Although it Has Lasted for a Long Time, the Glory Remains - a Trial Reading of a New Book of Pure Fantasy

历时虽久,辉煌依旧——纯玄幻新书试读

06(3 linked)2y ago

Pure fantasy: The fantasy category that does not include various fan works. The flower collection link (it's so straightforward, haha): Although I have more than ten years of experience in online writing, my knowledge is still shallow. I feel that I am not capable of commenting on new books. I would like to ensure that your attitude is serious and rigorous. I hope you will understand any omissions. I hope you can send flowers and see the stars. The evaluation rules are as follows: divided into five dimensions: setting, plot, logic, writing, and daily updates; each dimension is rated on a scale of 1-5, corresponding to the five levels of extremely poor, poor, medium, good, and excellent. Setting: It needs to be able to justify itself; based on 3 points, it can fluctuate according to fun, freshness, etc. Plot: Mainly divided into two dimensions, passionate, refreshing, light and funny. If the plot tends to the former, the score will be based on the sense of enjoyment, and if the plot tends to the latter, the score will be based on the fun. If it has both, the score for the high scorer will be appropriately increased. Logic: Score based on whether the words and deeds of the main and supporting characters, past events, details, etc. Are reasonable. Writing style: Scoring is based on whether there are typos, whether the semantic expression is clear, whether the sentence segmentation is reasonable, and other factors that affect the ease and comfort of reading. Daily updates: Rating based on the number of words updated daily, 4-6K is 3 points, stopped updates are 0 points.

This Copy is Unscientific2

Xinfeng

574K8.523

This copy is too dangerous. Blue Star is classified as an F-level dungeon for other creatures to roam, have fun, and complete tasks to receive rewards. And it is also the lowest and most despised copy. Lin Fan: You guys, you still want to play with me here? Still want to have fun? Still want to do whatever you want? In the process of him becoming the ultimate boss of Blue Star, countless descendants trembled. Looking back in old age, it was the fear of being dominated. Lin Fan: Thank you for making my life colorful. Thank you sincerely. Welcome to the Blue Star family.

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Tags: Panel flow; imaginative and funny. Highlights: The protagonist is a native, and the world he lives in is a copy of another world. This novel setting is definitely the highlight. While the protagonist can see his own panel, he can also see the panel of the creature doing the task. Goldfinger is also very novel. Plot: The protagonist's world was developed into a copy of another world (Spinach Star). At the same time, the function of the protagonist's golden finger also begins to manifest: the protagonist can defeat the alien creatures that come to do the task and plunder their attributes. As a result, the protagonist goes further and further on the road to maintaining world peace and fighting against alien creatures. Authors and updates: An existence beyond Level 5. The cumulative word count of the work exceeds 2KW, and its credibility is self-evident. 6K updates per day. Disadvantages: There are typos and missing words. To sum up, the ratings are as follows: Settings: 5 Plot: 5 Logic: 5 Writing style: 4 Daily updates: 3

Immortality Begins by Picking up Martial Arts Fragments4

New Pavilion

7K0

Gu Beijiang had been living in another world for three years, but in the end he was kicked out of the martial arts gym, and someone wanted to break one of his legs. In anger, he decided not to live in peace anymore. After defeating the enemy, he picked up the martial arts fragments dropped by the opponent and activated the golden finger. Absorbing fragments can directly gain part of the enemy's cultivation level. Or some martial arts experience. Even the other party's luck! From then on, Gu Beijiang began to use any means, spreading lime, poisoning... In order to win, he did everything possible, even bullying the small... An opponent cried: "It's really no match, why don't I just admit defeat?" A friend said: "Brother Gu, I really want to be the loser. Convinced, there is no need to compete anymore. "Junior brother, can't I do this for you? I really can't beat you."... Gu Beijiang sighed: "It's just a test, what's the matter?" "I just want to bully the small with the big"

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Tags: System flow; cool writing. Highlights: Gold Finger: After defeating the opponent (by any means), you can obtain part of the opponent's martial arts cultivation or skills; It provides logical rationality for the protagonist's various devious, deceptive, provocative, and other behaviors, and adds to the excitement; it can be said that both excitement and logic are taken into account. Plot: The protagonist traveled to a world of high martial arts, and under the guidance of an old hunter, he improved his physical fitness and practical ability. After that, he went to the martial arts hall to learn martial arts, but was kicked out of the martial arts hall due to certain reasons. In a battle, he discovered the role of the golden finger and went further and further on the road of not respecting martial ethics. Authors and updates: Level 5 writer; both completed works are around one million words. 5K updates per day. Disadvantages: The settings of Goldfinger are not clear enough: When the protagonist defeats the opponent, it is not clear what state the opponent must be in (is it okay if he is sleeping?) So that the protagonist can gain martial arts gains. To sum up, the ratings are as follows: Settings: 4 Plot: 5 Logic: 5 Writing style: 5 Daily updates: 3

I Use the Martial Arts Virtual Machine to Practice, and I Am Thousands of Years Ahead5

Disciple Of Tianxiu

72K0

Lin Xuan was born with damage in his mother's womb and was unable to practice martial arts. But he was also born with a martial arts virtual machine, which could set various parameters, practice virtually, and obtain the best training plan. At the same time, you can also get virtual points, add points to upgrade, and improve your martial arts strength! "Personal related information has been imported..." "The personal cultivation method directory is imported and matches the virtual cultivation database..." "The virtual training is completed, and the following two red training problems, four green training problems, and one white training problem are found. Do you want to introduce new training parameters and conduct a new simulation?" ... "You get 200 new martial arts virtual points, which can be used to upgrade your personal attributes, skill proficiency and other related parameter settings!" Lin Xuan: I use a virtual machine to practice martial arts, and I am thousands of years ahead of my colleagues!

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Tags: system flow. Highlights: The system is relatively innovative: You can obtain points by loading various skills, and then use the points to increase various indicators such as attack, practice skills, etc.; By inputting the practitioner's information, you can simulate the practitioner's combat effectiveness and other aspects. In an environment that is almost like modern society, the main teaching content in schools at all levels is martial arts; it can be regarded as a bright spot. Plot: The protagonist is an infant, born unable to use martial arts, but protected by the system, he becomes invincible at the same level. Plot prediction: Later, with the help of the system, you should improve your physical fitness (such as *obtaining a special skill) to a level where you can practice *the skills on your own. Then, with the help of the system, you can navigate the world. Authors and updates: Level 3 writer; the number of words at the beginning and end reaches 300+W. 6K updates per day. Disadvantages: There are typos. To sum up, the ratings are as follows: Settings: 4 Plot: 4 Logic: 4 Writing style: 4 Daily updates: 3