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80 points. Personally, I feel that the writing style is improved compared to the first two Hongbei books. Although the first two books are very good-looking, there is always a weird feeling in the communication between the male and female protagonists, and a feeling of excessive force. Recently, I listened to the audiobook of Yilin and found that there are a lot of weird nonsense. This one is much better. In addition, I feel that the author's description of multi-female characters such as girl groups is quite good, so why not try the harem (). The pity of this book may be that the protagonists are too strong, lacking both ability and money, and are backed by big bosses, making it difficult for the plot to revolve around the protagonists. Classic scenes such as having a conflict with an old employer and breaking the contract before running away to save money to start a new company are completely unplayable. The live variety show is something that has been played before and there is nothing new. In terms of ability, music creation is not like making games, animations and novels. It is easy to write some points to teach others to grow. As a result, Xiao Zhao and Xiao Wang are really just tools. It is unconvincing to say that their songs can fill the album. The singers are pretty much the same. The part where they were taken in is pretty good, but when they were taken back, the character design was not very good. It felt like Brother Liang and Brother Ren were here to provide for the elderly. The characters of Jiang Yi and Xu Nuo were a bit conflicting. On the contrary, I felt that Jiang Yi was cuter when he didn't join the protagonist group and was a bit more cautious. Finally, I hope there will be a sequel about the marriage of the male and female protagonists and the follow-up of the sisters on both sides.

85 points, objectively speaking, it may only be 70-80 points, but I personally like the author's style and characterization, so I add more points. It's a decent love story, with a smooth narrative and vivid characters. If it were a Japanese love comedy, it would be considered excellent. It might even become a small hit and then be animated. However, as a web text, it doesn't have enough impact. Go ahead, Gao Kaiping, but it's still a love story worth reading. There is a hint of a wife from the Tang Dynasty in the early and middle stages of this book, but I don't know whether it was because the author wanted to explore innovative points or because he lacked experience. In the end, he was unable to write out that beautiful and peaceful sense of daily life. Instead, because the plot was limited to a small place like home, and he didn't want to destroy the sense of daily life by writing a particularly pretentious plot, there was less and less to write about, and the readers' expectations were exhausted. The male protagonist's transformation into a cat in the later period is a setting that can create many interesting plots. Unfortunately, it comes too late. I wonder if the author wanted to make the book as long as possible and was reluctant to "consume" this setting, which resulted in it being wasted. To sum up, if you want to see the character designs and the intimate interaction between the male and female protagonists like Nikkaru, this book can still meet your expectations, especially the innocent, cute and gentle taste of the heroine will almost overflow the screen, which is simply synonymous with beauty and peace. But if the focus is on the plot, it is indeed a bit bland and not eye-catching.

I finished listening to the book, 80 points. The early and middle stages are very interesting, and a good story can be written even without the Douluo background. Although the female protagonists are a bit weak, the emotional scenes are still OK. I just don't know what the author thinks of the Silver Dragon King's position of being neither good nor bad. The added modern technology plays a very good role in the plot. The second set is very large, but the original plot is still online, which is very rare. He also did a good job in dealing with the anti-three-anti-Shrek story. There was no mindless belittling or mindless support, but a three-dimensional image was created through the second set of event plots. The treatment of Huo Gua is a bit too pedestrian, but it's innocuous. It's just as if the original protagonist doesn't exist. After entering the God Realm, I was quite disappointed. The battles were dry and lacked any sense of plot. Then I kept adding settings to upgrade the battles and explore the world view. It would be more interesting to write more about the conflicts and confrontations between the God Kings and the protagonist group. The fight with the evil god is really not interesting. After all, everyone knows that the protagonist will definitely win through some cheat. I guess there are really not many readers who want to "learn" the world view setting created by the author himself. These parts are a bit like the author's self-pleasure, and it is even more torture when listening to the book. Overall, this is a book worth reading despite its flaws.

After listening to the book, the overall evaluation is that it is an excellent and refreshing white text, and a high-quality fanfiction worth reading. The setting of the protagonist is very interesting, and the description of the master is perfect. When the plot of the original book begins, it is similar to the style of the villain fighting for his son-in-law to persecute the original protagonist in a counter-routine. The most important thing is that the original part is not out of the ordinary. The plot development and settings basically fit the original work, which gave me a sense of identity that this is how the original work developed. In addition, the plot did not collapse due to the excessive intensity of the protagonist, which is also very rare. The shortcomings are that the writing style is relatively watery, especially when listening to the book, it feels like there is always some meaningless nonsense. In addition, the younger generation exits too quickly in the later stage, which is a bit abrupt, and the daughter has no performance at all. It feels aggrieved that she has been holding back for so long and pretending to be cool.

The reborn sinister male protagonist and the naive female protagonist suddenly have a system, very interesting settings, creating different sparks. The plot is in a classic style with a sense of paragraphs, and has a sense of fine design like a paper book or Lao Riqing The characters are perfect and perfect. Mr. Fu's cute and naive image can support the whole book. The use of chat emoticons to create characters is a bit tricky but very effective. The only pity is that the supporting characters don't have enough love scenes Then there are the common problems in daily romance novels. As the distance between the two becomes smaller and smaller, there will be less and less things to write about, but this book handles it pretty well. At least Mr. Fu supports the plot behind it.

An extremely excellent Conan fan with a relaxed style of doing things, The characterization and limited extension of the original characters are very good, and the protagonist's integration into events and actions is very smooth. There is no deliberate pretense or brooding, and the plot is complete and not abrupt. There is no forced story about the winery to lower the quality. The description of the winery is a compromise between the mystery of the original work and the ridicule of Gin and others (for example, it is all undercover). At least it is very consistent with my impression of the winery. It can be said that it is the best work worth reading among all the fans who only write a single work. The only problem now is that the update speed is not fast enough!