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Rating 6, preference 5. (Evaluated on the plot of The Country Hidden in the Mountain) Time travel, part steampunk. Colonial clothing. Note: After reaching the ground level, the painting style gradually went awry, with too many settings mixed together. After entering the story of the Mountain Hidden Country, the culture of Yongri was clearly transformed, resulting in a complete break with the style of the opening chapter.

Rating 6, preference 3. (Evaluated based on the plot of the movie) Reiki revival background. No system, no rebirth, mother is dead, father is still alive, remarried, stepmother and stepsisters. Daily writing, romance writing, semi-invincible flow. One to one, but there are other single arrows (I haven't seen the later development, so I'm not sure) The heroine awakens as a fallen angel. Note: The author's original words are to write about the step-by-step growth of the protagonist's character (most of the authors who say this will put a cross here. I just want to see the protagonist's strength grow, not the character's growth (especially if he can't write it well at all). Therefore, many of the protagonist's behaviors are very childish (according to the author, they are things that male high school students would do) In addition, the author stuffed a lot of personal information into the article. Isn't it awkward to choose the bloodlines of vampires and fallen angels for the male and female protagonists respectively, and then spend a lot of time on love pot/wenhua self-confidence? (Only for the identity and thoughts of the protagonist of this book, I rated the previous book on The Rise of Great Powers very highly, so don't judge me. I'd rather think about it as a zombie bloodline.

Rating 7, preference 9. (Evaluated on smartphone plot) Reborn, without system, with both parents. Single heroine. Rely on the knowledge of the previous life, rebirth and advance technology, and complete overtaking in corners. (Because I don't know much about technology, I can't be more specific) Science and technology articles, with few financial aspects. The technology part at least prevents laymen from noticing obvious errors. The author's description makes people feel very real, and there is something that "ordinary people (systemless/alien technology)" can indeed do. In some articles, it is clearly written that there are no plug-ins, and pushing the technology tree is more exaggerated than having a system. Note: What I appreciate very much is that the protagonist still maintains a belief in the later stage: not to do evil. This is rare. What makes people uncomfortable in the later stages of many modern novels is that the protagonist's behavior is enough to hang a street lamp, but he still holds a sign of rising for the country. The leek is just a joke. If the protagonist of a modern novel really makes people feel the smell of a hanging street lamp, it will be very disgusting and poisonous. (I have also read articles on specialized capital branches, and some of them I like very much. The focus is still on the advertised identity and stance. (It doesn't matter if you are abroad or on an island, but on the mainland, you have to think carefully. The slap-in-the-face plot is a bit jerky in the early stages, but gets into a good state in the later stages. The business outlook is relatively mature and can easily become a lightning point for some readers (from my personal point of view, I really like this point) (Business is not about fighting and killing, but about the sophistication of the world)

Rating 6, preference 5. (Evaluated on the plot of King of Fishes) Soul travels through the wasteland, orphan, systematic, farming article. Single female protagonist (so far as the plot has been viewed) There are superpowers in the worldview, and the protagonist currently has lightning superpowers. True farming novels tend to focus on games such as Harvest Story, Ring of the World, Dyson Sphere Project, and Stardew Valley. There are many subsystems such as farming, fishing, mining, cooking, and pets. The early plot is mainly about mining and fishing. Note: Very peaceful, or too peaceful. The main plot is not clear. Apart from the satisfaction of running a hoarding business, I personally feel that I have no desire to follow it. There are not big logical problems between the plots, but interspersed with the description of farming, it seems a bit scattered. It is more friendly to readers who like pure farm stories, but the direction is too clear, making it difficult for ordinary readers to accept the slow pace of the plot.

Rating 7, preference 4. (Evaluated on the plot of the Yang family's brother and sister meeting the protagonist) Monastic writing. Pure journey to the west, no gods or prehistoric settings. The protagonist travels through the Zhou Dynasty to a prince, and later becomes a disciple of Lao Dan. Note: The title and content are very different, and the protagonist doesn't really win. The plot of Journey to the West should be relatively late. It doesn't look like there's much fighting and killing, it's a very peaceful monastic text. But it's too bland, not exciting at all, and I can't even tell a few plot points if I want to introduce it.

Rating 5, preference 6. (Comments on the plot of meeting Kushina and Naruto) Time travel, no system. The writing style is funny. The protagonist travels through time and becomes Choji's younger brother. Talented in physical skills (can be substituted for Yujiro Norma) Initially unable to use ninjutsu, he later developed a Saiyan-like mode. The amount of chakra is extremely large. The protagonist has the ability to sense the beliefs of others through chakra, which drives the third generation to make up his mind to kill Danzo. In addition, there are no conspiracy theories in the third generation. At most, they lack abilities. Danzo is entirely responsible. Note: The reason for the low ratings and preference scores lies in the plot of the psychic world, the true identity of the protagonist, and the main plot. And the protagonist used the excuse of dreaming to tell Jiraiya and Kushina all about the original plot. One issue that Naruto fans need to pay attention to is that novels and comics and animations are not the same thing after all. The emphasis is on the age of the protagonist. Although there is a funny contrast with the body shape, the plot of Danzo is still slightly out of place. As for the self-suppression plot mentioned in other reviews and the author's explanation, it is not a big problem. The protagonist's exercise will cause his body size to increase dramatically. Before finding a way to return to an ordinary person's body, it is logically reasonable to exercise less to avoid becoming a giant.

Rating 5, preference 7. (Evaluation at the end) Time travel, there are similar systems such as Goldfinger and Orphan. No heroine. Gain growth by creating strange stories and killing people. Slightly leaning towards the good camp, but not the Holy Mother. Partially invincible. Bad ending. Note: The low rating is mainly due to the poor ending. If you don't mind the collapse and ending in the later stages (the last ten or twenty chapters), this is a novel worth reading among the novels about creation and ghost stories. The two plots "It's Your Turn" and "Dead Relative" are really great, and the protagonist is miserable (not equivalent to a sadist).

Rating 6, preference 5. (Evaluated on the plot of joining the school team) Time travel, system, non-orphan, parents traveling around the world. Note: Highly recommended. Very rare subject matter and worth seeing. Nine chapters were defeated. It's not that the novel is bad, it's my own problem. Compared with the likes of Chess Soul and Yu-Gi-Oh, Yo-Yo has a natural flaw in that it cannot intuitively judge the outcome (analogous to Wenwu No. 1 And Wu Wu No. 2). So if I don't recall my childhood, I would feel embarrassed. The writing style of the novel itself is not bad, but the main reason is that readers will be embarrassed (please stop fighting - you can't kill someone like this!

Rating 6, preference 6. (Evaluated on the Arena plot) Travelers have systems. Contains settings for the game "Secret Cult Simulator". The protagonist has only seen the movie roughly and doesn't know much about the details of HP. The magic power is huge, and the magic riot repairs several blocks. I bought two wands. Ravenclaw. Also, Hermione is also a Ravenclaw. There are original female characters (should they be original?), But they are both female supporting characters like Hermione, and there is currently no tendency to be a female protagonist. Note: At the time of evaluation, it was a very tender seedling, and the score had no reference value for subsequent plots. I added it to the book list because I am interested in the setting of Tantric Buddhism. Out of curiosity, I read another book by the author, glanced at the ranking records, and said a few extra words. Regarding the secret sect, the author can take a look at the super righteous players of Qi Miao, which may provide some inspiration. Regarding HP, the starting point is the unfinished Harry Potter: Alchemy Black Technology that you can read. And if you don't mind the beauty, the second design of HP's Alien Land is of great reference value. Talking back to this book, the low score is because the arrangement of the plot before the start of school is a bit "big" (including but not limited to the length of the plot, the scope of the plot, the organizations and roles involved in the plot, and the role played by the protagonist) It took more than 100,000 words to enter the branch, which is too slow for an HP fan whose protagonist is a student of the same level as Harry Potter. Continued, the plot of the gladiatorial arena has been abandoned. Suddenly jumping into a completely unfamiliar large dungeon, the connection with the previous article is extremely weak, the focus of the description is on the wizard duel, and the author also plans to double-play, I am not even willing to complain more.

Rating 6, preference 5. (Comments on the plot of Yu Kona's death) The parallel world of Pokémon has no system. The protagonist's strength is comparable to that of humanoid Pokémon, extremely powerful. The introduction is quite clear. The protagonist of the war-time king is brought to the peaceful period two hundred years later by Celebi (this point about Celebi should not be considered a spoiler. Anyone familiar with Pokémon traveling through time will think of it (laughs) During the King Period, some Pokémon die of old age, while others survive. The Pokémon currently owned by the protagonist are Koga Ninja, Riding Dragon, Solo Scabbard, Dream Demon, Gengar, and Eevee. In peacetime battles, trainers do not leave the field, and the Pokémon skill pool is unlimited, but the types of skills used in each game are limited. Note: If you can accept the skill restrictions, this fan's description of the battle is wonderful. Unlike Ting Shu and the leader who use their skills with their imaginations, the competition in this novel is written in a more e-sports style, with more emphasis on the exchange of moves and the use of tactics. The plot of Gengar in the early stage was a bit stiff, which led to chaos in the combat power system. The author's writing skills are still lacking, and there are flaws in the description of the protagonist and the identity and background of the king. (The above two points are the reasons for the deduction of points) The protagonist in the previous life disappears, the main war faction dies in battle, and the alliance and the elves conclude a peace treaty. This may be the best outcome, but from a human perspective, it is somewhat unsatisfactory. If the death of the two kings was due to the mythical beast alone, then there would be a problem of balancing the combat power of humans and elves, and it would be difficult to explain past victories. If the main party is involved, it will be more, well, disgusting (this is purely a personal opinion, which is also the reason for the lower preference score) And then add the description of the ranger... I suspect that the author's consideration of war and peace is shallow. Although reasonable causes have been proposed, the evolution of the process and results has not been fully thought out.

Rating 7, preference 5. (Evaluation ends at the end of the island whale song copy) No system, no time travel and rebirth. The protagonist, a psychiatrist, has a witty streak. The protagonist's behavior is rather out-of-the-box. Original copy, thriller genre. No special abilities, no exchange system. After completing the dungeon, rewards include clues to the next dungeon and substitutions. Note: In terms of pure dungeon description and wits, it's pretty good. There is a fat male co-star who plays a bigger role. There are flaws in the description of the life experiences of some supporting characters (Purely personal opinion, mainly referring to the fire girl and the burly adopted son in the second copy) The author is playing with the idea that the protagonist has a mysterious identity but currently has amnesia (possibly), but at the beginning there are three dungeons in a row without any details being revealed, and a mysterious organization is also revealed. Moreover, the actual plot is unclear, many descriptions are vague, and several characters appear without beginning or end. In addition, the length of each copy is not short, which leads to the extreme incoherence of the protagonist's life story. If you read it as the protagonist, you will feel irritated.

Rating 4, preference 4. (Evaluated on Puppet Story) Travel through the parallel world of Ugly Country, the system, and the flow of masterminds behind the scenes. The system is damaged and initially dysfunctional. There are deviations in the parallel world, and some works (copied by the protagonist) do not appear. Make the script you write into reality and redeem the items that appear in the script through the system. Hiding his identity as a Hollywood screenwriter, there are ordinary drama plots and literary copy plots. The opening chapter features an original short story with a plot, followed by characters such as the clown and the demon hunter Geralt. Note: It looks okay at first glance, but with a little thought, the flaws can't be covered up. The two main reasons for the low rating are the incompatibility between the setting and the plot, and the ambiguity of the main plot. The reason for the low preference is that the protagonist is in the evil camp due to unclear goals. The setting doesn't fit the plot. The setting is that the screenwriter has no restrictions, but the protagonists all rely on thrillers. Maybe the author just wanted to write about this topic, but after thinking about it for a while, it just didn't make sense logically. Are there any benefits to turning your own world into a thriller? According to this setting, whether it is martial arts, fairy tales, or magic and fantasy, it is better for the protagonist himself than a weird one with a lot of side effects. If the author limits the thriller theme and wants to make the logic work, he has to change the setting. The main line is ambiguous. The system is damaged, there are no tasks, and the protagonist has no clear subjective initiative to become stronger. As a result, the main line of the full text is unclear. We can only see the protagonist constantly evolving the script, but the sense of feedback is very weak. The increase in the system currency value did not produce a real sense, and the protagonist's own strength increased slowly, which seemed to be aimless in evolving the script. Evil camp. Because the main plot is ambiguous, the protagonist's evolution script fails to form a clear goal. And the protagonist only chooses thriller-type scripts, causing many innocent casualties, and looks very evil (this depends on the individual, some readers think that he is an ugly Chinese, so he can be ignored) It is quite different from the orthodox dark flow. Being selfish and sacrificing blood to all sentient beings just to advance, I can barely accept it because I have a clear goal - to improve my strength. It's understandable to take pleasure in torture and killing (relatively speaking, it can be regarded as having a goal - one's own pleasure) However, the protagonist of this article has no purpose at all. When there are multiple choices (such as martial arts, magic, etc., Well, we have to go back to the setting and the plot that do not fit in here), he chooses a method that affects innocent ordinary people, which makes people feel that he is obviously doing evil. The main reason is that death is meaningless and unnecessary. In addition, it is said that many characters are NPCs embodied by the protagonist system, so morality does not need to be considered. But it is worth noting that whether they are embodied NPCs or not, the characters who survive in the end still exist in reality, such as the parents of the children in A Nightmare on Elm Street and the residents of the town. This is not mentioned in the article (perhaps I missed it), but if they disappear directly at the end of the script, the department will not ignore it. From this perspective, embodied characters can be considered real human beings.

Rating 6, preference 5. (Evaluation on the successful plot of the Olympic bid) Wenzhao Liu, reborn in 1997. No system, two heroines. He started playing Ximen Qing, and then released a single. In the early stage, I mainly released albums, focusing on the music scene. Become the king of Asia by singing songs. Accept Jay as your little brother. He also acted in TV series, but he was not the leading actor in the first few films. There are plots such as buying a courtyard house and investing in penguins. Note: The rating should be between 6 and 7, maybe 6.7? Although it's a little bit novice, it's understandable and not too embarrassing. The author has a subjective bias against Na Ying. Compared with traveling through parallel worlds, rebirth has a common problem: copying will cause moral guilt. Especially the protagonist copied too much, even copying Jay's songs and singing them back to Jay (this plot depends on the individual, some people may think this is more enjoyable) What I am personally very dissatisfied about is that the protagonist "created" the ancient Chinese style. The first song is "Not a Hero", then the songs by Jay and Xu Song, and then Chi Ling and so on.

Rating 4, preference 5. (Comments on the plot of Yu Weiliao's entry into the Qin Dynasty) The protagonist travels through the Qin Dynasty and the son of Yingzheng, Gongzi Gao. No system, no obvious cheats. As of the time of review, the plot has no female protagonist. Traveling through time, in the aftermath of the Lao Ai Rebellion, the Queen Mother is dead. The protagonist is eight years old at the time of time travel, and the plot remains in his teens for a long time. Note: A relatively immature novel. The writing and description itself is already a bit poor, and it seems even more awkward when combined with the chapter titles. The protagonist has a strong sense of identification with the Qin Dynasty and Ying Zheng, but the author did not set the stage well and it seemed very abrupt and unnatural. The plot arrangement is taken for granted, so it's a novice novel. The protagonist, Wen Tao, is superior to Zhuge in martial arts. Without cheats such as systems and plug-ins, it would be ridiculous. If you resist the flow of the system, you can just get a family heirloom that comes with its own space. It didn't describe how powerful he was in his previous life. After time travel, he was completely invincible. It was too frivolous.

Rating 5, preference 3. (Evaluated on the plot of Establishing Black Water) Rebirth, no system, female supporting character*N. Hong Kong in the 1970s. Before being reborn, he was in the same hotel with many big guys, but after being reborn, he gained memories. Copying, painting, and finance can be done in multiple languages. It started with newspapers, then finance, and dominated the entire industry. In the early stage, I copied the book "Quest for Qin" and the comics "Pokémon", "Douluo", "Dragon Ball" and "One Piece". In the mid-term, global acquisitions will be carried out. Note: Black bread mixed with sawdust barely satisfies hunger. The writing is on the lower side. The fragments are very abrupt, purely for the sake of fragmentation. The emotional scene is extremely bad, because it is not a pure vase, and when there are many people, it is more likely to trigger a minefield. Personally speaking, the manga is a terrible plot. In order to defeat his opponents, the protagonist goes crazy in the comics industry, resulting in bloodshed and violence. "Dragon and Tiger Gate" was considered a "negative energy" comic and was banned, while the protagonist's comic is a "positive energy" comic. I also said that there is more than one female supporting character in this novel, and they are also negative. Grading is better than this too. Tang San's behavior. Especially for an online article. I personally thought the protagonist was doing something evil by doing this. In addition, there is a visual risk that this article will be unfinished.

Rating 6, preference 4. (Evaluated based on the plot of almost being tricked by a senior's letter) The protagonist is a time traveler, born as a Muggle, with parents, a Yingyuan, and no system. The opening plot is in the year of the secret room, and the protagonist is in fourth grade. Instead of joining the trio, change the original plot. A self-created character, Medusa, the daughter of Slytherin (no connection to the mythology), has been resurrected. Get a portrait of Ravenclaw as a teacher. Not Black Lion Yard, Dumbledore. Note: Slightly darker, but not a conspiracy theory about Dumbledore the White Devil. Just talking about the early stage, the number of protagonists in this book is Sharkman, which is equivalent to that of four or five fan books combined. That's not to say that Sharkman is not good, but the style of painting seems a bit biased. The creation of the character Medusa was not very good, too abrupt, and too powerful. After the protagonist is targeted by Medusa, he feels very powerless.

Rating 6, preference 6. (Evaluated on the plot of Vampire Knife and Blood Rain) The protagonist is a time traveler, an invincible flow. Similar to Wulin Gaiden. The leader of the Demon Cult faked his death and retired, opening an inn in Jinling City. The waiter, the cook, etc. Are all martial arts masters, but they don't know that the protagonist knows martial arts. There are many reclusive masters in Jinling City, and some of them know the identity of the protagonist. The plot has no obvious main line and is similar to a unit drama. Note: In response to requests from some readers, the author often writes separate chapters about things encountered in real life. The protagonist is a stingy shopkeeper, and he is very vividly portrayed. But as the number of words increases, the degree gradually becomes too much. It will be interesting if you first read hundreds of thousands of words, but if you read too much, it will become boring. Especially when the protagonist is alone, he still shows greed for money, which makes the label greedy and stingy no longer the protagonist's disguise, but his true character, which makes him look particularly unworthy. The one-unit drama, no main plot, and fixed main and supporting roles lead to a weak plot in the later stages and make people aesthetically tired. In addition, what I hate personally is Japanese martial arts. Playing Japanese martial arts was a special feature of that period. After Taiwan and Hong Kong were taken over, the plots written/drawn by writers in the place where they lived were motivated by a desire to be strong, and the plots were most obvious in Hong Kong comics (personal opinion) Influenced by those legacy, this article writes about Japanese martial arts as very strong, which makes people very disgusted.

Rating 6, preference 7. (Evaluation at the end) The protagonist travels through the Spring and Autumn Period and the Jin Dynasty's small aristocracy, climbing up through military exploits. No system, no female protagonist (meaning there is basically no female plot). Conquered Qin and replaced Qin. He led the four families to be divided into Jin Dynasties, and then the four Jin families were unified. The process of seeking a country is very upright, and it is not the kind of usurpation of the country like the Sima Jin Dynasty. At the end of the plot, the four Jin Dynasties were reunited, and Qin and part of Zheng were swallowed up at the same time. The idea of ​​grand unification was proposed, but due to objective circumstances, it was not put into practice. Note: There is less space on scientific and technological farming, mainly about strategy. The protagonist has a very strong subjective judgment on the Song Dynasty, and is seriously involved in private goods. In the mid-term, the operation of replacing Qin and dividing Jin was proposed, but the plot was very long and dragging. The finish is flawed.

Rating 5, preference 5. (Evaluated on the plot of "Fengjue") A modern Pokémon breeder who travels to the ancient Pokémon world. The main theme is farming. The use of evolution stones has not been discovered, and the production of Poke Balls has not been invented, let alone mega, Z-moves, and Gigantamax. Whether it is development or decoration, it can give people enough expectations. Note: A lower rating means the author went astray. The subject matter is very good, but apart from the farming theme, the author feels that it is going in the direction of "animal conservation".

Rating 4, preference 5. (Evaluated on the scenario of the dream demon being seriously injured and escaping) The protagonist, a time traveler, has no system and has a biological sister, but there is not much description. Goldfinger refers to past life memories, especially those related to history. The characters before time travel should be students of history. In the modern setting of another world, there is a chance of dropping a world bead when you kill a monster, and you can fuse the world bead to become a summoner. People from other worlds cannot remember the fusion process of the world beads, but the protagonist can. The fusion of world beads is a historical event experienced in the original world. Turn the map, and the alien earth turns to the Yuanqiu world. The background is relatively sewn, quasi-feudal, but modern technology exists. Note: A summoner's call in a non-traditional sense. Summoned historical figures can exist in personal space/secret mandala, which favors farming style. The blue bar does not recover all the time. It only recovers half of it in the middle of each month. Normally, it can only be recovered by taking drugs. Turning the map, the plot direction is less logical. Some plot arrangements are also very abrupt and without purpose. (This evaluation is a bit personal. There are two kinds of branch lines that I accept. One is used by players to ambush pens like Super Justice, and the other is used by super-dimensional warlocks to fill in the world view. And many branches/dungeons in this book do not have much functionality.) The description of the fusion world bead is a bit confusing. Sometimes it takes completely playing a historical figure to achieve perfect fusion, and sometimes it takes being more than a historical figure to achieve super-perfect fusion. The judging angle is only whether the protagonist/author likes the historical figure.