Naruto Fanfic
火影同人
Purely subjective comments, both in the seedlings and the final article
1Konoha's Magical Power is Invincible
Light Novel木叶之神通无敌
Wireless Trail
Traveling through the world of Naruto, he became the younger brother of Uchiha Shisui. Because he couldn't stand the family's mindless manipulation, he laughed and shouted wildly at the clan meeting. "I laugh at your lack of plans, and I laugh at the clan leader's weakness. Uchiha will surely be buried in your hands." In an instant, everyone in the house was shocked. From this day on, the wheels of history in the ninja world began to change. Fugaku, Itachi, Shisui and other Uchiha all recognized the faces of Konoha's higher-ups under the influence of Blue Sky. Now the plot has reached the point of expelling Danzo from the village and forcing Hiruzen Sarutobi to death... Ps: Group number--678133095
Traveling through the world of Naruto, he became the younger brother of Uchiha Shisui. Because he couldn't stand the family's mindless manipulation, he laughed and shouted wildly at the clan meeting. "I laugh at your lack of plans, and I laugh at the clan leader's weakness. Uchiha will surely be buried in your hands." In an instant, everyone in the house was shocked. From this day on, the wheels of history in the ninja world began to change. Fugaku, Itachi, Shisui and other Uchiha all recognized the faces of Konoha's higher-ups under the influence of Blue Sky. Now the plot has reached the point of expelling Danzo from the village and forcing Hiruzen Sarutobi to death... Ps: Group number--678133095
Status: Completed Timeline: The protagonist is Shisui's non-existent brother in the original work through soul travel. The beginning is about the clan after the Nine-Tails Rebellion. Love line: none Gold Finger: The Wordless Heavenly Book, simply put, it is to summarize and refine the ninjutsu learned into similar magical powers through the Heavenly Book. Evaluation: The writing before The Gods is very good. Most of the writing is about the battle of wits and courage with Sarutobi, Danzo and others, but it is not boring because there will be battles interspersed in the middle. The arrangement for Uchiha is very interesting, and the use of the kaleidoscope is optimized using the Wordless Heavenly Book. It's just that the ending is too rushed. It would be better to write two or three more chapters to explain the ending of the characters.
2这个忍者明明不强却过分作死
Faceless Desolation
Bite! The system activation task has been started! Look at the terminally ill old man in front of you. Let's unplug his oxygen tube and give him a ride. Seriously compassionate face~ Shinomiya Aoyu was confused. The bad old man in the mouth of the dog system seemed a bit strong... He glanced at the heretic demon tube inserted behind the 'age spots'. He remained silent and even wanted to laugh... You call this thing an 'oxygen tube'? ? ? In addition... The super death-seeking mission has been released: experience the ultimate secret of Eight-door Dunjia for yourself! (Kicked 'Ye Kai' hard, and shouted out, 'I XX would like to call you the strongest!') Give Otsutsuki Kaguya a thousand-year kill! (And capture the moment) Art is Patrick... And Spongebob! (Accompanying Deidara to self-destruct) Invite Terumi Mei to host the wedding (the congratulations must be no less than 100 words)... In addition, there are more various death-defying tasks waiting to be started. This book is also known as "Naruto: The Daily Life of an Undercover Agent" and "I Have 108 Special Techniques for Making Death" (there is also a premium version of "Stand-in Messenger in the Marvel World") since the book was written. It has never been updated, and your character is guaranteed. Welcome. Enter the pit~ The faceless people seeking death group: 630645016 (full) The faceless people seeking death group two: 1079746799 (full) The faceless people seeking death group three: 144426313 Welcome sand sculpture book friends to join the group to urge updates
Bite! The system activation task has been started! Look at the terminally ill old man in front of you. Let's unplug his oxygen tube and give him a ride. Seriously compassionate face~ Shinomiya Aoyu was confused. The bad old man in the mouth of the dog system seemed a bit strong... He glanced at the heretic demon tube inserted behind the 'age spots'. He remained silent and even wanted to laugh... You call this thing an 'oxygen tube'? ? ? In addition... The super death-seeking mission has been released: experience the ultimate secret of Eight-door Dunjia for yourself! (Kicked 'Ye Kai' hard, and shouted out, 'I XX would like to call you the strongest!') Give Otsutsuki Kaguya a thousand-year kill! (And capture the moment) Art is Patrick... And Spongebob! (Accompanying Deidara to self-destruct) Invite Terumi Mei to host the wedding (the congratulations must be no less than 100 words)... In addition, there are more various death-defying tasks waiting to be started. This book is also known as "Naruto: The Daily Life of an Undercover Agent" and "I Have 108 Special Techniques for Making Death" (there is also a premium version of "Stand-in Messenger in the Marvel World") since the book was written. It has never been updated, and your character is guaranteed. Welcome. Enter the pit~ The faceless people seeking death group: 630645016 (full) The faceless people seeking death group two: 1079746799 (full) The faceless people seeking death group three: 144426313 Welcome sand sculpture book friends to join the group to urge updates
Status: Completed Timeline: Months before Obito became black Emotional line: no heroine, but several ambiguous partners Goldfinger: Death-seeking system, you can get various rewards by completing the system's death-seeking tasks. Evaluation: The writing is humorous, and the overall style is humorous and relaxed, but sometimes it is too relaxed. The protagonist's behavior is too off-line and is not obvious in the early stage. After the defection, sometimes it feels like the author is overjoyed and the whole chapter is funny.
3忍校教师,我教书就能变强
Oranges Are Not Yellow
In Konoha 45, a young teacher came to the ninja school. That year, two well-known ninja schools, Uchiha Obito and Metkai, gradually counterattacked and became geniuses. After that, the history of the ninja world gradually deviated from its trajectory. There is no longer a lunatic who wears a mask and calls himself Uchiha Madara, and there is an additional Uchiha boy who wants to become Hokage. There is no Akatsuki organization that wants to collect tailed beasts, only the peace-loving Akatsuki learning group. There is no rumor in Konoha that he is an orphan of the nine-tailed demon fox, there is only an optimistic and cheerful second generation Kage. PS: Twenty thousand works, quality guaranteed
In Konoha 45, a young teacher came to the ninja school. That year, two well-known ninja schools, Uchiha Obito and Metkai, gradually counterattacked and became geniuses. After that, the history of the ninja world gradually deviated from its trajectory. There is no longer a lunatic who wears a mask and calls himself Uchiha Madara, and there is an additional Uchiha boy who wants to become Hokage. There is no Akatsuki organization that wants to collect tailed beasts, only the peace-loving Akatsuki learning group. There is no rumor in Konoha that he is an orphan of the nine-tailed demon fox, there is only an optimistic and cheerful second generation Kage. PS: Twenty thousand works, quality guaranteed
Status: Serializing (updating stably) Timeline: The protagonist's soul travels to the fourth grade of Obito's Ninja School, and he is the same age as Minato. Love line: None yet Goldfinger: There is a system for recruiting disciples. As disciples are promoted, they will receive various rewards, including ninjutsu, training experience, ninja tools, secret medicine, etc. Evaluation: Relaxing and bland, it mainly talks about teaching. After teaching, the disciple's strength increases and he can do the task. If the task is successful, the protagonist will get the reward. This is about the basic content. The disadvantage is that the plot is too slow. It has written one million words. The protagonist has already acquired a lot of skills. He can instantly become a Jinchūriki but the three battles have not been completed yet. The protagonist's disciples have made great progress, but it has only been two years.
4I'm Not That Uzumaki Naruto
Light Novel我不是那个漩涡鸣人
Green 0 Cow
In the cold laboratory, Naruto opened a pair of blue eyes and smiled at Orochimaru: "Do you want these samsara eyes?" (The new book writer is in Hokage, starting from blackmailing Danzo, asking for everyone's support)
In the cold laboratory, Naruto opened a pair of blue eyes and smiled at Orochimaru: "Do you want these samsara eyes?" (The new book writer is in Hokage, starting from blackmailing Danzo, asking for everyone's support)
Status: Completed Timeline: Dressed as newborn Naruto Love line: Hinata Cheap Finger: Mirror world system, you can copy the target to the mirror world by touching it Evaluation: Dark Naruto, there are some conspiracy theories, but the logic is self-consistent. The protagonist is a typical character who will do whatever it takes to achieve his goals. His golden finger is really against the will of heaven, and he has control over all the thoughts of all living beings.
5重振宇智波从做影开始
Night Sorcerer
A world of mutual understanding is the most ridiculous. The peace of infinite dreams is the most hypocritical. Darkness, cold-bloodedness, and cruelty are the truest portrayal of this world! So, do you want to dance too? ?
A world of mutual understanding is the most ridiculous. The peace of infinite dreams is the most hypocritical. Darkness, cold-bloodedness, and cruelty are the truest portrayal of this world! So, do you want to dance too? ?
Status: Completed Timeline: The night of the Kyuubi Rebellion Love line: no heroine Goldfinger: I don't know if the protagonist's Uchiha ancestry counts as a goldfinger. The chaos of the Nine-Tails is kaleidoscope, and there is nothing else. Evaluation: The protagonist of this book leads the Uchiha clan to defect to Konoha, and joining the Iwagakure Village is the biggest highlight. What follows is the unremarkable story of upgrading eyes, fighting, and unifying the ninja world. The shortcomings are that the long psychological descriptions and the analysis of the relationship between countries are quite uncomfortable to watch; the ending is rather hasty, and the endings of many characters are not explained.
6I Established the Kua Kua Cult in Naruto
Light Novel我在火影成立夸夸教
Orange, Banana, Orange, Pear And Pomelo
What should I do if I travel to Naruto and start the game as an orphan? Urgent! Bite! The Kua Kua Education system is now open! ... Namikaze Minato: "The biggest lie I've ever heard in my life is Tatsuma-kun's compliment to me." Kyuubi: "I finally came out that day, but that bastard said I was the strongest tailed beast he had ever seen, and then he beat me to Kushina's... Um... Um... Belly "Uchiha Madara: "I asked him if he wanted to dance too? Then he said that my dancing skills were the best in the world, and I was sent back to the Pure Land." Jiraiya: "Namikaze Minato is the best ninja, and no ninja is good enough to compare with him. It's a pity that he has a mouth."
What should I do if I travel to Naruto and start the game as an orphan? Urgent! Bite! The Kua Kua Education system is now open! ... Namikaze Minato: "The biggest lie I've ever heard in my life is Tatsuma-kun's compliment to me." Kyuubi: "I finally came out that day, but that bastard said I was the strongest tailed beast he had ever seen, and then he beat me to Kushina's... Um... Um... Belly "Uchiha Madara: "I asked him if he wanted to dance too? Then he said that my dancing skills were the best in the world, and I was sent back to the Pure Land." Jiraiya: "Namikaze Minato is the best ninja, and no ninja is good enough to compare with him. It's a pity that he has a mouth."
Status: Completed Timeline: Contemporaneous with Watergate Emotional line: Ye Cang and Yakushi Nonoyu Goldfinger: Sincerely praise others before defeating them, and you can randomly select other people's talents (simple description, this system does not appear often) Evaluation: The protagonist changes from a civilian orphan to a Hokage, which changes many of the regrets of the original work. The early and middle stages are well written. The process of the protagonist's own deduction of ninjutsu is very detailed. The relationship between the characters is not abrupt and the emotions flow smoothly. Later on, I seriously suspected that the plot of traveling through the parallel world of Dragon Vein was created for the sake of hydrology. It was to cause trouble in the original timeline. After returning to this world, it ended not long after returning to this world. It was also the end of the emotional line, which was inexplicable. Overall, it's worth watching, but I personally feel that the journey from Dragon Vein back to this world is already complete, and there is no need to read the rest.