Breaking the Ground and Sprouting New Sprouts, Thunder, Rain and Dew Are All God's Blessings

破土萌新芽,雷霆雨露俱是天恩

6033(25 linked)7y ago

The plot is cliche? Characters rigid? Is the trick too poisonous to cause a quarrel among the people? Do you want to read quietly without getting into trouble but feel that the atmosphere is not exciting enough? New books are languishing, and the book shortage is booming. In fact, times are changing, and so are our preferences. As long as you really like reading novels and have enough time, you can always find many works that you like. But the problem is that not everyone is very free, has a lot of time to scan books, and can use the precious time squeezed from his girlfriend to chew a book. So... The role of the owner is here! Take the initiative to test poison and taste shit! It smells so good~ (Leave a message for a new book and review it, it will be cleared every 5-7 days, so please read it in time~)

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This is Not a Group at All2

Please Eat Rabbit

795K03

It was originally just an ordinary (probably) group running game, but why did Nayako, who suddenly caused trouble, come again? Is it because the funny attributes attract each other? What? Besides Nayakko, why are there Chinese gods and Western gods? What about Cthulhu? Defeat the boss! Say something back! This is not a group move at all!

Curator1

How should I put it? The writing is very smooth and there is not much to say. The subject matter is limited. I wrote a group-running virtual online game, but after reading it, I didn't find the plot, excitement, or sense of expectation. In fact, you can consider trying this type of game instead. Group-running games are like cheats, similar to those of extraordinary players.

Online Game Collection Master3

Lan Xiang's Brother

3.9M023

The new book "Martial Arts Life Beginning from the Infinite Sea" has been released. All passing book friends can try it and taste it. If you think it is good, you can put it on the bookshelf to read further! ! ! (Front row reminder, this is a small book with 310,000 words updated per month) Qin Yan, a salty young man, finally started his own lucky path in Abyss Game after experiencing many virtual games. A pair of red high-heeled shoes comes from the incomprehensible mystery of the producers of the Abyss game. Once obsessed with joining a big force, he ushered in a new life after running away. On the big stage to show their strength to the world, Qin Yan and his partners will finally bloom... Welcome to join Lan Xiang's brother's book club group number: 648283720

Curator1

The description is good and the context of the writing is clear. The data and settings are very carefully done. It's just that there are too many virtual online game themes in the library, and it's difficult for similar works to get ahead. In fact, online game books tend to ignore the in-game plots and write too much about NPC grinding mission upgrades and PKs. In fact, I suggest that you try a different writing method, connect the plots together, and write them as major events. Players participate in major events, so that the anticipation of the plot is higher. Don't be too idealistic about NPCs. Why should I help you? Why am I giving you a mission? The purpose is too weak. You can make NPCs more purposeful, such as letting you collect medicinal materials. Simply clearing money and goods is actually boring if you look at it too much. You can make a setting where this NPC lets you collect medicinal materials to prepare poison. After the player hands over the medicinal materials, the NPC will directly poison another NPC. Why this is done can involve a lot of plot points. Players participate in it, and while they become stronger and grow, the plot becomes richer. My random thoughts, don't comment if you don't like them, because I'm writing about games and I've talked a bit too much, maybe more off-topic, haha.

Going to the West7

Dugu Haoran. Qd

987K05

The new book "Journey to the West: Entertaining the Emperor" has been signed, please readers to support... Sun Wukong: "Junior brother, run quickly, Tathagata is furious!" Yun Tian: "Wait a minute, Xitian Lingshan is so rich, I just picked up some superficial things, Buddha is generous and kind, and will definitely forgive us..." Boom~

Curator1

The writing is quite fluent, and there are no problems in this aspect. The millions of writing exercises are still very effective. The theme of Journey to the West and the entry points are OK. There are not enough new ideas, but the plot is very stable.

Lead the Heavens9

The Sea Becomes Dust

498K018

There are five chapters that have not been changed. The eighth volume adds that in the beginning there were gods and gods and they were the same as Tao! The Yuanshi Heavenly King was born, opened up the Great Luotian, created the Three Ancient Emperors of Shinto, the Cangli clan opened the heaven, the Yuejian clan opened up the underworld, and the Jiutou clan settled the prehistoric era! Among the three emperors of ancient times, the Taiyi clan established the Heavenly Palace, the Tu clan started reincarnation, and the Suiren clan killed the heavenly demons! The human emperor transformed into a Taoist, the Five Emperors controlled the heavens, the Immortal Tao flourished, gods were replaced by immortals, humans were transformed by gods, and the Haotian God was in charge of heaven! After eternity and several catastrophes, the battle between immortals and gods seems to be over, but the power of Shinto has not died, and the seeds of Shinto have not been destroyed! Licensed to create the great world, occupying the position of creation, overlooking endless time and space. Bringing in the countless heavens, the gods of the heavens gather together and return to the wild world. Canghai Bookstore: 702199047

Curator1

The description has its own flavor, which is a good thing. Prehistoric, Infinite Stream, and Cultivation of the Lord God, the themes are pretty good. There are a few issues that make the story less than perfect. As for the plot, too much emphasis is placed on laying out the world view and weakening the plot. It is difficult for today's readers to calm down and read a book patiently before they like it. The way they scan the book will feel a bit cloudy and foggy. It is difficult to develop this type of plot in the modern world (fighting and killing is easy to block), which results in the protagonist being partially restricted in the modern world. This raises a core problem. The three points of protagonist growth, infinite plot, and plane evolution are not well connected in series. If the author's next book is still about this theme, it is recommended that the main world be set to ancient martial arts, so that the real world can be used to its fullest extent.

Magic Punk11

Magic Punk

Light Novel

Ren Qiuming

2.2M019

The dance that blends magic and machinery, the absurd darkness of the punk era. This is an era without gods, because everyone can blaspheme the gods. Xuan Yi, an ANBU player in Star City, chose to participate in a brutal jungle battle royale with a narrow escape for ulterior motives. From this moment on, his fate became uncontrollable, and he headed forward without looking back on a dark and desperate one-way road full of thorns.

Curator1

The theme of mechanical punk is not dominant, and the description of the writing style is all online. The plot is a bit jumpy, the main line is not clear enough, and the story is not particularly strong. In general, the author pays too much attention to the setting, and the plot is relatively downplayed.

Summon Food12

Summon Food

Xuanhuan

Owl On The Stairs

771K07

Ariel swears to God, he really only planned to be a pure chef, but he died! If he could live in heaven, Ariel would only want to yell at "himself": "I am a chef, not an idol, not a bloodthirsty maniac, and not a cross-dressing boss!" ... Summoners, contractors, monsters, a book of food from another world, a story of redemption and hope.

Curator3

The slow-burning type has a bit of foreshadowing, but it focuses too much on laying out the worldview. In fact, you can lay out some things that are more closely related to the protagonist, such as the level of the chef and the level of cooking skills. This kind of thing is more suitable for the development of the protagonist than a pure world setting. It's biased toward daily life, the main plot is a bit ethereal, and the rhythm is okay.

Gene from the 13th Department of Bright City13

There Is Divine Help Behind The Scenes C

13.2M021

Sins under the sun, riddles in the night, this is a bizarre cyberpunk world... In 2276, the urban population of Brilliant City exploded in the future, human life span was extended, supplies were in short supply, food was poisonous, classes were solidified, fertility was difficult, and crises lurked in every corner of the city. In the mysterious 13 departments, Jean was wandering among the complicated forces, creating the order of the city...

Curator6

The title of the book is not very pleasing, but of course it is a bit unique considering the content. There is nothing wrong with the writing and description, and it is a good thing to have your own style. The main line is a little unclear, the direction in which the plot wants to develop is a little vague, and the sense of expectation is slightly lacking. And then there's the point... It is an apocalyptic novel, and there is no pretense. It clearly states that the earth will be destroyed in 2276. Generally speaking, this kind of setting will be focused on by the review (don't ask me why I know it, just cry and it's over), and I don't have the habit of avoiding keywords... It is recommended that the author slightly revise the previous article, change the earth to a type of aquamarine, and find substitutes for police, congress, etc., Otherwise there may be a risk of being blocked (don't ask me why I know, just cry and it will be over).

Landing One 98k14

Iced Midnight

3.0M8.81,864

[The most enjoyable chicken-eating article of 2018] Liu Zilang, known as the prodigal son Liu. Of course, you can also call him the piano player, the Empire's Hawkeye, the explosives genius, the god of war Vic, and the Jedi sniper god. A domestic genius boy who fell in the "Clash of the Gods" FPS world competition. He originally didn't want to play FPS games anymore, but he accidentally came into contact with PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds. So between dream and reality, Liu Zilang picked up the 98K. In this story, there are passionate games, warm daily life, funny teammates... And a sister who is deeply involved in the two-dimensional live broadcast! ...(Book club group: 284132344, you can come in and have some fun together~)

Curator

The theme of PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds, there is a very cute tsundere anchor sister ~ you know ~

All-round Game Designer15

Green Shirt To Get Drunk

2.5M9.32,052

Game designer Chen Mo travels to a parallel world where the technology tree is distorted, and subverts the gaming industry with one god-level game after another. "As far as the game design concepts of this era are concerned, if we don't lift up the entire game industry, then I will be baptized by domestic free games in vain." - Chen Mo. Book club group: 558067640VIP group: 157856787 (You need to order all screenshots to join the group) Please vote for the new book "Extraordinary Player". Thank you everyone!

Curator2

The game designers of the parallel world sacrificed the research and development process in order to strengthen the rhythm. The setting is slightly imperfect, but the flaws are not concealed. The emotional line is a little flat.

Forty Thousand Years of Cultivation ("forty Thousand Years in Star Territory")16

Waniu Zhenren

10.8M8.54,368

A new book has been released, "As soon as I emerged from the banner of the Human Emperor, I became the Lord of the Old Ones"! It is not easy for seedlings to grow, and they still need the care of brothers and sisters. The pink and tender newcomer Mavericks begs for your support. Mavericks must show the spirit of a newborn calf who is not afraid of tigers, work hard, and do his best! ***** "If this universe is really a cruel and bloody dark forest, we cultivators will burn our own lives and bloom with weak sparks!" "No matter how weak, short, and insignificant the spark is, as long as we continue to move forward, one day the sparks will ignite the weeds, the weeds will burn the shrubs, and the shrubs will spread to the big trees!" "Eventually, the small sparks will set off a prairie fire in this dark forest and illuminate the whole world!"

Curator

The combination of cultivation, apocalypse, and technology creates a complete worldview that is both relaxed and humorous and full of passion and enthusiasm.

Bald Monk in the City17

Those Who Are Prone To Autumn Damage

2.4M8.8174

A forum topic - "If you could have the ability of a DND career, what would you choose?" Yi Qiu replied: "Of course it is a monk! He is in great shape and runs fast. He has his own poison and disease immunity, and he can defeat gangsters with his bare hands. In a flower gardener, this kind of weapon control and The food comes with a table of chemical elements, which is not very good at all, and the bald head, as the symbol of a boss, comes with a buff of +3 intimidation..." So Yi Qiu really became a monk... This is the story of an ordinary young man on earth who acquired the power of a monk and cleared dungeons without any trouble. Book club group: 166575132

Curator2

I became bald and stronger. One sentence is enough!

Trafford Buyers Club18

Yushan Shiraishi

17.9M8.31,504

Luo Qiu accidentally became the owner of a 'club'. But this club is so weird. It not only has a doll maid who has been working for three hundred years, but also sells all kinds of weird things. Luo Qiu gradually discovered that in the society he lived in, there were countless guys driven by desire, and these guys would come up to him and use everything they had, including their life spans, treasures, and even souls, to make transactions and buy what they wanted. And every successful transaction brings Luo Qiu time to survive. "The sacrifice is successful, and the life span gained this time is ninety-nine years."... In this way, Luo Qiu began his career as a 'club' owner, which he did not know the end of. PS: This is a group. Yes, this is the group: 1054845345

Curator1

You don't know whether the person you are dealing with is an angel or a devil, and you don't know whether the person you are helping is a help in times of need or an aid to evildoers. Before the matter is clear, don't jump to conclusions, as you will easily be slapped in the face. The plots are connected one after another, and the characters in each story will become the key figures in the next story, which is very coherent.

Anecdotes About Unusual Creatures19

Far Pupil

5.2M9.63,261

Hao Ren, as his name suggests, is a good man. His ideal is to live a peaceful life and be a small landlord who is not dead but cannot make a fortune - at least until a bunch of crazy creatures live in his house. A remote and old big house, a bunch of unusual extraterrestrial beings, and a labor contract from "gods". The three elements combined made Hao Ren the busiest landlord and the most capable nanny in the world. The story of the most chaotic, strange, and abnormal room landlord begins here. "From the day I pressed my fingerprint on the labor contract, I knew I was on a pirate ship..."

Curator

With an easy-going style of complaining, the abnormal creatures use practical actions to prove that not only are their abilities abnormal, but their brain circuits are also abnormal. The character creation is very successful. The husky spirit who calls himself a werewolf, the unreliable and powerful boss, and the moral model from another world are all impressive.

Late Night Bookstore20

Pure Little Dragon

3.7M9.23,529

Welcome to a bookstore that only opens late at night. ------[The simplified version of this work has been published, published by Tianjin People's Publishing House] - "VIP Book Friends Group": 557560752 (verify the fan value after joining the group) "Reading Group": 523978007 (no verification required) "Battle Group": 457654443 (no verification required) The new book "The Devil Comes" has been released, and a new journey begins!

Curator1

The twists and turns of the plot are very interesting, each plot is very closely connected, one link is nested within the other, and there are often wonderful twists and turns. It's not scary, it has a humorous and joyful writing style, and the sections are unique. The character creation of the ex-wife is very good, but it is a pity that Bai Yingying, an old zombie who can eat chicken and play e-sports, is very popular. (Surely, real men should fuck zombies?) The sissy Xu Qinglang is a bit deliberate in terms of look and feel. (I am not interested in commenting on current hot topics, so please don't comment if you don't like it)

Extreme Demon21

Get Away

3.9M8.83,010

New book ~ Desperate Night, a strange world where I am the only fairy. If you are interested, you can search and read. Demons are rampant and people are suffering. The magic weapon and magic blade shroud the world. A game modifier on his mobile phone accidentally became a superpower in Lu Sheng's mind. It also became his only support in this dark and troubled world. ~~~~~~~

Curator1

The slightly supernatural atmosphere is very well done, the picture is very strong and exciting, and the sense of substitution and expectation is perfect in the early stage. Of course, as the force system is slowly laid out, this feeling gradually weakens until it disappears. The emotional line is a little rough, but the description of the female character is also vivid. However, it's time to change the problem of killing my sister to preach...

Game Development Guide22

I Love Kitchen

1.5M8.372

A new book has been released: "Self-cultivation of Game Producers" ISBN: 1029303812 The three-year period has come and I am back. The new book is still very thin, so please collect it first, please. 6 Groups of book friends [257627296] (not full) fully booked 3 groups [688072835] (not full)

Curator1

Things involved in the game-related industry are very professional, the return of the strong is a routine, the pace is a bit slow for now, there is no deliberate pretense, and the writing style is more realistic, with a strong sense of reality. The changes in the emotional line are a little blurry, but the dog food is full. The path of long-term love, a touch of liking, and being together naturally. There is emotion between the lines, and it feels satisfying to give everything you have for your dream. The writing is very practical and the text is very textured. You can calm down and read it slowly, and the reading experience is very fulfilling.

Ruzi Emperor23

Binglinshenxia

1.8M8.6252

Three emperors died one after another, and the prince who had never been noticed succeeded to the throne inexplicably and was in many dangers. The Queen Mother didn't like him, and always wanted to create a new emperor who was younger and more obedient; his half-brothers didn't like him, thinking that he had taken away the throne that belonged to them; the eunuchs and maids also didn't like him, thinking that he didn't look like a real emperor... The Ruzi Emperor had no choice but to save himself.

Curator

The fictional history creates a sense of crisis very well, and the feeling of struggling in the power struggle is very real. Everyone is making plans and plans for themselves, and the story is very strong. The intrigue plot is a bit mind-numbing. What everyone wants and wants to do are intertwined with each other. The conflict creation is very reasonable and the control of the situation is very strong.

Huang Ting Taoist Master24

Demonic Monk Hua Wuque

2.3M8.8557

Lu Qingfeng, a young man from the earth, died in a car accident and traveled to the world of immortals, and obtained a landing ring for the large-scale real-life online game "Prehistoric" developed by the Earth Federation two thousand years later... PS: Created two book club VIP groups (fans value 3000+): 486411676 Ordinary group: 676084011 (full) Huang Ting Taoist ② group: 964551655

Curator3

The theme of ancient times and the skills and insights in the game are equally applicable to reality. The rise of losers has a very good sense of rhythm and plot. It is full of fairy tale style, and the balance between game and reality is very delicate. The progress of the two plot lines do not interfere with each other but intersect with each other. The relationship between brothers and sisters is also very sincere, and the writing is good.

The Empress's Chamberlain26

Fox Is Not Sad

1.5M8.2871

As a lover of "occult science", Zhou An has always believed that there are gods and goddesses in this world. He has practiced Qigong and learned spells. He once bought several kilograms of secret books at a street stall for thirteen and a half yuan. He also searched for elixir prescriptions in antique markets and practiced elixirs in a microwave oven. So he is dead! He was poisoned to death by the "Super Grade Nine Transformation Great Return Pill" he had practiced! When Zhou An opened his eyes again, he was sure of two things. The first was that he had traveled through time, and the second was that he had become a eunuch! He is broken! In the 372nd year of the Kaiyuan calendar, the Dongqian Dynasty suffered from internal and external troubles. In this year, two major events occurred in the forbidden palace of the Dongqian Dynasty. One was the death of the "Empress of Shendu" who had been seriously ill and had been bedridden for many years. The seventeen-year-old princess succeeded to the throne as the new empress. The other was that a young eunuch named Zhou An died and came back to life. After traveling through time, Zhou An was surprised to find that all the secrets he had practiced in his previous life could really be practiced in this world! Group: 590700944

Curator

He grew up step by step from a young eunuch to a great general manager, helping the empress to overturn the oppression of the powerful ministers. The rivers and lakes are full of passion, and the battles in the court are very exciting. The early paving for the emotional line was a bit rough, and the early preparation for the love journey with the empress was not particularly good. After the overall situation was stabilized, the daily life with the empress increased. The progress of the main line was a bit slow, and the degree of integration between the emotional line and the main line was not delicate enough.

篮坛教皇27

篮坛教皇

Physical Education

兔来割草

Curator

Entering the NBA as a coach, he was reborn as a golden finger with foresight, discovered undervalued players, played pigs, and dominated the basketball world. Sports, entertainment, and business are closely integrated, using the advantages of rebirth to dominate the Internet and Hollywood, with rich plots.

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