive thunder and lightning! Move mountains and reclaim seas! Reach for the stars and get the moon! Everything is in your sleeve! After all the dragon slayers have been wiped out, there will be another spirit-binding general. The flesh and blood corpses cannot be wasted. Go to the "Ten Thousand Souls Banner" and "White Bone Pagoda" to turn waste into treasure! This book is also known as "This Red Dragon Is a Monster", "The Red Dragon Can Also Cultivate Immortality", and "The Red Dragon Is a Demonic Cultivator". (It's similar to DND, but not DND. It contains a lot of private and self-designed designs by the author.)

Curator

Virulence ⭐ The combat power is overwhelming, the protagonist's growth depends entirely on the system, and he is a strong character.

America, Gets the American Iai Talent at the Beginning16

Number One Fight

2.0M7.850

The new book "America: Five-Star Citizens Starts with Live TV" has been released! Roy travels to the world of American horror and likes to mention the destiny system. As long as you deal with the characters in the story, you can continue to become stronger. Is there such a good thing? Get Mike Tyson's boxing tips! Get Bob Munden's shooting tips! Get the charm of Grigory Yefimovich Rasputin! Hiss, now I have to capture the beautiful characters in horror movies! Starting from Falls Town, it is interspersed with various horror movie plots, the first of which is Scream. Roy said, I want to take over the world of horror movies, and no one can stop me!

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Virulence ⭐⭐ The most powerful poison points I have seen so far: The previous article clearly stated that many of the protagonist's abilities have exceeded their limits, and the American-style gun-drawing skills are so fast that people cannot react. However, the protagonist and the female companion in the friendly game of Kombat were easily hijacked, and the female companion was even stripped of her shirt by a black man. Later, the chainsaw murderer threw the protagonist into the wall, and he was actually as stiff as ordinary people. The extra points for exceeding human limits were just like the extra points.

Traveling at the Same Time: I Am on the Great Road of All Heavens17

Cats Who Love Diving

4.4M7.230

He has taken on thousands of incarnations and reincarnated through countless worlds. Every reincarnation is the implementation of one's own path to enlightenment. In the world of one person, seeking Tao and truth, the integration of sex and fate opens up the road to immortality. In the world of Naruto, trace the source of blood and create your own martial arts. Ghosts destroy the world, evil man-eating ghosts, seven sins, and the destruction of all living beings... All heavens and worlds, infinite reincarnation. I have a heart to attain enlightenment, and I will never give up as a ghost, as an immortal, as a human, as a Shura, as a demon... This is a legend from the heavens

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Virulence ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ The protagonist's extremely intelligent choices and explanations in the first few chapters create a very irritating character. How intelligent is it? For example, it is explained that it does not interfere with the plot, but after the protagonist analyzes the ability, he immediately releases the skill accurately and accurately to the crowd of characters who are going through the plot far away, just like a nerve, and hits it accurately. The plot behind it is also extremely watery, and its structure is as follows: Follow the plot (dialogue + behavior) Explain a few hundred words with quotations from scriptures (find reasons from the original work and previous texts to explain the above dialogues and actions) After going back and forth, and the meaning of this explanation is very repetitive but the text description is different, this author is very experienced in reducing the duplication rate. The amount of 10 chapters, the water content is probably 7-9 chapters. If it is not removed by the activated poison screen, the following ones will be ugly. In summary, it is not suitable for subscription.