Reading Notes

It was very attractive in the early stages, and the horror atmosphere was particularly well written, but it became weaker in the later stages, and it may have always been a bit aesthetically-fatiguing. In addition, the character of the protagonist is a bit vague. Sometimes he is very spicy and sometimes hard to understand. He also talks a lot. It is the kind of situation where the situation is obviously very dangerous and time is running out. The author may have considered that there are some places that need to be explained or talked about for fun, but it really doesn't feel good. Overall, this novel is quite good.

The characters in this book are great, and the writing is very smooth. The author should have written about physical things before. However, I haven't fully grasped the coolness of a simple online novel. The biggest shortcoming is that each drama is written too much and is relatively slow to develop. Even a supporting role requires a close-up. This aspect cannot be covered up even if the author has various storylines and characters to make up for it. But what can I say, it is still very good-looking, especially the heroine is very well portrayed.

Writing is relatively professional. Of course, this is in the eyes of ordinary people. I don't know whether it is really professional or not. Anyway, it looks pretty good. The ability is gained step by step and then extended to show off the plot and the upgrading rhythm is very strong. It's just a bit too monotonous. Basically, it's just a hospital and there are very few other plots.

The author's writing is very strong and he creates a scary atmosphere very well. I was really scared when I read this book at night. In terms of rhythm, there are also waves of ups and downs. The foreshadowing clues are also very good. It's just that if it continues to be scary, it's a bit aesthetically fatigued. Personally, I feel that adding some warm daily life or touching stories behind the events should dilute this continuous sense of tension. I stopped when I saw the mobile haunted house, and then I lost interest in clicking in again. Because there is nothing particularly memorable about it, such as cute characters or the protagonist's abilities and achievements. Maybe I watched too much in a row and entered sage mode?

The rhythm and selling points of this book are very interesting, with procedural card making, fusion of mutant cards, and magically modified urban backgrounds. However, I personally think that his biggest highlight is actually using cards to create games and conquering people from other worlds, and the fact that the game can have real combat effectiveness. It's a pity that the author didn't write much about this. He only wrote about raising Kun and cutting fruits. It's a pity. The author's text layout is worth learning from. Each line and paragraph is very short, not like a long series, and it looks very relaxed. The plot is okay, but the descriptions in various aspects are a bit hazy. And sometimes the logic is awkward. For example, in the early stage, it can obviously be integrated with other ones, but it is dedicated to playing a herd training card, and the idea pie in the latest chapter... Ahem, the latter one seems a bit funny. Generally speaking, it was quite interesting at the beginning, and even if you stayed up late to read it, it became less attractive later on.

It's been a long time since I stayed up all night reading a book, and I almost didn't even bother to read my own book. There is no doubt that this is a good book, both in terms of the character of the protagonist and the portrayal of the heroine. The biggest highlight of this book is the characters, which are also the most attractive. The plot is more focused on urban daily life. It's good with no pretentiousness. However, one obvious shortcoming is that the description of the fighting is too vague and is basically brushed off. But it's fair to say that this book doesn't rely on fighting as its selling point. Another thing to add is that although the character creation of some female characters is interesting, their external image feels a bit confusing. For example, after excluding the personality, my only impression of a certain character named Bai is that of big breasts, and the same impression of the character named Qin. However, this is purely nitpicking and does not hinder the overall evaluation.

I have read more than thirty chapters of this book, and the highlight is the female character, which has some suspense elements.

There are too many explanatory texts, and the actual plot progress is very little. The main character is relatively salty, and after reading more than 20 chapters, it seemed boring.

This book gets more and more spicy as I write it.

The character description is very interesting, and the system setting is also good. After reading more than 30 chapters, I feel that it is okay. I will read it again in the future.

I have read more than ten chapters of this book. At first I thought it was about Salted Fish Joy and I was quite interested in it. However, later on the character of the main character changed a bit. I didn't feel like it was about hip-hop at all, but it seemed to be very short. In addition, the first plot is very interesting, I don't know what will happen next, I will watch it when I have time.