🥳a Precious Record of the Time When Humans Tamed and Worked in the Early Days

Time travel, overhead, maneuvering. The heroine of the secret agent traveled to the dynasties of the four kingdoms, and was bound to a reborn husband with a wicked heart. The two of them were civil and military, one in politics and one in business. They worked hard and worked together to solve major events, uncovered major mysteries, and became powerful figures. Happy ending. In fact, the title of the book reveals the main content of the book very well (.) It is essentially a traditional cool novel about a strong woman and a strong man. The male protagonist and the female protagonist are both bosses and geniuses in any field. No matter how powerful the character is, he will be crazily defeated when he meets the male and female protagonist. It is very not tense and has no suspense. The plot is rich, the characters are well-rounded, and it's fun to read. But the transition is very abrupt, and the logic is very simple and crude. It feels like the author needs the plot to develop, so he just randomly changes characters and reasons to support the scene and make the story longer. Speaking of which, the full text is nearly four million words. If the protagonist and the various villains didn't play off each other all the time, playing "I have great wisdom, so I won't kill you, let's negotiate", this story could save at least half the word count. Also, the top and second-in-commands are visiting other countries privately all day long. Do the people know that you are so dishonest? ? ?

Online games. The female protagonist with a good background was cheated by the male partner with a good background during the closed beta, so she made a comeback during the open beta. Accompanied by the male protagonist with a good background, she finally had a good career and love. Yes, it's the kind of online game writing that pretends to be fun. It's so pretentious and exaggerated that I often wonder whether the author has ever played online games. Anyway, I don't know why the underworld bosses, business tycoons, and elites from aristocratic families are addicted to games, and they can all dominate the games... Do they have a 72-hour day? After reading it, I thought, this spicy chicken online game has a casual plot, random dungeons, and casual battles. It must have taken advantage of being the only holographic online game in the world to have players. Hot hen merchants monopolize business and defraud people of money! The story is not interesting either. The protagonist is just running around, forming gangs, or causing trouble, and he and the supporting characters choose a routine: [This sister is not easy to fall in love with at first sight! ][This thick-browed man betrayed me! ][These are long-lost relatives and friends! ][This idiot is just jealous that I have money, looks, and a man! ], And then the plot ended, manual smile. Jpg. Love line? In a novel of this flavor, does the emotional line need any special comment? The protagonist is saccharine, the supporting characters are unlovable, and there are no surprises. In fact, the writing is not very bad, and it is not embarrassing to the point of being difficult to swallow. It was once considered a masterpiece of a generation, right (?). But it's not to my taste. If I don't have mushrooms at home, I won't finish reading them_(:з」∠)_

It's hard to calm down. Jpg I will always like Zichuan. Jpg

Ancient proverbs, fantasy, time travel. The heroine majoring in civil engineering travels to another world and decides to rely on her craftsmanship to make a career and live independently. However, she slowly discovers that she could have lived a life relying on metaphysics, and everything around her is not simple. The early and middle stages were so exciting! ! ! The female protagonist's entrepreneurial line, the male protagonist's life experience line, and the fantasy world view line are all running in parallel and interconnected with each other. The mysteries are endless and impossible to stop. The author's male and female protagonists are still very unique, they are a arrogant technical nerd and a witchy little pitiful one (???), And their emotional lines are quite exciting, fiery and tender. Other characters follow the stage and sing, each with their own splendor, liveliness and cuteness. I just want to scream and enjoy watching it. Unfortunately, the standard dropped sharply in the later period, and the original advantages turned into flaws... It's great for the heroine to start her career at home, and then build infrastructure to serve people's livelihood and ultimately be admired by all the people. To be honest, in the mid-term, I thought that the male and female protagonists would go to the fiefdom with a thick layer of bird shit, and the female protagonist would start construction there. However, they ended up staying in the imperial capital, subduing a coup and successfully establishing a new dynasty. If building a house is the main line, then let the big designer concentrate on construction and build more. Don't always give her the task of fighting the boss with force and wit, and just hand over Mary Sue arrows. Her house has not built an imperial city yet! ! ! ! ! ! All the explosive points of the male protagonist faded away when the climax of the plot came. He didn't make achievements at the border, he didn't go to the fiefdom to show his ambitions, he didn't confront his relatives and enemies head-on, he didn't even hold a splendid press conference to announce his true identity. The male protagonist is responsible for the political struggle and intrigue, but when he is absent from the highlight moments, the entire plot is incomplete. In the final battle, the heroine and the boss went from chatting and talking to stabbing and blowing up the house. The male protagonist Sang is really an excellent housekeeper. The fantasy worldview line ended abruptly at the last ten percent. The conflict between the capable and ordinary people, and the blood feud between the capable and the royal family ended in the same fantasy way. The reader finally accepted that building a house requires a fantasy setting. Before entering the final battle, he was thrown into the trash can. He lifted it high, but then put it down gently. It should be said that the plot design is exquisite, linking each link, but the focus is too small. There is obviously a whole chessboard space, but all the overt and covert struggles are crammed into a small corner. Many things that should be used cannot be used, and the logic is difficult to straighten out. There are a lot of bugs, the structure is messy, and it will break down in the later stage, but I still think it looks really good.

As the old saying goes, officialdom. The female protagonist traveled through time and became the male protagonist's child bride, but was later abandoned and almost died. In order to avenge her grievances, the woman disguised herself as a man and took the imperial examination to become an official. In the process of pursuing the truth, she discovered that her husband's "ungrateful" behavior had a hidden agenda, which led to a major rebellion. Later, she and the male protagonist broke the situation and defended the peace of the country. There are many articles about women disguising themselves as men, and there are also articles about women disguising themselves as men to take the imperial examinations. However, there are too few articles about women disguising themselves as men and serving as officials in the court without losing their celebrity status. The brilliance of this article lies in the heroine's interpretation of "scholar", who cultivates oneself, manages the family, governs the country, and brings peace to the world. She truly believes in this and works hard to establish a heart for the world and a destiny for the people. What's the best thing about official writing? It's not about being a general or a prime minister, or being treacherous in the court, it's about the character of a scholar. The author wanted to express her own opinions through the mouth of the character, but she still gave the heroine the greatest freedom. A child bride who was born into poverty and eventually became the prime minister. The heroine was not kidnapped by any doctrine or dogma. She challenged everything that bound her, including emotion, gender, power, and class. Even in the idealized book world, she is still thinking, understanding, struggling, and innovating. This is rare. I have seen some authors, when it comes to expressing their thoughts, fall into emotional catharsis and deliberate preaching, leaving people speechless. But the logic and rhythm of the whole text are very problematic. For example, the male and female protagonists' rocket-like promotions are too exaggerated. The words and deeds of other people cannot be self-contained and serve the plot8. Both the good and the bad guys can open their eyes from time to time and pretend to come up with the correct answer. In the later stage, the planning and arrangement are as boring as just making up reasons for the known results. The problem with rhythm is mainly water injection. The content of the imperial examination, becoming an official, revenge, and romance is rich enough, and there is no need to rely on the reaction of the parents and the public to support the word count. The process of several main cases in the book is written like an outline, but the branch plots are detailed and confusing. How can I sum it up... The text is good, but there is no way to fill it with water (x).

Apocalypse. The male protagonist who is addicted to zombies finds the heroine Bai Yueguang who has turned into a zombie. With his extraordinary abnormal personality, he turns the heroine into a zombie king. He leads a group of zombies and zombies to destroy the major forces, defeats the big boss who is also addicted to zombies, and dominates the apocalypse. The story is quite novel. Really, after all, who has ever seen such a perverted person? Jpg Although the words are harsh, it will also arouse curiosity. I want to see how the snake spirit disease can produce snake spirit in the apocalypse! However, the concentration of snake essence in the book is too high. The main characters are all kinds of perverts, and they are very non-mainstream. It is enough to read hundreds of thousands of words, but it is easy to get tired after spending more than a million words with non-mainstream! In the first half, I still feel fresh about the snake spirits, and I am also touched by the morbid obsession between the male and female protagonists. I also look forward to the fighting between the forces in the apocalypse. I really want to doze off after watching the rest. The whole story is driven by the snake spirit becoming sick, the big boss becomes sick, the villain acts stupid, the protagonist shows abnormality, and the plot is over... I really hope to meet normal ordinary people, but they are almost dead in the book. Oh yes, there is also the Doomsday Family Ethics Theater, Goosemeiziying. The ending didn't fill the hole well, anyway, it's enough to have a perverted and non-mainstream catwalk show by Zhi Jing Bi! Probably the world view and plot development all serve the characters, but the characters have no other image that can be established except for the snake essence. They are extremely flat and labeled. All in all, the idea is quite strange and interesting, but it is too obsessed with snake essence and ignores the logic and plot.

Atypical cultivator. The heroine was originally a silly sweet girl (?) Who was persecuted by evil forces and became a disaster star for the world, so she broke the pot and took on the responsibility of a comedian to break the curse of the declining god (?), And battled wits and courage with a group of gods. With her extraordinary clear thinking and the golden finger of a ***, she finally broke the deadlock and figured out what she was (?). In fact, it feels more like a fantasy adventure in another world, but with the upgrade system of cultivating immortals. There is no difference between the immortal world and the mortal world except for the level of force... It would also be very smooth if the setting of the powerful Douzong is so terrifying (x). What kind of rare breed is the male protagonist? He's a cross-dressing boss, but he's a cool boy, and he commits crimes based on his face. He looks aloof at first glance, but he's actually a tsundere with a hint of naturalness... That's it↓ While turning his head with contempt, he wagged his tail crazily (if there is one) Come and coax me, come and coax me. Jpg ↑Like this The heroine is also a treasure, a walking smile generator, casual but not casual, assertive and persistent, and does rogue things like hugging everyone. In essence, she is a cute and soft girl who only dares to rely on herself. The protagonist and several important supporting characters are well portrayed. As the plot feels about their growth and changes, they each choose their own path, and then get separated and reunited. But! ! On the other hand, the passers-by all look like they came from a training class. The female White Lotus Green Tea who cheated on the mistress will definitely win one, and the male is a dog licker who will definitely win one. They are either scum or a bitch, or poisonous and stupid. Anyway, it is a suffocating emotional entanglement... I love the copy part the most! Very exciting! The imagination is very rich, some are like fantasy novels, some are like supernatural movies, plus there are layers of suspense and mystery, which is very interesting. The fighting style is also well written. It's not about fist-bumping or competing louder, it's really a serious fight. Although the story of the dungeon is excellent, the full text of more than one million words does not have a clear clue to tie it together. There are many hidden foreshadowings, but it lacks a stable and consistent main line. Each unit does not have a strong logical connection. It is like playing Ludo, with a clear starting point and random moves in the middle by rolling dice. It will appear messy, and it will not be able to naturally integrate a complex worldview. In addition, the ending chapter felt a bit rushed, and it ended with a touching embrace of a family of three. It was not impossible, but compared to the many storms and scenes that it had experienced, the ending was too small. It could just fill in the holes for the previous chapter or dig holes for the sequel. All in all, it is quite exciting and beautiful. If there is a magical world, there will be a magical world, there will be twists and turns, there will be brain-burning puzzles, there will be beautiful love, there will be beautiful love... There is no need to insist on perfection. (Think about it carefully, isn't it the kind of ending that is both shocking and speechless, [actually a dream of xxx], right?)

Western fantasy. The heroine's grandfather is a time traveler and a legendary hero on the mainland. The heroine took adventures with her grandfather when she was a child. When she grew up, she worked for the country and solved various crises. In the end, she became her own legend. Frankly speaking, at first glance, this article seems to be a Western fantasy adventure novel, but after careful observation, you will find... This is probably not a Western fantasy spy novel, Qixingzhong! The story begins with a family conflict in the heroine's family, which is a bit heartbreaking. Then the heroine and her grandfather set off on an adventure. The characters of both grandfather and grandson are hard to explain, and they still have heart attacks. But the adventure in the mainland is so interesting, with customs from various countries, and constant encounters with all kinds of people and things. After the grandfather returned to his hometown, the heroine had no one to protect her. She had a hard time, but she also grew a lot. The spy battle (.) Part at the back is the essence of the whole story. It is thrilling and suspenseful, with some persistence of faith. The conflicts between people are very gripping, and the fights are also good to watch! However, the various routines are a bit repetitive later on, and the final battle is written too briefly. Before I know it, it is here [After a bloody battle, we are almost victorious! ] Stage...... I really like the author's character creation. There are no sentences like "xxx is a yyy person". The emotions and personality of the characters are all in their words and deeds, and the characters get along well with the plot. As for the love line... It's a bit confusing. The male protagonist only appears in the middle and late stages, but the relationship between the two has a sweet and warm childhood sweetheart feel. Moreover, they have been holding hands with blushing hearts and heartbeats for so long, and at the end, they are still in the ambiguous stage that has not been revealed... It's urgent. Hostess: I regard you as a brother, but I actually want to ❤️ you Male protagonist: You treat me as a brother, I have to make you miss me That's it until the end............ Can you two spread your arms and talk? ! ! The male partner's proposal of marriage did not affect the relationship between the two of them at all, which can be regarded as a love affair in another sense. Overall, it's very good. The various elements blend together very comfortably. I want to see the adventure continue.

Western fantasy, time travel, mini-games (?) The heroine Lillian contributed one download to her life, traveled to the game world, and opened up a life in a different world that was so rich that she was bald. Focusing closely on the basic question of "Where are you going, daddy?", She formed gangs to fight monsters, upgrade and save the kingdom... Very enjoyable to watch! The entire plot chain is like a carefully constructed domino. The fall of the first card triggers all events to turn to their destined trajectory one by one. The battles are one after another, the suspense is linked one by one, and the foreshadowing explodes continuously at the climax, which is so exciting. The worldview is similar to the author's previous works, it is already a mature old world (?)! Western fantasy must have a bunch of settings like this to be enjoyable! In addition, the setting of learning by playing mini-games is too funny 2333 In fact, I thought this book was a light-hearted novel at first, but the plot took off all the way, and in the end it turned into [It turned out to be like this=mouth=! ? ] Status. It's really brain-burning to read. There are hidden clues behind some inconspicuous background settings, actions and conversations. If you miss it, you will be confused. Maybe it has something to do with the writing style. Although the design is very logical, the narrative expression is a bit messy and the story line is not clear enough... The heroine is cute, her complaining level, fighting level, trouble making level and game addiction level are all lv max. The male protagonist is cute and appears to be a gentle and gentle bodyguard among the top ten. In fact, he is fond of making trouble behind his back and ranks first among the most beautiful, powerful and miserable in mainland China (?). Cute teenage girls falling in love is cuteness squared! The supporting characters are also very three-dimensional, probably because the author tried a new way of writing, "using different positions and understandings to show the same thing." Therefore, each character acts in his own way, and his character and philosophy can be described without any words. Based on such a role, the distinction between right and wrong in conflicts is downplayed. It is the difference in concepts, the dispute of beliefs, and the collision of civilizations. In the later stages of the book, there is a wonderful feeling of breaking through fate and being imprisoned in fate, which is quite interesting. A person should not be "chosen" to become a leader or a hero, but to become oneself - people strive to escape from the destiny arranged by the chess players and embark on the destiny that truly belongs to them. The ending is the kind of cool chuuni(?) I like! While being beaten, he pretends to be cool, while stabbing a knife while giving out candy, while being violent and theological; the scene is a dark tower, and the air seems to be filled with rose petals. Also, dog food is floating in the air in the extra episode.

Ancient overhead, interstellar, time travel, and live broadcast systems. The commander of the interstellar army was selected to save the world, traveled to an imaginary feudal dynasty, and under the impetus of the times and the call of fate, he swept away the universe and unified the world, becoming a generation of empress. The author's personal style is very distinct: a chariot and a ghost beating a wall. The same words are repeated repeatedly in "The Wheel of the Car", and a large section of the same words are repeated in adjacent chapters. When I read her old works, I often doubted whether I had pressed the page turn button. The good news is! Although her car is a mess, she is no longer trying to hit the wall! Applause. Jpg The novel has a large layout and interesting ideas. Various main and branch lines, both bright and dark, are presented together, showing almost every aspect of the world in the novel. At the same time, many characters were created. Although the characters have their own charms, they are not full and three-dimensional. Their behavior and personality fluctuate with the plot. At this time, you have to tell yourself "Okay, author, whatever you say is what it is". The heroine is a cool character, but her opponents are always arranged like five. Looking at them, I just want to sigh "There are no heroes". The heroine is very powerful, I believe it, but the level of this battlefield is too low. In comparison, I personally prefer the story of the first life with not much ink, where there are gains and losses, successes and regrets. The emotional line is not the focus, but it is quite interesting. The male protagonist is the female protagonist's counselor and courtier. He usually looks like a black sesame and glutinous rice ball. When he meets the female protagonist, he turns into a frightened rabbit. The domineering princes and the gentle little virtuous wife are quite good (. Let's make a complaint. The article often talks about the common people and the governance of the country. At first glance, it may seem deceptive, but if you think about it, you will find that it is too nonsense and contradictory. Although the author incorporates his own knowledge, the essence is still to write the story of Long Aotian, which is too shallow in thinking. Also, if the heroine is not reforming, she is on the road to promoting reform. She changed it to three hundred years of Wei, Jin, Southern and Northern Dynasties to zb modernization in one breath... I'm afraid. In short, the details in the book cannot withstand too much scrutiny, so don't take them seriously. Anyway, reading the article is a process of constantly lowering one's bottom line_(:з」∠)_ As for the fresh element of live broadcast... It is optional, but it is good to support the layout. The author's statement is that some words are difficult to explain in the text, so you can explain them by posting comments! But the role of audience members in word count is greater than in promoting the plot, right? Speaking of which, I have always felt that this style of loving discussion, derailing the main plot, and filling the plot with water is a bit familiar. When the author talked about Ninety-nine, I finally understood - it looks very powerful, but it is useless and can only drag out the plot! That's right! That's the secret of hot chicken! ! !