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Works of female video masters The writing is not very good, there are many typos and wrong sentences, and the routines are quite outdated. This article is a bit of a no-brainer genre, with no logic to speak of, just unprincipled abuse. It doesn't focus on writing, but those who like a relaxed atmosphere can read it to pass the time.

Recently, I saw a lot of places to read this book, and I read a little bit. It is different from Xiu Liao, and it is like ordinary protagonist halo articles. After reading one or two chapters, I felt it was okay, but after reading dozens of chapters, I felt a little watery and surrounded by a middle-class aura. Probably because the protagonist is still a high school student... The levels set are also a bit confusing. Many times it's okay if the author doesn't explain. But if he explains too much, it feels like he's talking back and forth. Overall, it's not that interesting, but it's still better than the average routine article! At least you can watch it!

Recommended by the book shortage, this book is suitable for readers who can think about it. The author's writing skills are average, and the emotional part needs to be filled in by the brain, otherwise you may not understand it! It's not that great, but it's more interesting than the same cool and trivial articles. The chapters before subscribing seemed pretty good, but after I started subscribing, the characters in it began to become inexplicable. It felt like every character (protagonist + supporting character) had a tendency to have schizophrenia... The more I read, the more awkward I felt. The characters always changed their thoughts suddenly, as if they were affectionate one second and were about to draw swords the next... The overall situation is very large, and each character has relatively complex emotions and stories, but there is always a lack of excess and real psychological description, which makes the reading not smooth! The description of emotions is really not very good. The complex emotions and psychology of the characters are expressed as if they are insane... Very superficial.

It is said to be a fast-travel novel, but it actually looks like a game novel. Each small world is a mission. Except for the protagonist and her cat, everyone else in the mission is like an NPC. They have no soul and only exist according to the settings. Overall: It's not as good-looking as the game novels, and it's not as humane as the quick-travel novels. Plus, there are a lot of typos, and it's very awkward to read!

The author's writing is not very good, and many related words are wrongly written. At the beginning, the article looked relatively light and humorous, but in the middle, the heroine still looked heartless and pretended to be crazy, which was a bit inconsistent! The storyline is very good, but the description of the characters is not very good, and the characters have no sense of growth. This chapter says that there are many comments about the heroine being SB, and that's how it feels when you read it! The setting where the heroine is sometimes normal and sometimes off-line was not written well. It feels like the plot is being pushed bluntly in this way, which is not as good as a new book!

The beginning is a bit scary, but that's just the beginning. After the beginning, I feel a little tired, and the large number of words describing the tense atmosphere seem a bit deliberate. From the current point of view, if the heroine is just an average person's psychological quality, it is not suitable for the heroine of this kind of story. In this case, it would be meaningless if the heroine can survive only by her halo! It's pretty good for newcomers to watch! It may be difficult for old readers to read because there are many loopholes in the text! Those who are familiar with the routine will see through it!

There are still many typos, the logic is not confusing but not very rigorous either, many places are not written in detail, and there are big jumps! It can be read by those who are not familiar with reading, it is much better than some novice novels! Although the beginning of the chapter has a middle-class vibe, it is very positive!

I only read the beginning and can't read any more! The plot is just like a normal rebirth novel. The main reason is that I have no interest in this kind of article where the protagonist's brain usually only relies on the rebirth of the prophet to achieve his goal! And from the beginning, I don't like the setting of the heroine and the hero, it's like a reunion after breaking up... The heroine has experienced a lot in her previous life. She still didn't see many things clearly after her rebirth. I don't know if the misunderstandings will be revealed later. But in this crisis-ridden context, the heroine is very smart, and her way of handling things is simple and a bit naive. She can only do it with the help of prophet! The content is bland and the writing is average!

Chasing is better and harder... It is a time-travel theme, but it is an independent time-travel, and the identity is not deliberately hidden. There is no emotional line yet. The protagonist and supporting characters are all vivid and have obvious personality traits! The writing is as good as ever, not rigid! It's not a Madonna-like style of writing, and it doesn't have much of a heroine aura. The emotional line is well described, frank and not pretentious, but what is the situation with the heroine who smells like a scumbag! (Funny sayings from some book reviews)

It looks pretty good so far, but this chapter always brings up inexplicable speculations! The description of human nature is relatively detailed, the plot changes rapidly, and the heroine is sentimental, righteous, brave and strategic!

I've been reading Yunda's new book recently. It's even harder to follow, so I just read the previous one. In the early days, Yun Da's writing style was not very good. There were quite a lot of routines in this article, and the plot twists in the early stage were also relatively blunt. Of course, you can still watch it if you don't have high requirements. People with obsessive-compulsive disorder should not read it... Maybe you will be pissed to death after reading the 90th chapter... The heroine's character is a bit messy, and it will conflict with the setting. I can only say that it is what the author wrote!

Hmm... I've only read less than three chapters and I've made no less than ten comments... What I couldn't stand was that the heroine who was being strangled could still talk at length, and then her face was described as turning from red to white... No matter how delicate you are, I can't bear to look at you anymore. You have to be pretty good at posing!

I recently watched the anime, so I came back to review the plot. Well... Students who are attracted by anime, please pay attention⚠️ It's better not to read this version of the novel. There are many typos and bugs. The second time you read it, you feel like you are counting the bugs. Overall, it's a book that's on the passing line! This still includes emotional points!

A very good book It mainly writes about the female protagonist's experience in the entertainment industry. The hardships and plot are well written. There is not much description of the male protagonist. The emotional drama is just a part of modifying the female protagonist's life to show the wonderful life experience of the heroine after her sudden rebirth (or soul transfer). It was very attractive in the early stage, but as it went on, the plot became more and more protracted, with obvious water characters, and a lot of content began to appear over and over again. Although it was not a bad ending, it was not as attractive as it was starting to be! The characteristic of this book is that it is not bloody, cliche, misunderstandings or unnecessary twists and turns. Although the timeline is a bit messy, it does not affect reading! Overall, this is a very inspirational novel! The biggest shortcoming is that in order to highlight the quality and intelligence of the heroine, the surrounding celebrities or agents are portrayed as slightly stupid and petty! Although the real top stars are not as good as the real ladies, they have also experienced great storms. They can't be so petty in their methods, right? This doesn't give us a sense of how outstanding the heroine is, it's just that the people around her are not outstanding... It's like trying to pull out a general by rubbing her insides. The hair-cutting part of the later plot of "The Suspect" was too stiff. The biggest bug in this article made the heroine instantly become stupid. It felt like watching a stupid drama... The inexplicable plot

Seventy percent of the book is finished. The story is fairly fluent, but there is a lot of nonsense, the writing is immature, and the words are not expressive. It made me want to complain about every paragraph... A very good story is written in a silly and sweet way... Please read it in a tangled manner! The further you look back, the more embarrassing it becomes. Wouldn't it be better to write a good supernatural story? The plot where your mind wanders and your mind wanders for a while is really awkward! I can't hold on anymore...

It seemed pretty good at first, but as I went on, there were more typos and incorrect sentences. The plot is good, the characters have distinct personalities, and it's very graphic! But the whole book looks like a pirated copy, with all kinds of mistakes... It's suitable for primary school students to use as a test paper for wrong sentences and typos!

The combination of ancient and modern writing styles is neither particularly good nor bad. Can see but cannot read. The heroine is very stubborn, and her emotional line is a bit Mary Sue. The heroine's achievements are exaggerated in writing, but a truly smart person is inconspicuous! Generally speaking, it is quite cheerful, not sad, there are some tears, but more laughter!

What can I say about this work! A routine article that has been serialized for many years, with many typos! I came here because I had nothing to read. Personally, I feel that the heroine's character is just that, not lovable, and there is no reasonable explanation for her talents after being reborn. My mother still doesn't doubt it... This article only has routines. As for other things, they sometimes disappear, sometimes they are good and sometimes they are bad.

After watching 40% of it, I felt that it was a pity to abandon it and that it was boring to watch! There are a lot of foreshadowings at the beginning, and it is tempting to read step by step, but as you go on, there are more and more loopholes, and the reading is a bit confusing. There are too many exaggerations, both humorous and not humorous, and it becomes more and more boring to watch. Especially the facial expressions change from start to finish, completely contrary to the background! There is a sense of absurdity that a small person can still dream of doing big things! The further the story goes, the more obvious the halo of the heroine becomes, and the writing becomes rougher and rougher!

There are a lot of typos, but the plot is okay. If you like rebirth stories, you can read it! The descriptions of the male and female protagonists are detailed, and the descriptions of the male supporting characters are acceptable, but the descriptions of the Three Lives and Three Worlds are sparse and confusing. The other characters are a bit far-fetched, as if there are no good people around except the hero and heroine! It can only be said that it is suitable for a cursory look, not a detailed reading!