Shining Point

A milestone in the chat group novel Highlights: Veteran author, great character creation, even supporting characters are unforgettable (such as Sea Urchin). The plot has twists and turns, and the protagonist always remembers that he is just a little squirrel with a hand, and there is no time to show off except to fight against the boss. In a word, invisible pretense is the most deadly Disadvantages: In Squirrel's emotional drama, although Ye Si is Squirrel's real girlfriend, she has too few scenes, and her personality is not as likable as other female characters (personal feeling). On the premise that Squirrel has a girlfriend, it is better to avoid too ambiguous descriptions with other female characters. . Although it's fun to watch, I still feel like a squirrel turned into a scumbag. . It has become a daily routine. I feel like Senior Bai and others are living in the same place as me. I hope hh Recommendation index: five stars

A different journey to the west Highlight: I wrote Journey to the West with my own new ideas. The protagonist has a very likable personality, neither arrogant nor impatient, low-key and developed, and takes action when it's time to take action. Disadvantages: Too few words, many places could be written in more detail Recommendation index: four and a half stars

Brainless cool article Highlights: cool Disadvantages: The character's personality changes too quickly, and I don't feel the character's growth. For example, the change in the protagonist's personality is too sudden. In the early stage, the protagonist was silently making a fortune, but later he suddenly became the second child and the boss, which made people very uncomfortable. The characters of the protagonist, Master, and others are also becoming more and more clownish. Treating women as fireworks is a super poisonous point! ! ! Because the female characters are set off with fireworks without any foreshadowing! ! ! The counter-routine is too deliberate and makes people unable to feel where the protagonist is really awesome. It feels like a loser suddenly wins the lottery and shows off to the world. The plot is a bit cookie-cutter, and the upper limit of power is disappointing. It feels like it could be written until the end of the world. Anyway, there are always other worlds that are more powerful than the current one and want to treat the protagonist as a native of the lower world. There are too many places to explore, I hope we will take them seriously Recommendation index: three and a half stars

The nature of traveling between the heavens is still that of the same person Highlights: The description of Douluo World is very interesting, and the protagonist is not out of shape. The control over the intrusion ability is okay, not too embarrassing. Disadvantages: Strength increases too quickly, and the plot goes crazy. There is no way to increase the upper limit of ability points, and it will give people the feeling that it will be over quickly. Recommendation index: three and a half stars

The most important thing for a fanfic is the degree of character restoration, followed by ability adaptability. Highlights: Avoiding the big pitfall of reasonable changes in the strength of abilities in different series. (The confusion of different abilities is a poisonous point for me, after all, there are too few authors who can write well.) For example, in the world of Naruto, the use of ice escape is only enhanced, in the world of Death, kendo is enhanced, in the world of Pirates, kendo and physical fitness are enhanced. The current DC world cosplay of Vegeta is also very interesting (after all, there are too few Dragon Ball fans, and there are even fewer character restorations) Disadvantages: In the second description of the same world, the force value has already begun to go crazy, and the use of abilities is a little too concerned about not destroying the original plot. As a result, although the strength of the current world's first echelon is still unable to be used, the growth of the protagonist cannot be seen. Cosplaying Vegeta in DC should be an attempt. I hope Duke in other worlds can do the same, allowing the plot to slowly deviate according to his own will (of course based on strength) Recommendation index four stars