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Bonus points: orthodoxy, writing, and scenes Point deduction items: rhythm, slightly literary youth ⭐⭐⭐Samsung Recommended The author has indeed done some research on the fundamentalist Grammar online articles, and the description can be regarded as a pure Grammar flavor. I strongly recommend it to those who have read the original work of Ai Craftsman. It makes people's sanity drop drastically. The writing style is also very powerful. The scenes and pictures described are very strong, making people feel that they are immersed in it. However, the rhythm is really not a web novel, the pace is very slow, and there are a lot of psychological descriptions. This kind of writing method is actually not easy to write in the future. If you are not a reader of the original work, I would not recommend it, but if you are a fan of this style, you will definitely like it very much. I think it has the potential to become a niche masterpiece like "Marne's Daily Life".

Bonus points: image quality, atmosphere Deduction items: sacrificing female characters, some plots seem redundant or forced, and split from front to back ⭐⭐⭐Samsung Recommended The male protagonist is in a world where the stars are about to return and are on the verge of destruction. The early writing is very restrained, and the various cases are thrilling and attractive; the author's picture description is very strong, giving people an immersive feeling; the description of the collapsing world is also very detailed, and you can see that the world is gradually collapsing and heading towards chaos. At the same time, the author is also a master of details, and many plots are advanced through details. But It's the author's abuse of the instant-death rules that really leaves people speechless. The bug ability to instantly die and cover the whole world can completely destroy a world. At the same time, the protagonist really doesn't feel like he has grown. Every time he progresses a little, he is forced back to his original position. The ending is also very unsatisfactory. Since the background has been changed once, there are some minor bugs in some places, which do not affect reading.

Bonus points: settings, writing Negative sub-items: front and back separation, details ⭐⭐⭐⭐Four-star recommendation There are too few articles that can describe the feeling of Ke type. In some books, the understanding of Ke type is that it has a tentacle that can hit people. It is not easy for this book to write about the desperate, crazy and incomprehensible feeling of Ke type. In the early days of Ke + Medicine, I originally thought it was a story about looking at mutations and changes that are unreasonable and beyond cognition from a medical perspective, inheriting the legacy of another world through the system, and using scalpels and human wisdom to fight strange phenomena. In the early stage, it looked at mutations and changes from a medical perspective, and it was still very novel when it was even possible to cure patients with initial mutations. However, it is not realistic to fight monsters beyond cognition with mortal wisdom. It can be seen that the role of medical skills in the later period is getting less and less, and even to the point where the gods are hidden, they still follow the old path of using spells. The system is just the key to open the door to the unknown world. At the same time, the details in many places cannot withstand scrutiny. The portrayal of official institutions has always been strange, and their positions have also changed due to real needs. They do not look like a large organization at all.

Bonus points: settings, author persona Negative points: The writing style, the two-dimensional flavor is a bit heavy, and the beginning lacks polish. ⭐⭐Two stars can satisfy your hunger The male protagonist is the remnant soul of a time traveler and can strengthen himself by absorbing the souls of others. It's quite charming. As a remnant soul, it is an instinct to absorb spiritual bodies to strengthen oneself. Through growth and evolution, one becomes increasingly powerful, and therefore naturally stands on the opposite side of human beings. And at the end of the first world, he said through the protagonist's mouth that there is a Negri in everyone's heart. However, the author likes to add some inexplicable and strange plots or neta. Some of the jokes are quite interesting if you understand them, such as Eldridge or Chen Guohan throwing an iron ball. However, such jokes should not be interspersed into the plot, such as the protagonist's design in the first world. It tells the story of a girl who saves the country like Jeanne d'Arc and her deputy who goes astray, but the existence of this girl and his deputy makes people feel meaningless most of the time. The first world ended hastily. The story of these two people did not leave a deep impression on me, I just felt that it was in the water.

Bonus points: creativity, atmosphere, description Deduction items: typos, part of the plot ⭐⭐⭐⭐Four-star recommendation (possible improvement) Before Daogui, Foxtail's books were written. From this book, we can see that Foxtail already has considerable talents. Unfortunately, the subject matter is a bit unpopular, but I still like this niche subject matter very much. It feels very fresh. I really like the first half of the story of Earthsea, especially the part where the protagonist falls into the sea, which is still very impressive to me. Compared with Huo Wang's confusion, Charles's pain is more restrained and accumulated deeper. Therefore, his pain is more difficult for readers to empathize with than Li Huowang's, but when the accumulated despair explodes, it makes people fascinated. The crazy and desperate atmosphere of the Ke system runs throughout this book, and the portrayal of the protagonist's heart is very comfortable to watch. There may be a part of the story on the surface that is a little uncomfortable to watch, but the story after this part will return to the previous level, making it very comfortable to watch. It seems that the author wants to revise a little content recently, and it is very likely that he will go further. But there are a lot of typos.

"The Tao Weird Immortal" Bonus points: atmosphere, creativity, rhythm Deduction items: emotional scenes, typos ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐Five-star recommendation Dao Gui is really not bad, and Foxtail is a real ghost. The popularity of this book is not due to the writing or detailed setting, but to the atmosphere of constant struggle in the unknown and confusion. Watching the protagonist struggle and climb higher and higher in this weird and twisted world, from a tall man carrying the sky to becoming a tall man himself, watching the indistinguishable Huo Zi become the painful tall man holding the sky today, this kind of sadness and pain is also passed from the protagonist to the readers, which makes people want to stop. Being able to change the elemental demons in reality into the Keweixianxian in the book is already very attractive. What's more, the rhythm of this book can be described in one word. It is really too little water. The whole process is one event after another, one climax after another, which makes people feel more and more comfortable as they read. Whenever you suspect that Foxtail has reached his limit, he can always do bigger and better work, which is really exciting. There are just too many typos