Upon's Personal Online Writing Experience

@zzl Read it for the first time on December 22, 2022. An old book about the struggle for hegemony in the late Sui Dynasty. It has no highlights. 3 Points.

@zzl Read it for the second time on 2022.11.26. From the perspective of a traditional novel, Thriller Paradise is definitely not a masterpiece. It has a completely indifferent narrative rhythm, an unpredictable main story line, and casual gags. But it is precisely these unconstrained, wanton, and random stews that are extremely consistent with Internet literature. This is why this book has become a representative of Internet literature. 9 Points

@zzl Read it for the first time on 2022.05.15. Originally, there was "tz no dream" in the book list, but because some of the H plots in it were censored, I had to delete it. . . . . Japanese Warring States Period, such a niche subject, is also a very old book. It was only because I reminisced about my youth and replayed Taiko Retsuden that I started following this series again. The Takeda family has the biggest golden finger among the several Warring States books I have read. . . . But it also has the most battlefield legends and the most plot twists (it's very tough, but it was a work made many years ago). It is not suitable for passers-by who have no background in the Japanese Warring States Period (passers-by will probably not read it), nor is it suitable for readers who have a deep understanding of the Warring States Period (white), so even if it is only placed in the circle of the Japanese Warring States Period, it is not among the top. But just because of its coolness and hard-hitting twists, it is also worth recalling by gamers. 5.5 Points

@zzl Read it for the first time on 2022.10.19. Fate is that Jiang Wei's biography was unsatisfactory, so he looked for similar novels to read. When he couldn't find it, he randomly picked Shuchen. I don't want to use the "heroic spirit" of the bad street to briefly summarize this book. Specifically, the details of the prime minister's dedication; the elaboration of the complex political situation in the late Shu Han Dynasty; the regretful completion of the heroic dream that Liu Guan and Zhang started; the Shu ministers did it, and did it well. Of course, the disadvantage is that the story is very weak and there are no big ups and downs. 7 Points

@zzl Read it for the first time on July 9, 2022. There's nothing too eloquent to say, it's a clear and refreshing article, don't ask for logical thinking, it's a big job at the end. . . . . It's quite refreshing to watch without thinking, 4 points

@zzl Read it for the first time on 2022.06.05. Looking back, the first part of the author's sand sculpture unlimited flow series is actually not very outstanding at all. Maybe my threshold is too high. 4.5 Points

@zzl Read it for the first time on May 20, 2022. I don't know how to evaluate it. Unimaginable imagination, complicated settings, and bizarre scripts. X points.

@zzl Overall, it's a good product but not the first.

@zzl Read it for the first time on April 28, 2022. Looking at this novel from the current point of time, I really can't say many wonderful things. But it was also this novel that created the peak of the flow of players squeezed by the Fourth Natural Disaster and Different Worlds. Coupled with the good rhythm and brisk plot, it is natural for it to become a hit. But as I said, this is a novel that is difficult to pick up again after putting it down. The mediocre template upgrade, the tensionless camp duel, and all the characters with facial makeup are the reasons why this novel tends to be dull. All in all, he is a pioneer but not a flag-bearer, 5 points

@zzl Read it for the first time on 2021.12.08. The author's desire of "a relaxing ghost-fighting journey with a tearful story in the middle" was achieved perfectly. This book basically does not have a main plot line, and it only strings together the protagonist's growth process in the island, so there are not many settings, backgrounds and foreshadowings. It's not so much a suspense thriller as it is an invincible dog food, with a light and gentle style, full of warmth. The author ends abruptly at just the right place, without putting any more burden on the readers. There are no explosive points, but there are many warm and tearful points. 7.5 Points

@zzl Read it for the first time on 2021.12.04. A very complete unlimited flow work, each copy has the author's unique thoughts and deductions. Compared with the author's previous work, the language and text are much more refined and interesting, and the fighting scenes are no longer lengthy. The biggest shortcoming is that the villain's supporting characters are extremely mentally retarded, which is why this work cannot be a high-quality one. When setting up Shuangdian, we did not conceive of complex plots and profound characterizations, but simply mechanically reduce intelligence to promote Shuangdian. It was very enjoyable and very thin. 6 Points

@zzl Read it for the first time on November 13, 2021. The brainwaves of saucy words flow infinitely. The quality of the copies fluctuates, whether it is super god or super ghost. A classic representative of digging holes but not filling them, he is known as the unbeliever who fills them up with extras. 7 Points

@zzl Read it for the first time on September 17, 2021. This is a web article with a very unique style. There has never been such a book without ups and downs. The background setting and plot development all rely on dialogue. It is even more outrageous that the key characters in it either only speak half of the words, or like the protagonist, tell lies 90% of the time. This has also led to a lukewarm work. The layout of the past decades has to be explained by the chapter where the author enters. Not to mention that this book is an urban supernatural drama, and the description of urban food (based on Shanghai) far exceeds the description of combat. There are also very few characters compared to other novels. But even such a strange book made me read it in one sitting (even though I was still a little dissatisfied with the ending). I would call it an anti-conventional novel, with a score of 7.5.

@zzl Read it for the first time on August 10, 2021. The third part of Feng Chaohuang's Sand Sculpture Infinite Streaming. Running account, no system, failed, 4 points

@zzl Read it for the first time on August 9, 2021. I have to lament that deleting the branch plots and maintaining a certain scale of the main plot without overexpansion is the reason why my final impression of "Lin Yuan Xing" is better than that of "Mushen", although I still think it is great that the dragon slayer in "Mushen" finally turns into an evil dragon. The protagonist is still an extremely miserable but always optimistic template written by Zhai Zhu. In order to break the unfair educational resources, he gradually expands his world view, becomes stronger and changes his destiny. This work adds a lot of Dihua elements, and the writing style is more humorous while concealing the heaviness of changing the tragic fate of the book. Coupled with Zhaizhu's ambitious attempt to achieve multi-book linkage and create a "Zhaizhu Universe" this time, it is particularly difficult for this work, which seems to be packed with many elements, to learn from the lessons of the previous work and achieve extra points of simplification. But I still have to say that the concept is a bit dull and shallow compared to The Shepherd's God, which is a demerit point. 7.5 Points

@zzl Read it for the first time on May 12, 2021. Pokémon Modern City Fanfic is a work that even people who don't watch Pokémon much can read. You can read it in the Pet Beast article, but if you don't like it, I think it's too white. My personal rating is 6.

@zzl Read it for the first time on February 19, 2021. What this book depicts is that the protagonist, as a self-confessed time traveler, meets the so-called player after sleeping in another world for 800 years, and begins to gradually understand the deepest truth about the player, the system, and the other world. This book is a classic regretful book, in a way it made me feel like watching "Lord of the Mysteries". On the positive side, the author has a lot of originality in the plot design (some reversals are throughout the text), which is very similar to the mystery to this extent. The setting is also very unique (although it is a bit cumbersome at the beginning), so it is not an upgraded novel. However, what is a pity? The author's plot rhythm is very strange, and the climax does not come completely when the twist is revealed. My experience is "Oh, this plot design is excellent, but that's all." Second is the character design. The author still treats most (or even all) of the supporting characters as tool men. In this atmosphere, the protagonist is more like a tool man in the writing. This is the biggest flaw. . . . . The resulting atmosphere is not well-done, some of the plots are weird (some are deliberately for the sake of reversal), and the settings are gradually generic, all of which make the feeling of regret even stronger. I just hope that the author can make further progress, and it will be even better if the next work can break through. 5.5 Points

@zzl Read it for the first time on February 9, 2021. It is a completely different reading experience from "Warring States Blessing Stars". In comparison, Tie Shou is not similar to the style of online writing, nor is it similar to traditional Warring States literature. It has its own unique description method and story deduction. The work mainly describes the story of Oda Nobunaga's subordinates, who are modern people who are familiar with the history of Japan's Warring States Period, but who grow up and compete for hegemony step by step in the gradually distorted history. The work breaks away from the limitations of relying on Taige's determination to pass on the water plot (this is the story of the lucky star), but it is also similar to the lucky star. In the middle period, the author began a historical deduction unique to the book, which greatly enriched the content of the Warring States Period and gave readers a more sense of participation. In addition, the author's detailed background description and character description are also very classic in old books. I gave it a 7.5 Because of the Lucky Star Chronicles, and I also gave it a 7.5 Out of balance, but the fun aspect of this book is actually more outstanding.

@zzl Read it for the first time on November 17, 2020. This is one of the few high-quality unlimited streams in recent years. All are self-created plot dungeons with a certain real background. In these dungeons, the protagonist gradually gains abilities and breaks his destiny in the main world of the old American Gods and Cthulhu. The problem lies in the detail and excitement between copies. There are highs and lows, but overall it is very good. 8 Points

@zzl Read it for the first time on 2020.11.02. Let's leave aside the big scandal of the author's real-person dialogue, and let's discuss the book alone. At a time when the red line on ghost themes has been tightened, novels with "ghosts" have become a taboo. Needless to say, the author has castrated himself, and even surviving has become a luxury. I'm glad that such a novel has appeared. It doesn't pretend to be a thriller, but is really scary at its core (although I don't like some of the sensational parts), but it brought back my memories of being scared by the old corpses in the mountain village and not turning off the lights. The work is limited to the scope of a city (basically), hitting just the right place, without a grand background. These reductions better reflect the creation of a terrifying atmosphere. This book tells the story of a man whose parents disappeared, inherited a haunted house, met ghosts, fought with ghosts, and found himself. 8.5 Points (as a bonus for the supernatural)