Luo Xiaomu's Private Land

At the beginning, there are all kinds of ancient and bloody routines, such as being blind and blind, looking down on people, and so on. There are about 400 chapters, and the 100-chapter plot is driven by the male protagonist's sudden love brain from a quiet temperament to far away, supplemented by the bloody love story with stomachache and the male protagonist's hysteria, and the subsequent revelation of the male and female protagonist's life experience is even more difficult. As the plot progresses, basically none of the various events that the protagonist participates in go smoothly. Various things happen during the process. He has nothing to do and is looking for trouble. It's so tiring to watch. It belongs to the mainstream writing style of abuse with relatively mild hidden symptoms. The layout is too small, and the writing is completely unable to support a huge interstellar narrative. It shouts faith but the author doesn't understand faith at all. The combat power system in the later period is difficult to describe in a word. There are stacks of boxes and deus ex machina to support the combat power system that is on the verge of being broken. The villain's various meanings are unclear, and he looks angry. What the hell, at the end, it suddenly becomes a harem, and the emotions are inexplicable. Identified as bad! It's okay if you don't use your brain to watch it, but if you watch it with your brain in mind, your head will be buzzing. Some book friends in the book reading circle said that it is a female author. If I keep it true, all the above will be obvious. I can only say that it fits my stereotype of the writing style of female authors.

It's worth watching, but the characters are somewhat unlikable. Mary Sue, the silly and sweet heroine, was seduced by greed once and was dragged and lectured by the people around her. She did not make progress, and there was a second time. This kind of repeated plot is really uncomfortable to watch. Characters like the Doomsday Wasteland should not exist or should not be the main characters. However, Le Xiao has still made progress after hundreds of chapters, but some plots are seriously demoralizing. Protagonist: Everyone is playing me, and the villains are all white-eyed wolves. With good intentions to save you from the despair of death, you want to destroy the existing order. The protagonist may want to portray idealistic and highly intelligent criminals, but the effect is just to create a group of thugs who are obsessed with overthrowing the system and never mention the consequences. All in all, it's worth reading when you're short of books.

At the beginning, the plot flow was still very smooth. Although it was not explosive, there was a feeling that the years were peaceful. It also has the atmosphere of a late-night canteen, which makes people feel comfortable watching it. But! ! ! Ever since Lao Zhang (the protagonist) gained the reputation of an outstanding returnee, the entire book has completely moved toward death. If you don't open a restaurant properly and run a hot pot restaurant, the early tone will be completely broken. Not only that, but he also writes political plots all day long, flatters the boss, puts on a show for the boss, makes excuses for the boss, etc. It's full of the author's private goods (the above plots reached their peak around the third volume, and I stopped ordering them after three volumes) Many settings feel completely forgotten. I thought that with Lao Zhang's existence as the God of Slaughter, there would be many opportunities to show off secretly, but in the end there were basically none. The abnormality of the title is that it is basically the same except for the name being different from the traditional sense and the time travel. If you want to write a political plot, your fictional setting is not reasonable enough. The author also said that what he wanted to write was always blocked, and his mentality exploded. I just want to smuggle in private goods. It's useless to say it so nicely.

In urban writing, the emotional line starts to drift around 400. I was still saying that it would end like this without thinking about the third person. He started to have an affair with her again. There is also the passive ambiguity of the fourth person. Moreover, it is written in a parallel world view of Wotu. Open a harem. . You are the only one special Where do you place the law? ? A common problem in all harem novels is that there is no sense of immersion The heroine's sense of existence is limited to venting her emotions, and the portrayal is not profound enough to engage in ambiguity. The emotional line really fails. The male protagonist's thinking and logic are also contradictory. He is a time traveler, and he still doesn't believe in heaven or earth. People's fortune tellers say that purple energy comes from the east. You have traveled back and made billions, and you still say that people are harming you. There is no psychological description at all.

At first I thought the subject matter was very novel and the writing was very fluent. There were no plots or dialogues that looked very embarrassing. However, the plot progressed at a snail's pace in the middle and later stages. I didn't finish it until I finished it.