The Writing is First-rate, but the Shocking Eunuch

Mecha · Punk · National Martial Arts · Magical Reform of the Late Qing Dynasty · Space Opera In the new book by the author of "Starting from Guhuo Bird", the protagonist died in battle and was reborn two hundred years ago in the late Qing Dynasty. He is preparing to use the memory of his past life and mecha technology to change the course of history and fight against the invasion of the "Six Desires". As always, it kills decisively, with high-energy fighting scenes and a fast pace. With the background of a space opera, it has the feel of an ancient martial arts mecha. The writing is calm and sophisticated, with vivid fighting descriptions and cinematic transitions and storyboards, giving it a full sense of picture and three-dimensionality. In the first three prologues, the author paints a desperate picture of the future. There is a terrible "Six Desire Heaven" virus in the universe. Any infected planet will give birth to a huge evil demon. Although human beings have developed real space navigation capabilities, possess "divine machine" mechas as big as mountains, and countless V-level "celestial officials", they are still vulnerable to the terrifying Liuyutian. Only the only V-level Tianguan Gu Jianqiu was left. As the last representative of the 40 billion people, he drew his sword and broke it into pieces. With millions of years of evolution and thousands of years of history, the once glorious human civilization has been reduced to ashes in a short period of time. Gu Jianqiu opened his eyes and found that he was reborn two hundred years ago. At this time, mankind had not yet established a community of destiny, and even the republic in Gu Jianqiu's memory had not yet been seen. Whether it was joining the revolution and re-creating the republic, making the Haitang Kingdom stand in the forest of the world, or actively guarding against the invasion of the Six Desires, or even rebuilding the relationship with his wife in his previous life... He had countless things to do, and there was still time for everything! Although this book only has 400,000 words, its worldview structure is very complex and sophisticated, or it can be regarded as a giant suture monster. There are both fighting mechs and traditional Chinese martial arts, cyberpunk-like descriptions of "high technology and low life", as well as an endless stream of alien "celestial beings" and countless alien colonies. Many elements are confusing and confusing, but they create a wonderful charm. It feels like Shanghai in the old Kung Fu movies set in the Republic of China. There are unscrupulous gangsters, reclusive martial arts masters, laborers who endure hardship, and revolutionaries who are bravely looking for a way out. What is very interesting is that the author uses the self-created concept "cardioelectricity" as the core of the power system. The electrocardiogram is like the "internal power" in martial arts novels and the combat effectiveness in "Dragon Ball". The electrocardiogram points represent both combat effectiveness and the ability to drive mechas. When I read it, I would replace it with the combat power in "Dragon Ball". 5 Points is an ordinary person, and the more you practice, the higher it gets. But 200 years later, Gu Jianqiu's ECG points are only about 230, which is equivalent to Sun Wukong when the Saiyans first came to the earth? The author seems to be planning to re-write the modern history of the world. The period of Gu Jianqiu's rebirth is roughly equivalent to the late Qing Dynasty when the Treaty of Shimonoseki was defeated and was bullied by foreign countries such as Japan (the Jinju people in the book). The empire would collapse in a few years, but there would still be decades before the republic would be "rebuilt." In this process, the protagonist will definitely play a more important role than in his previous life. Of course, he will also try his best to explore the source of the "Six Desires" and find a way to eradicate the threat. The biggest shortcoming of this book is... The updates are too slow...

Slow-burning and bland genres·Thick physical orientation·Urban life writing·Era writing·Perspective of small characters·Non-upgraded cool writing When the centenarian was dying, his soul passed through the spirit of the fox spirit from a century ago, and guided him to change his past self. Starting from the ignorance of a rural tenant, he went to school and entered school. He slowly became enlightened under the new culture and new ideas, and changed his destiny. The entry point is interesting. The old man in the present, the children in the past, and the fox fairy who has passed through the soul are all on the same timeline. Changes in the past affect the future. The three main perspectives switch back and forth. The story is rich, layered and immersive. The writing style is light and eloquent, the language is refined, and the turbulent and cannibalistic society at that time is written in simple words. The whole story belongs to the small people: from the old scalper father, the landlord, the new-style young master, the overseas gentleman, to the conservative old master, etc., It seems that the hometown of Runtu, the marriage in the besieged city, and the father in the back are presented on the paper. By switching the perspectives of different time and space, it shows the grand changes of the two eras. It's bland and slow but interesting, refreshing but obscure. It's warm between the lines, the story is soothing, and the characters are brought to life through many small details. It should be noted that the novel is a slow-paced life style. It is not a story about fighting and killing, it is not a show-off and slaps-in-the-face story, it is not a story about going back to the past and changing the world in a big way, and it is not a story about cultivating the master's path. It just takes you back to the past with the author's writing style. Going back to the past, starting from a humble son of a long-term worker, the process of "rewriting" bit by bit will help you see clearly the social sentiments of the late Republic of China and the early Republic of China, and experience the journey of change of a small person. It has a literary youth temperament, very much like Lu Xun, and like Bailuyuan. For book lovers who like fast pace, the story will be dull. As a non-mainstream updated work, in my opinion, it is a benchmark for the flourishing of online literature, which is surprising. Recommended to friends who have requirements for writing style, have some life experience, are tired of fast-paced and refreshing novels, and want to change their taste and move their taste to a higher level. Don't worry about the plot being too sadistic. The male protagonist has a smooth journey along the way. There are no painful setbacks, and the overall view is not too heavy. It is recommended to compare it with "Age of Awakening", it will be more flavorful.

Infinite flow · Chinese martial arts · Heroes · Classical mythology · Exciting fighting · Decisive killing Gu Huoniao is the most martial arts-like work I have ever seen in non-martial arts online literature. The foundation of this book is very traditional. On the surface, it is infinite flow, but infinite flow is just the framework that carries the story. The real selling point and attraction is the terrifyingly strong sense of atmosphere and presence. The opening chapter is amazing. In just two chapters, the protagonist's image is established, and the purpose of the behavior is clearly explained. The third chapter directly introduces the main line, moving smoothly and effortlessly, without wasting any pen and ink. The first copy is of the Kowloon Walled City in Hong Kong in the 1980s. The atmosphere is shrouded from beginning to end, including the description of every scene, every dialogue of the characters and even every line. It has a pure Hong Kong film flavor of the last century, making people immersed in the scene. It has a bit of the flavor of "The Reborn Hero". Later, the Imchen Japanese Rebellion, the Ghost Story of Yanjing, the Nanyang Pirates, the Doomsday Wasteland, and the Dragon-Tiger Ming Dynasty... Each copy has its own characteristics, and introduces the walking of Yamafu and the ten types of inheritance into the infinite flow template, building a new oriental power system and world structure without becoming cumbersome. It is also a rare masterpiece in the infinite flow. Huo De'er's writing style is excellent - not in terms of how gorgeous his words and sentences are, but in terms of his exquisite writing skills and strong writing skills. His writing skills are so deep and solid that he is really rare among Internet writers. The writing is calm and sophisticated, and the writing is clean and neat without any sloppiness; it is especially good at line drawing, the text is concise, and the scenes and pictures seem to be vivid on the paper; the description and narration of the fighting scenes are extremely smooth, the texture of hard bridges and hard horses, and the violent aesthetics of fists and flesh, making people feel full and hearty. Huodai can definitely be regarded as one of the internet writers who is best at writing about characters. Every character he writes is written with a movie-level mind. Even the supporting characters whose appearance does not exceed a thousand words can still write the arc of the character in a few strokes, like an outstanding actor desperately trying to get ahead, giving the most superb performance in the limited screen time. In terms of scene description, it adopts multiple perspectives to advance, and is good at using cinematic storyboards and transitions, with a strong sense of picture and three-dimensionality. There are also several times when the climax of the plot is paired with songs that perfectly match the imagery, going beyond the scope of "using words to bring a sense of picture" to achieve an all-round cinematic feel. Among the online writers I have seen, I am the only one who can achieve this level of success. The problem is: the description of the relationship between men and women is controversial; in some places, too much force is not enough; the control of the rapid rhythm is not skillful enough; the level of each copy is uneven; the long-term design ability is too poor, and they like to bury lines randomly and idle pens, resulting in some stories being messy; the underlying structure has gradually been unable to support large and complex stories... Generally speaking, the work during the Guhuoniao period should still be in a period of exploration and improvement. It has aura and heart, and the creativity and plot are very brilliant, not vulgar or cliche; it has a very strong and rich personal writing style, which is unique; the film-like narrative technique is also impressive. Although there were some criticisms during the exploration and attempt, I still think this is the best infinite stream so far. Of course, the author's discontinuation of updates is also a unique feature and must be appreciated.

Gu Huoniao's style is infinite, with good writing power and full of heroic spirit. The opening chapter is a copy of the martial arts style at the beginning of the Republic of China, using the framework of Xu Haofeng's movie "The Master". The protagonist's master challenges the eight major martial arts schools in Tianjin according to the rules and wins, but unexpectedly he is assassinated by a black gun. The protagonist must choose these martial arts schools again to avenge the master (the master kicks the gym for the disciple, and the disciple avenges the master). There are grudges and pleasures, and the martial arts flavor is strong, giving people the feeling of watching a Hong Kong martial arts movie from the last century. The writing style is also a bit like "Starting with the Birds". The martial arts scenes are hard-hitting and have a strong visual sense. The second dungeon is a modified version of Tang Dynasty, which introduces a mythological framework and has a powerful description of "spirits and monsters", which is a bit like the Twelve Hours of Chang'an. The protagonist attaches great importance to love and justice, and acts decisively, which makes him feel a little bit like Li Changan walking in the world of Guhuo Bird. The author has a strong ability to mobilize emotions, his writing is capable, and his writing style is pleasing. There is a balance between fighting and daily life. Judging from the current two copies, "it is similar to the setting of Guhuo Bird, but has its own style." The two completed copies have their own characteristics and highlights, and the overall quality is good. The controversy lies in the fact that there are too many traces of imitation, and the structure of the novel is quite similar to that of Gu Huoniao (the author is indeed a book friend of Gu Huoniao, and it is said that he also received some guidance from Gu Huoniao during the writing process). The first copy paid tribute to many lines and plots of the movie "Master", and some of the plots were overly sensational and not very reasonable. But the biggest problem is actually that the update is too slow, and now it is directly entering the palace... Recommended to book lovers who are interested in the infinite flow of heroes. If you like Gu Huo Niao and don't mind discontinuing the update, this book is well worth reading.

Zhiguai·Infinite flow·Decisive killing·Exciting fighting "The flying blade flies across the air, and the hand of impermanence cuts off the soul. One sword can see life and death, and two swords can cause sorrow to ghosts and gods." Although a low-level executioner is hated by others, he still has his own abilities and inheritance. However, the inheritance was lost, and Su Hongxin only inherited the executioner's Six Punishments with a Knife and the Soul-Severing Knife inherited from his family from his grandfather. And-- Gatekeeper identity. Gatekeepers in the human world guard the doors that block aliens from the outside world, the doors that trap gods and demons, the doors that connect ancient and modern times... This is a rare good book. The author may have studied storytelling or cross talk. He writes with the tone of a storytelling artist and his writing style is excellent. The opening chapter has the flavor of an old supernatural novel. The protagonist, a professional executioner from his ancestors, gets the opportunity to become a gatekeeper in the human world at his grandfather's funeral (a ring that allows people to travel through time). The first copy of the shuttle is set in the background of the late Qing Dynasty and the Republic of China. There are many descriptions of Chinese martial arts, which is a bit like a bird. The protagonist has a heroic character, clear grievances, happy grudges, decisive actions, and an online IQ, but he is upright and does not kill innocent people indiscriminately. All kinds of strange people and strange things are well portrayed, which reminds people of the feeling of watching story telling in the past. In short, it is similar in form to Infinite Flow. You enter a certain world with tasks. Most of the tasks are related to ghosts and gods: traitors and villains, kill them! Monsters, ghosts, gods, kill! However, the mission rewards are relatively small. At present, it seems that they are basically extracting an ability. Although "Playing with Ghosts and Gods" is classified as a fairy tale, in the first few missions, in addition to ghosts and gods, martial arts also accounted for a considerable amount of weight. According to the author, only certain people have ghosts and gods. Only those who are accustomed to the good and evil in the world can ignore ghosts and gods. By the way, the fight scenes are really well written, with great details and punches. The last time I saw a fight scene like this was when I first started watching Gu Huoniao. There are some plots that I don't think have any problems, but many people reacted very strongly, so let me mention them: for example, asking people who have been hiding to come out to help, the protagonist failing to save passers-by in time, not killing people who had a holiday in reality, family members not hiding from ghosts after knowing the existence of ghosts... And so on.

History is written by the victors. If in a decisive battle that determines the fate of the world, your enemy wins, but you unfortunately survive, you will find that everything you once believed in, stood firm for, and fought for has lost its meaning. Very few people can stick to their hearts and continue fighting in an era when the enemy is completely victorious. Su Ge, the protagonist of this book, is one of them. Su Ge is a hibernator who goes to the future with a mission. He was originally supposed to be awakened twenty years later, but due to a strange combination of history, when he woke up, it was already more than two hundred years later. His original savings were in vain, he was saddled with loans, and everyone was coveting his original body. This is a new era that is dizzying, difficult to sleep and eat, and difficult to accept but has to be accepted, a cyber era filled with gods and Buddhas! In this era, there is no concept of family, affection, and love, and national disputes and class conflicts have been eliminated. Everyone is born in a nursing home, grows up listening to the legends of gods and Buddhas, and naturally becomes their believer. The popularity of brain-computer interfaces allows everyone to easily share their "thoughts" with gods and Buddhas without any trouble. The so-called gods and Buddhas are actually digital lives. They evolved from the AI ​​of the old era, but have long since changed beyond recognition. Each of them has grown to become arrogant by virtue of the network authority they control. They hang high above the human world, feed on the thinking power called "incense and wish power", and overlook their entire lives. Each of them controls the destiny of mankind. It is said that the earliest god and Buddha to appear was "Ksitigarbha". He was originally the surveillance system of Skynet. He knew everything and was best at distinguishing falsehood and preserving truth. Therefore, the police must respectfully ask for permission when checking the data. If human beings can upload their thoughts to the "spiritual realm" where gods and Buddhas live and become digital beings, it will be the legendary "nirvana" and "ascension". In fact, it is not unusual for this set of super AI to become a setting for gods to control the world after the arrival of the Singularity. It is as far away as "The Matrix" and more recently as "Cyber ​​Heroes" and "The Age of Gods". It is almost a standard feature of cyberpunk. But "Cyber ​​Hundred Ghosts" still writes interesting new things based on the traditional settings. For example, in the dark web, which is beyond the control of gods and Buddhas, there are countless "monsters and monsters". They may be rebels demonized by gods and Buddhas, they may be digital beings who are born with a love for freedom, or they may be bad species that specialize in bullying ordinary people. They are big or small, strong or weak. In short, they are all monsters and monsters that do not obey the order. The protagonist Su Ge suddenly discovered that he might have the ability of a certain ghost king Yama, and could control people or machines. In this case, I will be the ghost king and carry the banner of resistance!

Classical Fairy Tales·Liao Zhai Zhi Wei Feng·Imaginary Tang Dynasty·Lifetime "You can be free with a sword, why should you look at it for a long time? Who can pity the common people who write about the rivers and lakes?" The novel is classified as Classical Fairy Tale. When reading, I feel that the writing style and word choice are very suitable for this theme. It is obvious that he is an author whose writing style will change with the change of the novel's theme. The greatest advantage of this book is the writing style, which is handsome and elegant, full of poetry and long aftertaste. The author spends a lot of pen and ink describing the urban life of the Dayong Dynasty, which is like the prosperous Tang Dynasty. It is bustling, fireworks, and mixed with Buddhism, Taoism, gods, demons, and ghosts. The greatest advantage of this book is the writing style, handsome and elegant, full of poetry, and long aftertaste. Like a master of painting, he sketches and traces slowly, and a vivid picture blooms under his pen. In addition to the flavor of fairy tales, there is also a flavor of ancient fantasy novels. The protagonist enters the Tao through paintings, can absorb demons into paintings, adopt them for his own use, turn demons into friends, and behaves in a chivalrous manner. The first volume unfolds the story with the main theme of the protagonist "seeing all living beings". He hides in the market, plays in the world, solves puzzles and reasonings, and integrates a series of scattered unit stories to unhurriedly show a prosperous Tang Dynasty where Taoism manifested the sage and humans and demons coexisted. During this period, the market was prosperous and hundreds of living beings. The style is quite a bit like the fairy tale version of "The Twelve Hours of Chang'an" and "Detective Dee: The Dragon King of Gods". The author's writing style is exquisite, the level of Chinese studies is high, the artistic conception is excellent, the film quality is very strong, the story is steady, the plot is compact and warm, the characters are plump, the overall charm is full of antique flavor, and it has the meaning of being out of the world. It is a rare masterpiece among online articles. The descriptions of various world settings and customs in the article are very interesting, such as the gods and monsters, "the gods conquer them, and all evils are warded off." And so on. The various aspects of the Yongguo style and the human world, especially the choice of various nouns, make me think that the author must have done detailed research. The author's writing is strong, and as the story unfolds, he has a bit of a chivalrous spirit. Recommended to book friends who have requirements for writing style and who like ancient fairy tales, strange stories, and heroic novels. At present, apart from the update issue, the biggest controversy is that the pace is slow, and there are also some economic rationality issues. Of course, there are also book friends who feel that the imitation of antique style is not pleasing. Personally, I feel that it is generally harmless. You can try it, but it is best to have the consciousness of your lifetime. However, the biggest problem is exactly the same as Di Sha. It can be called a lifetime series, and the author has not yet completed the record. Now it has been completely discontinued. What can be done about it, and I don't know when it will be restored.

Mysterious flow·Western fantasy·crusu·steampunk The author is the new vest of Taishang Xiaojun, the author of "Jian Kui" and "Heng Dao". The biggest problem is the slow update~ An alchemist who traveled through time into the magical steam era obtained a jadeite tablet that could be used to deduce and improve the alchemy formation, which could greatly increase the success rate of alchemy. After that, he got involved in the Anomaly Bureau and continued to develop. The novel should be a work influenced by mystery, but the power system is actually new. Many settings should be derived from the game "Secret Cult Simulator". The police at the beginning and the mysterious bookstore have a strong visual sense~ Overall, this is a Western fantasy novel with a somewhat mysterious flavor, and an alchemist's survival diary mixed with Cthulhu's weird style. The plot is compact, and the foreshadowing is okay. The female characters currently appearing are all relatively outstanding ~ but the shortcomings are also very obvious. Some plots lack rationality. For example, a black market businessman displays a painting that hints at the alchemy equation openly, which feels a bit inconsistent. In addition, some places are too violent. If you read this book with a magnifying glass, there are still many problems. My reading suggestion is that if you like books like Lord of Mysteries and can't find a better substitute for the time being, this book is considered a better type of imitation and is well worth reading. However, some plots have some rationality issues and should not be studied in detail. (There are some things that seem inconsistent at first, but later found to be foreshadowing~)

Hundreds of schools of thought swept away the old Confucianism and established a new dynasty. At that time, hundreds of schools were in power and selected talents through the imperial examination. The protagonist was born as a civil servant in the border area. He was firm-willed and decisive in killing. Following his mother's last wish, he went to the provincial capital to take a scientific examination to learn about his background. Along the way, he pretended to be cool, overcame various difficulties, and became the county chief in one fell swoop. The author's writing skills are pretty good. He is clean and neat with some margins. He can outline specific images with just a few strokes. He is really good at depicting people and scenery. It should be noted that the novel has a good skeleton, but it is filled with a lot of bloody plots, including various family grievances and house fights, and the pretentious slap in the face of the villain's supporting role... If you are a book lover who is particularly sensitive to such plots, it is best to enter with caution. Book friends who like killing and decisiveness essays and fairy tales and imperial examination essays can read it.

The writing is good, it's a mixture of martial arts and fairy tales with a bit of a war flair, the king's way and the immortal's way fight for hegemony, the protagonist is decisive, ruthless and has a bottom line. The author tried to write about the tension and excitement of hanging on by a thread, but unfortunately he used too much force, the plot design was too depressing, and it was too tiring to read. In addition, the description of relationships between men and women is poisonous...