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Mk is currently stable. This author feels that the settings in terms of cultivation are good, but it is easy to wander, change maps and even protagonists randomly. I hope that after the torture, I can be more careful and cultivate first.

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Mk thought about it and found that he rarely reads online articles without cheats recently. After all, it is more fun to have cheats. But in this book, apart from having a firmer will to seek immortality, there is no advantage at all in traveling through the past. However, the plot is very compact, which can barely offset the shortcomings of not having a golden finger. At least it allows me to watch it. In addition, judging from the title of the book, the name of the author, and the naming of various martial arts and magic weapons in the book, there are many shadows of "Immortal Gourd". It has a classic fairy tale style. The introduction and description fit the content of the story, but the writing is a bit procrastinating. The protagonist's IQ is a bit erratic. It can be considered a straw novel. After all, in the past two years, there are fewer and fewer authors who can write stories in a down-to-earth manner without spouting bad jokes.

Let's not even call it green. Many people are so glass-hearted that they call themselves green at every turn. But the plot is really off-topic, and I initially thought the writing was okay, but the more I read, the more scattered it became. And I don't like this kind of dark cultivator. There are no good people in the world. The protagonist can't stand it, and he doesn't have good intentions when doing things. He is indifferent whenever he sees evil things, and waits until there is benefit to take action, and he still gets a vote of gratitude, which looks disgusting.

Mk I saw it on a book online list last month and thought it was pretty good. The protagonist is reborn in the world of immortal cultivators. As a doctor, he has both sons and daughters. Although he is ordinary, he is considered happy. However, mortals suffer disaster due to the battle between gods and immortals. The whole county is wiped out. The protagonist who is lucky enough to survive loses all his SAN value because he sees the true nature of the immortal cultivator. From then on, the golden finger was opened, and his life was reopened and he entered the next life. He inherited the talents and skills of the previous life, and became the only son of the escort agency and a talented warrior. He was spotted by the dark son general who harbored the rebellious prince, and was recruited as his son-in-law and became a rebel. At present, there is a formal rebellion, and the protagonist leads the army to attack the city. Why I read this book: Like the previous one, I was also attracted by the life simulator system, but this one is more like the reincarnation and inheritance flow of the Taiwu Scroll than a life simulator. My personal impression of this book is average. But the beginning is eye-catching. Lao Baifeng's writing style is quite exciting until he is recruited. Why not read this book: Reincarnation and Inheritance. Why the impression is so-so? It is because after writing for a long time, it is easy to have feelings for this life and the people around you. Reincarnation and restarting will make people feel uncomfortable when everything is gone. If you speed up the progress and write in detail, this emotion can be relieved. But in fact, although the previous book I complained about was too fast and easy to write, this one is the other extreme. The progress is too slow. The secondary plots such as rebellion-related plots that can be fast-forwarded are also close-ups. This is unnecessary. It directly eliminates the weird smell of Jokoji Temple. Moreover, the story is not as interesting as before, and the interesting golden finger of the life simulator also has a very low sense of existence. I think it will greatly weaken readers' enthusiasm for reading. The other is the Ke type Immortal Cultivation Style. The author said in a single chapter that the protagonist will be like other Immortal Cultivators. As the cultivation level becomes more and more indescribable, it becomes dehumanized. I personally don't like this very much. Generally speaking, food and grass - between food and grass, I will make a comment later depending on the situation.

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Mk is very good, the best mortal book in recent times. Goldfinger is not that perverted, but has many possibilities. The protagonist is an ascetic character, and the portrait description is quite good. The several family elders who have appeared so far have very distinct images. The author has some skills. It has reached a turning stage. The plot seems to be very good for the time being, and we are waiting for the follow-up development.

MK Golden Finger was born out of the "automatic cultivation of skills" stream, but it is not limited to this, and the development is very interesting; as a fairy tale, the combat description is slightly insufficient

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When the female partner and her father were being deceived, I was still sighing. Not only was this woman stupid, but she was also genetically stupid. It must be very difficult to live. Then I was curious about what would happen next, so I read the chapter. Then I discovered that the author actually went away (.-`Ω´-) I definitely wouldn't have guessed this plot development. Stop it first.

Compared with the previous book, it has improved a lot. The plot is much more rounded, the connection is comfortable to watch, and the setting seems to be self-consistent. In addition to the writing style, this is better than 99% of the authors. Cultivation books are particularly complicated. There are so many skills and realms that need to be set up. Eliminating those that are directly applied. The author has learned from many sources and integrated them. This is also a big difficulty. It is especially difficult to write brilliantly. The current layout is also very good. The main world is clear and turbid, and it is difficult for the human race to survive. There are powerful people who can create sealed mysteries, which can occupy the land and exclude aliens. In the contemporary era, the human race has two countries. I don't know how big the outside world is. It must be very big. I don't know if there are other countries. Then the protagonist's country has been in the country for three hundred years, and the dynasty is at its peak. It begins to train troops aggressively, and wants to invade another country, but there is not enough money, so it reforms the world, which causes chaos at the bottom. Only the royal family, big aristocratic families, and the national religious sects can sit back and watch the situation, while Jianghu sects and small aristocratic families have to go out and fight. Then there was a cult that caused trouble and sought profits, and because of a major event in the past, the royal family behind the scenes could not fully control it. Under such a situation, the protagonist develops step by step. This pattern is very good. It has a clear main line and a stable setting. The step-by-step evolution in the future is also reasonable. Such a complete layout cannot be accomplished by ordinary people. Of course, the current setting is only a complete one. If you want to write it step by step, it will be more difficult. Let's see. Before it was put on the shelf, I mainly wrote about the protagonist, the military strategist, and most of the others were nouns. If I can write about the style in the later stage, it would be great.

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Apart from the gimmick of a life restart simulator in the first two chapters, it is actually equivalent to a time travel + rebirth with a useless protagonist with a small system, a semi-invincible and semi-upgraded fantasy novel with unlimited elements from the heavens, pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. On the one hand, he has the soul of a modern migrant worker, and on the other hand, he understands the original experience and destiny of this identity. The protagonist has 100 selected talents, the most important of which are 5 red-level talents. [Protagonist Halo] Let the protagonist pick up and eat the Renren Fruit, Phantom Beast Species, and Giant Buddha form shortly after he was born, and awaken the god-level physique of the Giant Buddha. However, he was considered a loser because his muscles and veins were congenitally blocked and he was unable to cultivate his true energy, so he was assigned to the handyman's courtyard. [Escaped One] allows the protagonist to see other people's life scripts. Not only can he gain huge gains by changing other people's fate, but he can also seize other people's opportunities before they know it. [Luck from Heaven] allows the protagonist to be recruited by the World Tree as a scavenger, and to complete tasks in the world to earn merit and exchange items. The invincible footwork and movement skills of [Kuafu Zhuri] and the martial arts skills of [Infinite] also have extremely powerful tactical effects. Evil spirits are rampant in the main world. The original protagonist died at the age of 15, and the Daizen Temple where he lived was also destroyed. Because the protagonist in this life wants to become stronger and change his destiny against the will of heaven. Originally, the story structure and goal motivation were quite clear, and the setting of the evil spirit body in the main world also had some novel ideas, but it couldn't stand the random elements that were thrown into it. The protagonist's strength and personality are both unstable. When the character is too big, he suppresses it, and then opens a new one. His actions are sometimes stable and sometimes reckless. Just like when kneading noodles, the portions are not accurately grasped. If there is too much dough, add water, and if there is too much water, add more noodles.

Mt low version with lime Martial Saint, you can see it, but nothing is right. There is foreshadowing and there is excitement, but the two have little to do with each other. And as soon as it felt good, before it was exhausted, the author pressed it down. When Li Shi Wu Sheng Shuang was playing, he didn't write much, but his emotions were on point. To sum it up, it can only be said that there is a difference in writing skills.

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Mt is a good book, and the writing is smooth and non-toxic. The protagonist's simulator is similar to unlimited dungeons, and he is even more cruel to others than himself. The abilities obtained are common to both reality and simulators, with very few restrictions. It's been a long time since I've seen a new author who arranges cheats. They all have various improvements, and it seems like they can't write without them. Although the author has restrictions on cheats, you can only bring three in the next copy, but in real life, all of them are available. This will not offend Shuang Wen Party. After all, you can download the dungeon an unlimited number of times, and you will get benefits every time you kill monsters, even if you don't clear the level. It doesn't matter if there are restrictions on playing the game. Edit, it turns out it's not a new author. I said such smooth writing cannot be written by a new author, no matter how talented he is. You can have talent in writing, but not in writing.

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Mt brushed on January 6, 2021, 51 chapters in progress Advantages: A fairly good weapon spirit novel, similar to "I Am a Demonic Sword". It generally tells the story of a protagonist who travels through time and becomes the weapon spirit of the Soul Banner, and falls in love with and kills his master. Compared with traditional immortality novels, this type of novel downplays the element of fighting monsters and upgrading. The protagonist is more of a passerby, and the readers follow the protagonist's perspective to see the love and hatred of the owner of the Soul Flag. The life experiences of the owners of each soul flag are either ordinary or ordinary, intertwined with the lives of little people in the world of immortality. If you have never read this kind of novel, you can try reading it, it will be a very novel experience. Follow the protagonist's perspective to see the ups and downs of the people at the bottom of the world of immortality. Disadvantages: In order to develop the plot, the author did not kill some villains in time that should have been killed long ago. The story of the second master Li Shusheng and the third master Xiang Baihu felt extremely aggrieved, and they were worried that there would be a feeding tendency in the subsequent plot. Read carefully

A new book by the author of "The First Seeker". The original protagonists Bai Mo and Bai Laomo step into a ring of time and travel through life, constantly losing and regaining their memory. The story begins with coming to the world of "The Story of a Mortal's Cultivation of Immortality" and becoming Li Feiyu ( Li Feiyu), saw Han Li's Heavenly Palm Vase and Ning Fan's Yin-Yang Lock in "The Demon", obtained part of the memory of the past life, and came to the Yin-Yang Sect with the Immortal Ascension Order to start troubles, preparing for mortals without spiritual roots to cultivate immortality, and gradually began to imagine...