Longhuxuan

Baseball article, fanfic of the comic Ace of Diamonds

A good wizarding novel. The world background is very close to that of the wizarding journey. The promotion method is somewhat similar to the Mathematical Olympiad. The writing style is okay but the character description is slightly inferior.

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I haven't been into basketball writing for a while, but I like it very much. The book reviews of the following three books are all about basketball. Most of the basketball articles that can be read in Qidian are here, and there are still a few books left that are not finished. This book is my first entry into basketball writing. It's very popular in the NBA. The main character is a second-round draft pick in 2001 and joined the Hawks. I read it in one sitting and it's well written. It's relatively good among basketball writing. The advantage is that the game is wonderfully written, the climax of the comedy is well grasped, I have a relatively good understanding of the NBA, and there are no awkward points or childish logic. The disadvantage is that the daily routine and most of the system-related parts in the early stage are boring. Some of the system-related things in this book may be awkward. Basketball stars have their own skills and their strength will change. It feels a bit game-like. The daily and system parts can be skipped without affecting the plot, the main thing is the competition. The complete book should be guaranteed. The author previously had a basketball novel with over 1.8 Million words. There is also a small drawback. Although the plot related to the author and several female characters is well written, it has the flavor of a starting point urban novel. The way of getting along with Americans is slightly different and awkward. In the basketball novel "Guard with a Knife", the golden finger is a meteor that makes the protagonist grow taller and increase his physical potential. The change in physique makes the protagonist's activities stiff. At first, only bounce and strength are reflected. Later, the stiffness gradually becomes less and the flexibility increases, allowing the protagonist to perform more tactics, surprising people. This is a consistent main line. The writing of Shuangdian is good, the creation of the protagonists and supporting characters and the expansion of the relationships between the characters are also very good. The plot of the supporting characters being provoked by the protagonist Dalian is handled well and even very satisfying. There are many flaws in the description of Golden Finger at the beginning. There are no obvious flaws later on, but there are still some micro-grooves. The system flow of "Young Coach of the Blue World", the protagonist is Chinese, he became the acting head coach of the Lakers in 1999 and started his journey of coaching in the NBA. Overall, this is a very good basketball book with outstanding advantages. There is no nonsense, the writing is very good, and the concept is good. It is very enjoyable to read and makes people want to read it to the end. In terms of shortcomings, there are one or two poisonous points in the first few dozen chapters. It is not about the writing style, but I feel that the author has read too few online articles and is not aware of the poisonous points. He has not effectively avoided them, so just ignore them. Also, the system of this book is set up to be a special smartphone, but later it may become unpalatable and become the same as other systems. Some of the system settings, such as giving the protagonist some cards to temporarily improve the player's status, make some people feel that winning is not based on pure tactics. I personally think this setting is okay. Sometimes winning or losing in some pure tactics may not feel real, and this is the basic setting of the book. If you can't accept it, you can't read it. In addition, there are generally some embarrassing professional mistakes written about investment. "The Godfather of Basketball in Sports" is one of the best basketball coaching articles. The protagonist traveled through the 2006-07 season and served as the Rockets coach to coach Yao Yao. After the dynasty, he went to another team. There is a system, but the system's presence is very low. It only appears a few times. Except for the beginning, the system heals the team members well and does not become a poisonous point. Some chapters at the beginning were a little unreasonable, but once I became a head coach, the articles had no shortcomings.

Rabbit Comes to Mow Grass is one of the best writers on basketball. Below are five excellent basketball works by this author, including this book. The first three are excellent, the fourth is quasi-excellent, and the fifth can be read. "Basketball Pope" has no system cheats. The plot is roughly about the protagonist traveling to the United States in 1997, starting as an NBA assistant and gradually using his understanding of player talents and future tactics to become a legendary coach. During this period, I used a small amount of space to write about the three female protagonists, investing in movies, and establishing Facebook company with my brothers. The advantage is that the highs and lows of the game, tactics, utilization of player performance, etc. Are well described. The author is very good at writing jokes and has a lot of laughs. It is reasonable, not childish, not embarrassing, and not white. The disadvantage is that the description of job hunting in the first ten chapters is unreasonable. There is also aesthetic fatigue in the description of the game in the later period (this is also a common problem in sports literature, and the following books also have this problem, so I won't mention it again) "Super King of the Ring" King of the Ring refers to the championship ring. There is a system for non-rebirth, but the presence of the system is very low. The characteristics are similar to those of the Pope. The competition is written in detail, which makes it feel like you are actually there. It is also very enjoyable to watch. The specific plot will not be spoiled. I don't know whether the previous chapters are good or bad, but I jumped directly to more than 100 chapters to see the plot after NBA. "Legend of Basketball" written by the author for 12 years has matured and is very enjoyable to read. This book belongs to the type where the protagonist is relatively smooth sailing. In the early stage, James' template and later technology were completely surpassed. From the second season onwards, there were very few setbacks. It is also very exciting. The protagonist of "The Ball Master" is a traditional assist king point guard who is 1.83 Meters tall. It is the author's third basketball article. It is a little worse than the second "Hungry Wolf" but it is still very good. It is a high-quality product. "Rebirth of the Hayes Tornado" is the author's first basketball article. He travels back to the Rockets and becomes Hayes. The game is wonderfully written, but there are a lot of inexperienced writing in other places that look a bit embarrassing. It's not a high-quality product, so I can watch it

The No. 1 Point guard in the 2010 NBA draft has no golden fingers and relies on talent and hard work. I didn't read it earlier, so I followed my own habit and skipped to Chapter 50 or so and started reading NBA. Generally speaking, the writing is okay and can be read. Recently, the taste of basketball writing has been developed and I have updated it. The difference is mainly due to the problem of the author's writing style. Some places are a little awkward. In addition, I want to write about the game exciting but can't grasp the key points. The wonderful passes and buzzer beaters are used frequently and vigorously, and I don't know how to use them in a hurry. "Fighting the World" is a masterpiece of basketball literature. Let's summarize the story of how the smooth-flowing Destiny's Child coupled with YY Stallion's basketball system swept through all kinds of grass fans in the American football world. The protagonist is an Australian-Chinese, half-Chinese mixed race. He participated in the NBA draft in the 1990s and was systematic. The writing on competitions, jokes, etc. Is all good. Different from the three basketball articles below this book, this one does not abuse the protagonist at all and has very few twists and turns. It is a smooth-flowing Destiny's Child type. The protagonist is very strong in the first season and breaks records and gradually becomes invincible (although it is very refreshing to read this way, but after seeing that he is basically invincible, I personally don't want to read it anymore). In addition, this system is also special. Most of the system points obtained by the protagonist are used to increase fame, improve the favorability of female fans of celebrities, maintain favorability after being a fan, and reduce the chance of ntr. Compared with YY Stallion, winning the game and receiving rewards can increase the favorability of female characters, reduce the chance of being cuckolded, etc. Although there are yy elements, the writing is okay. If you accept the setting, there is no bad point in the writing. "Superstar" is a quasi-high-quality, systematic article. He joined the Spurs in 1999, and after two years and one championship, he came out to lead the team himself. The plot and everything are very good. The only flaw is that some of the data are a little unreasonable.

A player travels into the game and becomes an NPC. The player has the ability to quickly upgrade and learn, and can also issue tasks to the player. This has touched the g-spot of many people. The shortcoming is that there are too many poisonous points in the early stage, basically in terms of writing. After escaping from the base at the beginning, there are constant awkwardness. I really couldn't stand it and skipped to the plot after the game's open beta. There were much less poisonous points later, and it was very enjoyable to watch.

Fans of A Song of Ice and Fire (Game of Thrones). I just read a little bit, and when I saw the author's "Summary of Book Friends' Opinions on This Book" in the related works, I decided to add this book to my book list. This is a serious author. I believe that the books written by such an author are good. I suggest that if you want to read it, you should also read that chapter first, and you will basically understand the style.

In a basketball novel, Goldfinger is a shooting star that makes the protagonist grow taller and increase his physical potential. The change in physique makes the protagonist's movements stiff. At first, only bounce and strength are reflected. Later, the stiffness gradually becomes less and the flexibility increases, allowing the protagonist to perform more tactics and surprise people. This is a consistent main line. The writing of Shuangdian is good, the creation of the protagonists and supporting characters and the expansion of the relationships between the characters are also very good. The plot of the supporting characters being provoked by the protagonist Dalian is handled well and even very satisfying. There are many flaws in the description of Golden Finger at the beginning. There are no obvious flaws later on, but there are still some micro-grooves. This is the seventh basketball article in this book. Later, I may summarize the basketball articles and put them into the reviews of one or two books. Seven books take up space. The basketball articles are not graded, and the bad ones are not included. They can be read in one sitting. In addition, the basketball articles are more solid and focus on basketball and reality. Basically, there will not be too many surprises. The lower limit is relatively high and it is difficult to divide the full score evenly.

I put this book back on top to recommend another book, "The Crazy Escape Game in the City" by Feilu. Com, the darkest dark novel I have ever read. An ordinary young man was framed inexplicably (the enemy force is the Chinese government force, so I dare to write). At this time, he gained the ability to revert to death. In the process of escaping - failed to be killed - and resurrected again and again, he miraculously survived with the ability of reverting to death, and gradually uncovered the conspiracy behind it. The writing is average, with a lot of poisonous points, but the concept is perfect, so I put it on the book list. You won't read this book just for the writing. Most people won't be able to accept it, but a few will like it crazily. Book review of "The Deep Summoner of the End of the World": Darkness to the End of the World, a new book, and it was very good after reading it. It is still a rebirth and return to the routine before the end of the world. The protagonist is purely dark, decisive in killing, and has no poisonous points for the time being. It is a cool story. There are some deliberately dark contents in the book, so don't read it if you don't like it. The shortcomings are that a few chapters introduce a new thing and write too much about my thoughts, which is watery. In addition, the author's writing style is mediocre. Occasionally there are things he wants to express but can't write, which makes him feel so strong and bored. It's a bit embarrassing that he is so bored. . Rating 4.0

The new book by the author of "God-Level Sword Soul System" and "Hokage: The Strongest Shock Escape". After experiencing the failure of the fantasy transformation, I came back to write fan fiction. The author's fan fiction is very good. This one is currently a seedling, I look forward to it!

The author of "Naruto: The Strongest Kakashi" has a new book, and the writing is guaranteed to be complete

Infinite flow, the world is full of two-dimensional animation, data flow (the kind with blood and mana, and equipment with detailed attributes, but there will be no description of how much blood an enemy loses after a slash in battle), the son of the reincarnation world. It's a little awkward at the beginning, but the more you write, the better. You deserve unlimited streaming of the best quality. Let's talk about another advantage. Each world in this book does not exceed one hundred chapters, and the few chapters are only about forty. It is very good for the rhythm. This is the best infinite flow rhythm. If the infinite flow has more than one hundred chapters for each world, the excitement will plummet. Speaking of shortcomings, whatever is missing is exactly what is present. Although it is not so direct and has been slightly modified, it is embarrassing to see too much. In addition, when it comes to treating various anime heroines, I have often tried them all and become addicted to them, but they just don't like them. I write about good and evil twice, which is not pleasing to me. Personal rating: 4.0+

This book was written several years ago. I suddenly remembered it and added it to it today. The protagonist travels through the systemless world and joins the Yinsha Sect, a demonic sect. The golden finger is a small tower that he accidentally bought, which can combine low-level ghosts into high-level ghosts. Therefore, the protagonist has capital, but his own qualifications are not good and he needs more training resources. He continues to plunder and embarks on the path of a big devil. Except for the rushed ending, this is a very good cultivation novel.

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Excellent basketball article. Let's summarize the story of how the smooth-flowing Destiny's Child coupled with YY Stallion's basketball system swept through all kinds of grass fans in the American football world. The protagonist is an Australian-Chinese, half-Chinese mixed race. He participated in the NBA draft in the 1990s and was systematic. The writing on competitions, jokes, etc. Is all good. Different from the three basketball articles below this book, this one does not abuse the protagonist at all and has very few twists and turns. It is a smooth-flowing Destiny's Child type. The protagonist is very strong in the first season and breaks records and gradually becomes invincible (although it is very refreshing to read this way, but after seeing that he is basically invincible, I personally don't want to read it anymore). In addition, this system is also special. Most of the system points obtained by the protagonist are used to increase fame, improve the favorability of female fans of celebrities, maintain favorability after being a fan, and reduce the chance of ntr. Compared with YY Stallion, winning the game and receiving rewards can increase the favorability of female characters, reduce the chance of being cuckolded, etc. Although there are yy elements, the writing is okay. If you accept the setting, there is no bad point in the writing.

Excellent basketball article. The previous book by the author of "The Pope of Basketball", Lord of the Rings refers to many championship rings. There is a system for non-rebirth, but the presence of the system is very low. The features are similar to those of The Pope. The games are written in detail and give you an immersive feeling. It is also very enjoyable to watch. The disadvantage is that you will start to get tired after watching more than half of it, because most of the content is written about game after game. Although it is wonderfully written, the routines will be exhausted after watching too many games. It feels like playing too many games in the career mode of a basketball game and wanting to skip the game and watch the small plot in the middle. Some people may not like some of the chapters at the beginning of this book. Anyway, I jumped directly to more than a hundred chapters to see the plot after NBA.

The first place in the prehistoric category. Travel through time and become the illegitimate son of the Dragon King of the North Sea in Journey to the West. The Golden Finger genre has unlimited flow and can travel to worlds such as Gourd Brothers, A Chinese Ghost Story, and the Lotus Lantern. After reading dozens of chapters, the author's writing is very good, and the writing style is good and non-toxic. The highlight is that the world traveled by the Calabash Brothers and others has been reasonably expanded and completed. I read it in one go and couldn't stop. It's a masterpiece in the Journey to the West genre, and the several world-traveling stories are also very well written. The author himself conceived many things besides the original work. It's just that the writing of Zhetian is a little lacking. After all, everyone is too familiar with it and it's hard to expand on it. On the contrary, everyone can see at a glance that it doesn't fit the original work. Personal rating: 4.5

The update has been suspended for seven months, but it has become a scam. After looking back, I resumed the update in December and now it is still stable even though it is updated daily. The protagonist traveled to another world and became a snake and became a hunter in the main god space (the purpose of the reincarnation mission is to kill reincarnations and other hunters). In addition to regular mandatory reincarnation missions, he usually spends his time in the other world of swords and magic and Warcraft. The protagonist slowly evolves from a snake to a dragon. He does not abuse the protagonist in a domineering style. The author promises that he will not regenerate his body. Some places are full of cannibalism and some are heavy-handed. The reincarnation worlds currently experienced include Anaconda, Transformers, Pacific Rim, Avengers, League of Legends, etc.

A new book by the author of "Spring and Autumn I am the King". After reading it, I personally think it is one of the best historical texts. In order to write the book, the author conducted in-depth research on Qin's laws. I recommend a refreshing article by Feilu. Com called "The Great Ming Dynasty's Traitor Yan Song", which uses the traitor system to travel through time and become Yan Song. This book should be said to be a high-quality novel for beginners. Many parts are very reasonable, some of the refreshing points are well written, and there are few embarrassing points, but it does not deviate from the essence of a novel for beginners. If you just want to take a lazy sip of cool writing and don't want to use your brain but don't want to be fed a huge poison, then this book is very suitable.