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A great novel, the writing is very succinct, and the plot is just right. I have only written a few dozen chapters now. I am looking forward to the future development and hope to write a unique story.

Rating:85 Evaluation: The world view is complete, the setting is novel and interesting, and the character creation is outstanding. The world view of Gentleman at the End has a more restrained style, treating illness as the influence exerted by some kind of existence on people, and the setting is wonderful. It incorporates elements of the popular Souls game in recent years but does not describe it too much. It speeds up the narrative rhythm, which is more in line with the style of online novels. However, the description of the protagonist's past life is relatively ordinary, and it feels like the settings are constantly being modified. Compared with the previous description of the cause of the disease, it is a bit too delayed. You see, Zhou Mingrui's family next door is clean (it should have been clean in the early stage, but I didn't read it in the later stage) There was too much English mixed in in the early stage, probably to improve readers' sense of immersion. After all, no one will know the original meaning after seeing the transliterated words. The description of the protagonist group is quite brilliant, but compared to the description of the world view, it is a bit too ordinary. Compared with the otaku elements found in general online articles, this book is much more restrained, which must be praised.

It is probably a novel that incorporates the Ke world view. Dreams are an important part of this world. The author is probably a medical student, and he describes the protagonist's growth very well. Advantages: The writing is exquisite and the plot is detailed. Disadvantages: slow updates

Ke Wei/Inner Struggle This is an out-of-the-box novel worth reading carefully and savoring. The protagonist is struggling between two real worlds. Both worlds are desperately pulling the protagonist to one side. It is painful to read because the author clearly writes the protagonist's fear and everyone's fear. The fear is the loss of family members and the loss of loved ones. Summary: The above-mentioned articles can be said to be an emerging genre.

Martial arts The protagonist's journey to face himself. Advantages: Complete expression of thoughts, three-dimensional character creation, smooth writing, and perfect world creation. Disadvantages: Fighting scenes in martial arts novels that are even more ancient than Gu Long. . . Summary: A first-class article, with great points for the expression of thoughts. It is a novel that leads readers to think.

Zhutianliu/Youzhu World The story is about a protagonist who works hard and travels across the world to "work" and finally becomes successful. Advantages: The world creation is extremely complete, the character creation is extremely three-dimensional, the arc of the protagonist is extremely obvious, and the imagination is extremely broad. Disadvantages: The protagonist upgrades too slowly. It feels like the book is too long when the protagonist becomes prominent. The author has a criminal record as a eunuch, and his writing is a bit verbose. Summary: Excellent article, recommended reading.

All Heavens/Tao Dharma The protagonist starts from the sign-in system and travels through the heavens. Advantages: The world creation in the early stage is relatively complete, the supporting characters are acceptable, and the emotional expression is relatively complete. Disadvantages: The world changes too frequently in the later period, which is far from the meticulous polishing in the early stage. The author may have changed the outline. Summary: Between the intermediate level and upper-intermediate level, the highlight is the understanding and description of Tao. Along the way, the author has put some effort into shaping the character arc of the protagonist. The protagonist's image as a small citizen in the early stage has transitioned to the image of a Taoist and natural person in the later stage, and his inner thoughts have also undergone many changes. This is in obvious contrast with the traditional upgrading and monster-killing flow.

History/Late Qing Dynasty/America/Goldfinger The protagonist uses Golden Finger to change the history of humiliation in the past. Advantages: The writing style is cheerful, a bit imaginative, and the historical research is relatively detailed, which further enriches the character of the historical characters. Disadvantages: It has a lot of historical science (probably an advantage?), Which makes the writing lengthy (commonly known as: water). Summary: An above-average article, this is an enjoyable historical article that you won't get tired of reading. The writing style is good and the writing style is cheerful and free. It's worth reading again.

Main God stream (the one with the main world) A story in which the protagonist saves the world through prostitution for free (maybe this is the case). Advantages: Tentacle monsters, large amount of updates, perfect plot, and three-dimensional supporting characters. In the fandom world, there is no need to spend a lot of time shaping the worldview. Disadvantages: It is still in the seedling stage, and the author's last book was very long, so you must be prepared to follow up for a long time. Summary: The article is of average quality and has a large amount of content. You won't get tired of reading it continuously.

Sand sculpture/imagination The protagonist travels through time to become the eldest grandson of a god, and saves the world through his imagination. The novel is mainly in the style of sand sculpture. The author, Sun Xiaochuan, is a tenth-level teacher in Chinese language and has a very big imagination (I heard that the author also has a good academic background, so there is no big problem with the writing style and outline). Advantages: The fan fiction, world and character creation are complete, and the protagonist only needs to be sandcasted. Summary: A simple and imaginative article is the best choice for novices to practice. (The first article by the author of Tao Wei Xian is also a fanfic)

Produced by Add Points/Apocalypse/Go Away The protagonist saves the world by upgrading and adding points. The comment area is always swinging between whether to use mecha or not. The record of using mecha has caused a serious decline in the quality of the book. However, some people like to use mecha, so you can often see the two groups quarreling in the comment area. Advantages: The early world creation is complete, there are no plot bugs, the protagonist's character arc is obvious, the protagonist is not indecisive, there are no major surprises, and the supporting characters are relatively complete. Disadvantages: Upgrading in the later stage is too fast (can it be considered more enjoyable?), Especially after changing the map, there are big problems in character creation and world creation (Criticizing the Lime Martial Saint by name). Summary: This is an above-average article, but it starts at the beginning and ends at the end. This is also a common problem of many authors. I hope I can get away with it and write it well this time. I think the poor writing of "Go away and open the mecha" is largely due to problems with the later world and character creation. If you have other opinions, please add them in the comment area.

End of the world/invincible/salvation/love flow The protagonist is invincible at the beginning, and the goal is to save Blue Star's hometown? The protagonist and the Earth liaison do not know each other's information, which creates a God-like perspective for the reader. During this period, there is a flow of invincibility from another world mixed with the main character. Poisonous points: The lightning strikes at the beginning, and the description of the Earth's liaison officer is too obscene, making readers feel sick to their stomachs. Falling in love and saving the world are forcibly brought together, but there is no setting that only falling in love can save the world. It is like a Hollywood setting where the world is saved by picking up a girl, but the writing technique is very stiff and ugly. It is recommended to skip the extremely poisonous part of Lady Bones. There are many female characters in the early stage, but there is no good writing skills to describe them, which makes people feel sick to read. Summary: This is a lower-medium-level article with good creativity, but the writing style still needs to be polished.

Doomsday cheats to upgrade the salvation stream! ! ! The author wants to describe an apocalyptic world and save the world through cheating and upgrades, which is full of tears and laughter. Poisonous Points: The plot is unreasonable, using jealousy to attract the villain at the beginning, it's the end of the world, and you still have the desire to be jealous, it's really yours. There is no growth in the way the characters behave, no character arcs to speak of. The beginning is a lightning strike, and the way to get rid of suspicion is to confess your love, which is outrageous. Disadvantages: The end of the world is not like the end of the world, it seems too tender and affectionate. It is outrageous that there is a pure struggle between the upper class in the end of the world. Summary: It is a medium-level novel, the writing style is acceptable, but the plot and outline still need to be polished.