The Writing is so Good That I Am Novice

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The writing is very good, it's a little bit of a novice's book, I can just add it here and there, don't take it seriously.

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Let That Witch Go2

Two Eyes

3.4M9.39,983

Cheng Yan originally thought he had traveled to the European Middle Ages and became a glorious prince. But the world seems to be different from what I thought? Witches are real and have magical powers? The witch farming article will carry out farming to the end. ---- The new book "Tiandao Equation" has been released, please feed it!

Curator2

What do you say about this book? It's good for a scumbag to make up the lessons. After all, maybe we'll wear it one day? For liberal arts students, they can get 10,000 points of critical hits at every turn. If they can't learn mathematics, physics and chemistry these days, it's better not to play time travel... In the process of reading, I can very clearly feel the author's general direction. For example, the unfolding of the big picture of the War of Divine Will is very natural. The foreshadowing in the previous text is easy to understand and reasonable. The serious farming text is mixed with a lot of detailed popular science, which is reasonable and well-founded. What's more interesting is that this kind of "popular science" is not very "watery", allowing readers to understand its necessity - a rare ability. The setting of the witch is powerful but not extreme. It is positioned as an important farming and plot catalyst. It plays a vital role in promoting the development of the plot. There is no preaching force to "embarrass" the protagonist, but a reasonable positioning and layout through the world situation in the entire book. It has also become an important factor in promoting the protagonist to make general decisions and choices. Although it is not a single heroine, the emphasis on the emotional line is surprisingly easy to accept - because the protagonist's performance when facing feelings can well reflect that his soul comes from modern times. The author has downplayed many conflicts or entanglements, and did not focus too much on the protagonist's pain, entanglement, and inner torment. Instead, the character's personality and choices, including environmental culture, etc., Naturally contributed to the final result, and it was not painful or annoying. The characters are three-dimensional and full-bodied, with distinct characteristics. There is no cumbersome long description or rhetoric. Each character is vividly written on the page in just a few words. An important trick is that the author will consistently highlight the character's outstanding characteristics and strengthen them from beginning to end. The most typical character is Maisie, the witch who can turn into a pigeon. As long as her lines must contain the word "goo", as long as she is not eating when she appears, it will be accurate. Preparing food or discussing eating, such details cannot take hundreds of words, but the repeated and natural emphasis makes people firmly remember this greedy little witch who speaks with the "coo" sound of a pigeon. Later, it also strengthens a "lucky" attribute. The highlighted paragraphs with this attribute in turn promote the inner thinking and growth of other witches. This kind of intertwined writing techniques and plots are used in countless novels. All in all, although this article has its flaws, for an online novel, it is worth reading! Ps. Literary science dogs, please be mentally prepared to face a storm of blows... And scumbag students too... I wish everyone a good read (๑ ̄ ̫  ̄๑)

Countercurrent Age of Innocence4

Human Arsenal

2.2M9.12,053

Time is a ship, and some people like to regard the years in the early 1990s as the last journey of that innocent era. Jiang Che, who has long ceased to be innocent as the years change, returns against the tide, restarts 1992, and writes about a splendid youth that can finally be properly placed. [Welcome to join the Countercurrent Age of Innocence VIP Group 2: 497283806 (You must order all screenshots to join the group, I will try to talk more this time)]

Curator2

The writing style is very good, and the background and atmosphere of the era are also well created. It describes the turmoil of that era and captures the "truth" of the characters of that era. The success of a character is the foundation of a novel, and this one is particularly well done. What kind of people say what kind of words, what kind of people make what kind of choices, a good author should do the right thing, and a talented writer should be vivid. This book also achieves to a large extent the cause and effect of the inner environment and the various factors, so that when the final result comes out, people feel that it is the choice of this character. The taste of the 1990s. Different people have different feelings about the character of the new century. The author is not only showing everyone the 1990s in his eyes, but also allowing people to reminisce about their own 1990s. There is no shortage of regrets about what they have experienced, and curiosity about what they have not experienced. Under the torrent of the great era, individuals are helpless. No matter what, it is very small. Having a certain prophet does not mean that everything will go smoothly. No matter how good the information is, it still needs suitable execution or realization conditions. The author describes the difficulty of the first pot of gold in the early part of the opening chapter very interestingly. It makes people laugh and have endless aftertaste when reading it. The entire writing style is smooth and concise, humorous and light-hearted, the main characters are vivid (I am a big fan of Secretary Zheng and Lao Biao), and some "special phenomena" that only belong to that era are also displayed appropriately. In short, you will not regret reading this book. Fat enough to be slaughtered

Doomsday Paradise5

All Things Needed

7.2M9.02,632

[The new book "Artifact Report" in 2024 is being serialized] [2023 new book "Yelu Convenience Store" horror super short story is finished and can be slaughtered] "I feel like... My boyfriend wants to kill me." Lin Sanjiu murmured. Thinking of her wealthy, handsome and gentle boyfriend, she couldn't help but shuddered all over. The doomsday hell that was opened by the people around you, It was roaring towards her. **This article is not a cool article**

Curator2

Placeholder This is probably the book I least expect to end... All kinds of incredible adventures in the bizarre apocalyptic world. Encountering this book is like encountering "Harry Potter" as a child. The magical Diagon Alley opens up a whole new world, which is completely different from the other worlds where monsters are defeated and upgraded. The heroine's encounters are like the characters in Uncle Martin's works. Pei Liang, except that it is not so cruel and can kill people at every turn... The imaginative special items make people unable to extricate themselves from the author's peculiar brain circuit. From time to time, the author will add some very obscure allegorical and political thinking about the real world, but I think even readers who are sensitive to this aspect can feel free to read it boldly. The work of conscience is absolutely non-toxic!

Future King6

Future King

Science Fiction

Lazy Speech

1.7M9.34,813

The old army commander who died in the apocalypse was reborn as a new century young man (?) Five hundred years after the end of the apocalypse... "Whenever the BGM sounds in my head, I feel fearless." - Fang Zhao. ---------------- He has written three novels, "Star Hunter", "Back to the Past and Become a Cat", and "Original War Chronicles".

Curator3

A new book written by Chen Ci, a rhapsody about the future in the post-apocalyptic era. It is also a genre that can be enjoyed by both refined and popular people. It is a relaxing and enjoyable read.

Original War Record7

Lazy Speech

2.5M9.3540

This deceiving primitive tribe! "One day, we will return to our hometown. The glory will still be there, and the fire of the Flaming Horn will never be extinguished."

Curator3

I just started reading Chen Ci this year. What's more interesting about this book is that it is suitable for both refined and popular tastes. Lovers of novice novels can find the high points. It is also a good leisure book for readers who have requirements for writing, plot and even characterization. The protagonist has a golden finger, which becomes more obvious as you go to the back. But first of all, it's better to travel to ancient times and travel to primitive society. Bold ideas are difficult to be novel and attractive - how to write about primitive society, many plug-ins cannot be used, and even feudal society has not reached the level. It is nonsense to open a gold finger and take the road of industrial power. There is not even the concept of "country", but overall this book is not ridiculous, the imagination is reasonable, and a heroic picture of the ancestors struggling to survive is displayed before our eyes...

The Capital is Covered with Crowns8

Futian

1.9M8.5106

How sad is it to be reborn in a noble family in Beijing, with an evil uncle in charge of the family, and an orphaned and weak brother living under the shelter of others? In this new dynasty created by the reborns, it was a thing of the past to sail across the oceans and make great inventions. Chen Lan thought that he would be able to sit back and relax by taking charge of the marriage, but the troubles still continued. Since the seniors have already done so with great vigor, why might she keep a low profile and be quiet?

Curator1

One of Futian's high-quality works

Traitor9

Traitor

History

Futian

2.4M8.193

After a ridiculous mistake, Xu Xun, who finally avenged his past revenge, fell into the prosperous Ming Dynasty five hundred years ago. At that time, the world is at peace, Jinling is charming, the capital is majestic, there are endless songs from the Qinhuai River, endless dances from the Huaiyang River, under the peace of the prosperous age, loyal and good people are everywhere, and the ants are not as good as dogs. He, an orphan, is struggling, and he wants to survive but cannot get it. If that's the case, then he might as well just obey the fate and become a glorious traitor! Those loyal and loyal people of the Ming Dynasty who spoke of benevolence, righteousness and morality, your end has come!

Curator3

The best book in Futian so far

Celebrating More Than One Year10

Tricky

3.8M9.77,936

A family that has accumulated good deeds will have more blessings. If you have more blessings, you will suddenly meet a benefactor. If you are lucky to have a good mother, if you are lucky to have a good mother, you will accumulate Yin Gong. Encourage life, help the poor... But who would have known that in life, thanks to Yu Qing, you will ultimately have to make your own path choice, which is what is called "chazhifa": The east wind carries clouds and rain, and the young vines sprout new shoots. Urgent urging is like a frown, washing away the velvet and flowers. When the morning sun comes, the courtyard will be filled with greenery. When I was looking forward to the yellow leaves, I picked several melons. ... ... The film and television series of the same name "Celebrating More Than Years" starring Zhang Ruoyun, Li Qin, Chen Daoming, Wu Gang, etc. Will be broadcast on Tencent Video and iQiyi from November 26.

Curator2

I have read this book no less than eight times, and it is a very favorite book. In terms of thinking, it is not as high as "Jian Ye". It is more like the grievances and hatreds of a family accidentally dragging the people of the world together. But I really prefer this book. The depiction of the skin of feudal society and the bones of slave society is extremely cruel, but the cruel large scroll is dotted with little stars. The warm humanity is very heart-warming. Although it is a time-travel theme, the protagonist's mentality changes gradually and deeply. Some of the embellishments of "Wenzhaogong" also make people laugh. The author has built a convincing story world, and also has certain questioning and discussion on some profound issues such as "AI", "Three Laws" and "Justice". It is worth watching.

Ming Dynasty Noble Family11

Yanjiu

3.1M8.7697

Xiaojiu's new book "My Father-in-law is Kangxi" will be released on May 1, 2022. Please collect and recommend it. The proverb goes: The Shen family in the world came from Wuxing. The Wuxing Shen family, the Runan Zhou family, the Kuaiji Gu family, the Longxi Li family, the Donghai Chen family, and the Zhongshan Zhang family are collectively known as the six great families in China. In the middle of the Ming Dynasty, the aristocratic family's county reputation had long since faded. The Shen family branch established its foothold in Songjiang and became famous and became a prominent family in the world. Just because a modern soul returned to five hundred years ago, was reborn into his ancestors, and became prosperous.

Curator3

This book is very heavy. Those who don't like it think the plot is too slow because they are just short-sighted. Those who like it call it "Little Red Mansion". The author has a profound writing style, exquisite and gorgeous writing style, and the characters are lifelike. The customs, customs and officialdom of the Ming Dynasty are vividly depicted on the page. It is worth reading for those who have patience. It is definitely worth reading. Yes, it is a first-class masterpiece, but it is a pity that the author has been discontinued for a long time. The occasional update feels that the writing is not as smooth as before. It is obvious that the gap has not been regained. It is considered my "lifetime" series. If the author can write well, then he will be slow... If he can't write well, he will be left with a broken copy.

Young Master Qianqiu12

Futian

2.8M7.7417

After a catastrophe, Yue Qianqiu was taken home by Mr. Yue, who was born in a grassroots family and had many descendants. There are aristocratic families in this world, and there are also scholars who think they are noble and correct. There are rivers and lakes in this world, and there are also sects that are unwilling to look down on the imperial court. Confucianism disrupts the law with literature, and chivalry violates the law with martial arts. Disputes and excitement coexist, and opportunities and risks coexist. But before the eagle strikes the sky and the fish leaps into the sea, Yue Qianqiu must solve his status problem. As an adopted son, should he be cautious and dormant, or should he live a carefree life and go his own way?

Curator2

Futian's new book, recommended for the same reasons as above

Ming Dynasty Making a Living Manual13

Futian

3.5M8.6397

The family owns hundreds of acres of fertile land, and is considered a wealthy small landowner. However, at the age of fourteen, he was suddenly called daddy, and his newly acquired fame was about to disappear again. The young scholar Wang Fulin expressed that he was under a lot of pressure. The first of Wang's family mottos: All evils are sexual immorality, and all good deeds are filial piety. At the turn of the Long Dynasty, the world was extravagant and glamorous, but making a living was not easy. Wang Xiaoguan's journey of not taking the ordinary road began.

Curator2

Futian is a stable and prolific author. The layout may not be grand but he has good control over the book. He has never failed to write. He is good at describing the details of strategies. The logic of big or small plots is clear and can withstand scrutiny. His writing style is sophisticated and can withstand careful reading. He can grasp the perspective of the heroine or the hero. He has a profound understanding of people's hearts. He describes the various aspects of officialdom in detail. He is a good helper in the book world. Confession to Miss Futian

It Will Be Night14

Tricky

3.8M9.62,050

Fighting against the sky is endless fun. ...

Curator1

I started reading Mao Ni's books from "Celebrating More Than Years". I feel that his books are full of fun from "fighting against the sky" to "fighting against the earth" and finally "fighting against people". Of course, many people think the writing style is a bit pretentious, but overall it is really worth reading. Reading, it's a pity that the author was ill in the second half of the night and it ended hastily. Otherwise, it could have been a masterpiece. It is much better than the last new work. The latter one is probably the author's past work. The perfunctory feeling is palpable, and I miss the past tricks.