The Magical Starting Point is so Versatile

The emergence of this "gongzi disease" should be just to expose Qin Yun's "five hundred years" sword fairy prodigy, and then attract the attention of the court, and he was reused by the court as the "Monster Hunting Ambassador". Qin Yun will definitely not be an enemy of the imperial court at present. Although this Flying Sword has some minor flaws in the plot design, its connotation is still very rich. Monsters are scary, but people's hearts are even scarier. Officials serve their own selfish interests, kill people and get goods, confuse right and wrong, and do whatever they can. This is in sharp contrast to the lifelong loyalty of the previous "dog monster". This is a troubled world, where demons are rampant, demons and monsters are rampant, and people's hearts are not as old as they used to be. After the white clouds and gray dogs are gone, who can still retain their original intention? Like Tomato, call Tomato

A "real person" with clear persistence is a "real demon". He has seen all kinds of life, tasted all the flavors of life, and experienced the ups and downs of the world. He does not care about all the ordinary ethics, worldly morality, life and death, and worldly rules. He clearly understands his original mind, follows his heart in everything, and pursues his true nature. This is the "real person". Fang Yuan became a 'real person' by clearly understanding his true heart through all the aspects of life. The true nature of a 'real person' is also a demonic nature. He does not care about life and death, does not follow ethics, disdains rules, ignores common sense, and does everything from his heart. A 'real person' has obsessions and understands that everything is done by the heart. He has the original intention to eliminate falsehoods and retain the true ones - to pursue eternal life, with the most profound obsession, and no Can be worn away, cannot be changed, cannot be forgotten, cannot be saved, that is, the 'real devil', this is Fang Yuan, this is the reason why he is persistent, he is either on the road to pursue eternal life, or he dies on the road to pursue eternal life; even if he is reborn several times, hundreds of times, ten thousand times, his obsession remains unchanged, his original intention remains unchanged - this is True Demon Gu Yue Fang Yuan

Why does the protagonist have the idea that Chen Yunxi must marry her if she likes him? In terms of interests, the heroine is a burden, only a hindrance, and her status is far from worthy of the protagonist. According to the relationship, the male protagonist does not seem to like the female protagonist. He thinks that the two are people from two different worlds and are not suitable to be together. Everything is just the heroine's unrequited love. Usually two people come together either because of feelings or interests. In the past two days, the male protagonist and the female protagonist have not been together. I can't understand the reason why the two people are together.

He is supposed to like Caroline's twin sister. When the protagonist meets a gentle twin sister, Garona, who is exactly the same as Carolyn, and whose personality is completely opposite to that of Carolyn, he realizes that these 18 years of his life have been in vain. He was born for Garona! ! ! Hahaha... But when Caroline found out, her love turned into hatred, and she used the power of her family to do many things to hinder Wang Zhong and Garona's happiness. In the end, Wang Zhong single-handedly overthrew the dominance of the Stuart family and trampled the Federation under his feet. Caroline's hair turned white, and she lived on the top of a snow-capped mountain all day long, never seeing the world again...

Not all wizards are intrigues, intrigues, and struggling on the edge of life and death. Build a castle, build a manor, pick grapes from elves to make wine, use dwarves' hammers to smash chestnuts, cattle and sheep run in herds, horses stand quietly by the lake... Then raise a puppy-like baby dragon, listen to it bark, walk around your feet, and stick out its tongue as if to please. It's leisurely and bland. You can read it to pass the time, but it doesn't feel very attractive to me. However, after reading too many novels with tense plots and fast pace, I can still relax by reading this.

Can you not write a character who speaks a long paragraph of commentary, like the paragraph where Franco explains it in Chapter 90? That part was so embarrassing, it felt like I was reading alone with a manuscript. For such a long line, you can insert some questions from the protagonist in the middle or give some to Georgie. This way you can avoid the embarrassment of a one-man show and can shape the details of the character. The dialogue that discusses the history of the Magic Empire at the beginning is quite good. It explains both the historical background and the current background, and the topic changes very naturally. It can be seen that the author has put much thought into it. Nowadays, there are even fewer people who write fantasy with little care. I have ordered the book. I hope the author will work hard and I hope this book will become a big hit.

The author's writing is very good. I think it is very good to add the changes of the times in the novel. This is what distinguishes this novel from other wizarding novels. And the plot about the truth and falsehood of the world is also great. Witcher texts are inherently different from routine and cool texts, and I hope the author maintains this writing style. In addition, I would also like to give some suggestions to the author. First of all, there is the issue of the younger sister. Although the special identity of the younger sister has been revealed before, I think it is not good to just throw the younger sister into the academy and ignore it. The younger sister should be given some plot, even if it is just a look at, otherwise it will not match the relationship between the brother and the younger sister described at the beginning. Second, regarding the setting of the protagonist's character, the protagonist's character has changed too much between the previous chapters of the novel and now, and the change is without reason. It can be said that the protagonist's development on the road of warlock affects his character, but there should be enough time and events as a foreshadowing, and it should not make people feel too abrupt.