Messy Food and Grass[all Completed]

8.3/10 Suitable for readers who have common sense about group running. A prehistoric novel in the form of a running group, in which the protagonist travels through the prehistoric times with the soul of Sic Niang In the early stage, the focus was on narrating events, with Sic Niang stabbing her in the back every day. I guess the author couldn't bear it anymore, and later he used normal prehistoric literature as the mainstream, and the dice was used as a plug-in to determine the direction of the story. There is no problem with the whole text, but some inappropriate writing methods in the early stage were revised later. I think the author's understanding of group leadership is very good. There is still room for improvement in character creation, but there are no other issues

8.8/10 A very complete virtual online game rebirth article What initially attracted me was not the way the Fourth Natural Disaster was written, but the solid data flow skills of this book. Only later did I realize that the writing, plot, outline, and cool points were all very online and could be called a hexagonal warrior. Here I would like to praise the relationship between the players and the protagonist in this book. Among all the fourth natural disaster books, the players in this book are the best treated I have ever seen. It is also very reasonable to gradually break away from the players and take the main line in the middle and later stages. The direct game between several major forces is also remarkable. Overall, it's an enjoyable book that you can read with your mind.

7.0/10 Grain and grass passing line It is recommended to give up thinking when reading Bai Shuang's article. The routine is single, but the whole is complete and non-toxic. Good news: We fixed the issue where the combat power ceiling in the Pokémon world was too low We fixed the problem of the Pokémon world lacking main lines and realms. Bad news: After the repair, we found that it really had nothing to do with Pokémon. The advantage of this book is that there are no poisonous points. It highlights a dark blue bonus point. It is really enjoyable to see the various upgrades and combinations of skills of the pet beasts. The shortcoming is that the routines are simple, and the secret realm that limits the realm is something that gives the protagonist resources. I can't bear to do it once or twice. It's really boring to keep doing it. Various competitions also impose realm restrictions. In the end, they are all Academy Cups. I have to fight all the way to outer space. I am still playing the Academy Cup... The author still has a lot of ways to go in promoting the plot.

7.9/10 Points will be deducted for the rushed ending. At first I thought it was the spiritual energy recovery upgrade stream Later, he tended to the historical stream of Yashe Later, he rewrote the myth and took a light and funny route To be honest, it has been pretty good up to this point, but the author obviously made the stall too big and revised the outline many times, which ultimately resulted in many things being useless. Including the emotional line that takes the innocent route but ends up with a stomachache The book was written with care, and you can tell, but the oversized outline and the causal lines of stacking boxes in the later stages really detracted from the senses and deducted a lot of points. Overall it's a good food

8.0/10 Outstanding graduates of Azkaban Unique and delicate handling of the plot of the original work The protagonist is a master criminal + specialization in potions + specialization in black magic Well, the latter two are not as valuable as the first one. The overall feeling is still very good, there are no major shortcomings ps: The protagonist's system is a good contender for the worst system at the starting point I guarantee with my personality that this is not a systematic novel.

Rating 6.6/10 It is recommended to read the first 250 chapters until the Kingdom of Heaven plan. This section is well written. Evaluation: Don't make evaluations to avoid being criticized.

I thought about it for a long time The final decision is 9.0/10 It's very good. There is no doubt that the author put a lot of thought into this book, so that you can see such dense and wonderful highlights. This book can be adapted directly into comics without any modifications. It's a pity When a novel can be adapted into a comic without modification, it also means that the structure of the book is not suitable for display in the genre of a novel. The dense event structure is very expressive in comics and animations, but it is not very suitable as a web text. Fortunately, this book is a fanfic, so the original scenes can be used as very substantial material for readers to fantasize and fill in. It can be seen that the author was in great pain during the middle period of writing this book. If he had taken more time off to think about it in the middle period of this book, maybe the book could go further. (Especially several plots in the science and technology group are meaningless in my opinion) Flaws do not cover up strengths In many aspects, this book has reached a level that can be compared with the original work, and has blazed its own path.

8.2/10 Squid's random works As always, I was arranged all the way This book only talks about the three biggest issues 1. To make a table of dumplings for a dish of vinegar, there is only one answer to the mystery in the whole book, which is itself a problem 2. The protagonist is not mentally ill enough (Squid's portrayal of mental illness is obviously problematic) 3. The article is too long compared to the overall structure (a large part of the reason is question 1) There are too many issues to find fault with in this book, but since the author has mentioned most of them in the summary, I am too lazy to mention them in detail. It's quite satisfying to watch it all at once without following the update. Haha, I was indeed right in choosing not to pursue more squid books.

8.8/10 A very good Conan fanfic, in a sense it really goes beyond the original work. The protagonist works as an undercover agent in a winery, constantly handling cases between the main line and his own emotional line. The author's portrayal of Shura Chang is indeed good, and the case is also well conceived. He has made very reasonable magical changes based on the original work. The disadvantage is that the author himself is too entangled in some choices, resulting in a very discrete plot rhythm (this is also related to the original Conan)

Rating 8.9/10 Rating: Daily to the ceiling of fans I have discussed the two directions of fan fiction, either digging into the details of daily life, or building a new platform to expand the world view of the original work. This book is the ultimate in the previous direction. It digs deep into details and portrays the characters throughout. It expresses the author's attitude of striving for excellence in every detail of daily life. The whole book has a strong sense of originality, and you may even have the illusion that this is the original work. I highly recommend reading it. Talking about the shortcomings as usual, there is a lack of climax. The climax of the book only appears in the last few scenes when facing the Muggle conflict, but it ends abruptly within two chapters. In order to highlight the personality charm of other characters in the entire later plot, the protagonist's positioning is somewhat tool-humanized (a common shortcoming of similar humanities that does not change the main plot (this is also the reason why I have always been criticized for not changing the main plot)) As a fanfic, it has touched a boundary that is difficult to cross. I look forward to the author's next book. After all, the writing style, the details, the thinking and description of the characters cannot be deceiving, and I have no doubt that this book will not be the end. Ps: Don't click on all the places in this book that involve CP. In fact, the emotional lines written by the author are quite good, but I can't bear to tear them up.

7.1/10 A classic among novice writers Go away and tell all authors clearly, practice your writing more. Once your writing is good, you can write whatever you want. Even if you think of a plot at the last moment, it will be very interesting. Protagonist evaluation: Chaos Evil Big Muscle Tyrant Worldview matryoshka dolls are meaningless Anyway, the writing is easy to write and it's fun to read. There's not much to say.

6.3/10 Actually ok But there was a huge and bad rhythm out of control in chapters 150-200. To be honest, in this day and age, if you choose to create an original plot after writing the original plot line, aren't you asking for death... In addition, if you write a fan story at a high speed, it would be strange if readers don't run away. Personally, I suggest that the author consider writing Infinite Stream or Zhutian with this style of writing. It can be seen that the plot line is well thought out and organized, but the world view is really bad and not interesting. The author's writing is online, the plot structure is compact and non-toxic. As long as you can survive the boring 150-200, this book is still good

8.4/10 I sometimes think that the original fan fiction must be to make regrets turn into perfection and make beauty more interesting. Based on this concept, a large number of fan works are considered by me to be "standard literature" This book follows this principle. The overall battle is more game-oriented, and it incorporates some elements of urban literature but is not obtrusive. It is well integrated with the advancement of the plot. The shortcoming is that the author's writing style and foreshadowing of the big scenes and burning directions are not enough.

7.8/10 In order to read the book, I first played the card checker, but the card checker looked tired and had no rules, so I went to make up a few rounds. The amount of refills was a bit large, and there was no player perspective experience, so I played MD, built a high-level deck, learned how to play, played two seasons, and reached Platinum One. Okay, I can finally continue reading the novel... The experience is very good, but this is not just the experience of this book, so I can't give an accurate review. All I can say is, Yu-Gi-Oh! Is so fun, come and play cards!

8.7/10 Woo woo woo, main tune, my main tune No explanation, this is an out-of-the-box classic work, just a daily quarrel with fans of the original work It suits my brainwave very well

6.5/10 I haven't finished reading the rest... (Just read the first half 7.7/10) Infinite Flow helps people realize their dreams. The core is to subvert the world's style of painting by relying on nonsensical decisive skills. It is enough to read the first half of the book. A typical outline cannot be high and low. The whole job is indeed difficult to write, but that is not a reason to give up treatment. Since I haven't read them all, I won't make too many comments. However, it is recommended that the author leaves enough room for expansion in the world structure of the next book. In my personal opinion, this book can consider transformation in the medium term.

Rating 9.2/10 An unexpected gift Save everything, innovate forever, and discuss the truth endlessly The book Cloudy Day has made many breakthroughs and discussed many things (some of which are also within the scope of what I originally wanted to explore, which is really interesting) Although the theme of this book is the recovery of spiritual energy, there is no need to limit our sights to the earth. Civilization and thought are eternal topics. Well, overall it is quite deep and very to my liking. The three books in Yin Tian are all based on the same world view and are even more valuable and interesting. The protagonist is also rare, and you can see the protagonist growing up (this is really rare nowadays) The author himself is aware of the areas that still need improvement, so I won't mention them. Looking forward to the next book, I can see more different places

9.0/10 Excellent science fiction. No spoilers. Don't think it's too short, it's already very long Because the story is compact, the writing is excellent, and the science fiction part is solid, I gave it 9 points. Ps: I am always afraid of death. Perhaps what I fear is not eternal sleep, but the despair and powerlessness before facing it. Reading suggestions: Don't read the post if it's not necessary Personal comment: I just like happy endings, and tragic literature is to die for!

Rating 6.9/10, 0.1 Point deducted for the rushed ending The title of the book is fraudulent. The whole book has nothing to do with the city. It is better to rename it The Killing Journey of the Bald Monk. Protagonist evaluation Occupation: Standard dnd monk Alignment: Lawful neutral (always lawful evil) (warning, this life is infinitely deflecting towards chaotic evil) Reading warning - the first 250 chapters are all foreshadowing and can be read quickly or skipped. To be honest, there are still a lot of bugs in this book, as well as a lot of things that are not clearly explained, but overall, especially in the middle period, you can see that the author has spent a lot of effort to make many shining points. It is worth reading. A brief summary - the protagonist is a killing machine with no emotions. If it weren't for professional constraints, he would be a standard chaotic evil demon (the kind who thinks about bloody battles and sacrifices all day long)

Rating 9.2/10 One of the masterpieces of cuttlefish In fact, this book is not in my strike zone because I don't like the daily routine of the main character. But the mystery is really too complete. From the character setting, plot, world view and historical line, it is complete and beautiful in all aspects. Of course, you can also talk about shortcomings. For example, in the later stage, when demigods fight, they basically talk nonsense. Although there are personality differences, the essence is still talking nonsense and blocking each other. The score of 9.2 Is my intuitive feeling. I will read the next book after finishing it. It is too torture to follow the book.