I, Who Complained, Was Completely Defeated

吐槽的我,一败涂地

3940(39 linked)9mo ago

(It should be noted in advance that this book is purely a personal subjective opinion and does not accept refutation, only discussion) There are good and bad, it depends on personal preference. The reason I started this book list is to review some of the articles I have read that are good (personal preference) or uncomfortable without complaining (not necessarily poisonous). If you think they are good, please give thumbs up to those that are not good, and downvote them. In addition, there are a bunch of self-recommended articles in the comment area that you can take a look at, but I will not add them to my book list (except for the ones I like). Finally, thank you for your support!

Keep Pace with the TimesMale ChannelEasy
My Leisurely Life in the Courtyard1

Firewire Luoliancheng

1.8M7.0119

I am Lin Fan, an ordinary person, an office worker. Unexpectedly, I ended up in a film and television drama in Siheyuan due to an accident. The people here are nice to talk to but not honest in their actions. The only way to do everything is to rely on yourself. Now that you have come, make peace with it. Once you have come, just live in this world. Marry a wife, have a few children, and live a leisurely life. There is no need to come to me, there is no point in coming to me. If you can help, then help. Forget the rest, I still have to live my own life.

Curator

Don't like it, it's over Objectively speaking, the protagonist is an enhanced version of Silly Pig, and Goldfinger is the farm and sign-in system. The protagonist believes that most of the people in the courtyard are good people who like to help others and covet other people's wives at the same time. I haven't said anything yet. If you think there are many good people in the courtyard, you can go and have a look. If you think there are many scheming people in the courtyard, don't go in. It's extremely poisonous!

The Decision of Hu Qiang, the Trouble-shooting Elite2

Tang Juyi

2.4M7.787

Hu Qiang traveled through time and came to the plot world of the trouble-breaking elite, and became Hu Qiang, an ordinary senior employee of Wanshou Group. Living in a new world with a slightly higher level of technology than in his previous life, Hu Qiang, who was very good in his previous life, was a little confused. Fortunately, there is a system that rewards you for completing tasks. Faced with a system that offered him tens of thousands of dollars at every turn to seduce him. What can he do? The only thing he can do is to make the system really good and work hard to squeeze out the system's wool. So what if the hard-working workers are beaten? What about workplace hell? Just make the right choice! There will be a career. There will be love. There will also be money. Starting today. I, Hu Qiang, want to shout out loud. Even if I was once a grassroots in the mud. Now you can still counterattack and become the king! Wait a minute, Murphy, what are you doing? Don't be like this, it's not good for you to be like this, it's really not good...

Curator3

It's really bad, not as good as those who copied the original work There are two things I feel about the protagonist: He should stand again; mourn his misfortune, and be angry that he will not fight. What I think is toxic: First, during the affair between the male protagonist and Murphy, he said that he would not have too much personal involvement with Lisa, while giving her massages, cooking, and having an affair (the author is linked to the love apartment. According to this timeline, Lisa's cousin's 40th birthday is at least! It's been 10 years! You can decide how old Lisa is.) Isn't a girl good? Do you have to find someone from the grandma generation? Second, the protagonist is a good old guy, but he has an affair with Murphy, Lisa, Lisa's secretary, and the two girls from Ode to Joy! Full of dissonance Third, follow the original work throughout. As long as the male protagonist doesn't want to do anything, the system will force him to complete the task. For example, in the part about Leleshi's qualifications, the system will write out a few steps for the male protagonist to follow. Calling the male protagonist a puppet on strings is an exaggeration. In short, the male protagonist is a time traveler and a systematic one. In the article, he is timid, whether he should be scolded or scolded, whether he should make mistakes or not, and there are also a few more ambiguous people. PS: What I don't like about fan fiction: copying the original work without changing anything, being timid, old woman, the protagonist being an indigenous person, not knowing the plot, etc. I didn't expect that this is the first time a book can do all the mistakes, and I've seen it. Awesome 👍🏻

I Traveled Back and Forth between the Apartment and the Messy World3

Brother Mu

758K8.115

Jiang Jin, who came from time travel, has a system that can travel back and forth between the love apartment and the trouble-making elite. What changes will he bring about? How should he choose between the almighty Zhuge Dali and the eccentric Ouyang Murphy? Stay tuned! Come to China Literature's website to read more of my works! Welcome to the group: 869658235

Curator

This book is good, I recommend it You can tell the plot of this book just by looking at the name. Two worlds running back and forth, two heroines (Zhuge Dali, Ouyang Murphy) Although the update has been suspended for seven or eight days now, I think the plot can be regarded as finished, and it will not affect it at all!

The End of the World: I Have One More Keyword Than Others4

Cotton Clothes Guard

2.2M9.171

Brave, vulgar, kind, cunning, generous, greedy, elegant, ferocious, happy, perverted, upright, prudish... In this apocalyptic world, only by winning on alien battlefields can we obtain resources and ensure the continuation of civilization. Every warrior who enters the alien battlefield will randomly receive a keyword of his own. If words and deeds match the keywords, each attribute will grow rapidly and acquire superhuman abilities. On the contrary, if the character collapses, it will weaken rapidly; this is a world of acting; acting is eating and drinking, acting is glory, acting is privilege, acting is life... There are already thousands of completed works "Dream Realizer of All Realms" and "Ten Thousand Ways to Eliminate Players". Complete copies are guaranteed, so please feel free to enter.

Curator11

Good looking, Mian Yiwei's new work, currently being serialized The style is similar to the previous "Dream Master". Anyone who likes "Dream Master" should like it. If you haven't seen it, it is recommended to watch "Dream Master" first. If you like it, then follow it. If you don't like it, you may not like this one either.

Wandering in the World of Film and Television5

Not Mario

6.9M8.4388

Thirty-eight-tier actor Lin Yue obtained the film and television plane shuttle system and embarked on a magnificent journey to experience various wonderful lives and roam the film world. In "Detective Chinatown", he corrected Qin Feng's reasoning and found out the real culprit of the gold robbery. "My Leader, My Group" takes everyone home. The mystery of the painter is revealed in "Wushuang". In "Chasing the Dragon", he single-handedly killed everyone in and out of Kowloon Walled City. In Fury he is the King of Tanks. "John Wick Trilogy" made him famous as a gun god. ... In the past world, "Detective Chinatown", "Chasing the Dragon", "If You Are the One", "My Leader, My Group", "Eavesdropping", "Wushuang", "The Richest Man in Xihong City", "Infernal Affairs", "I am Yu Huanshui", "To Our Fading Youth". Penguin colony: one group 544153996 (full) two groups 302996545 (rebuilt not full)

Curator4

Beautiful, currently being serialized How can I put it this way, the male protagonist has bad views, but he is really good-looking! Because most of it is an urban world, the further back you go, the more invincible literature becomes.

Black Technology: Conquer the I5 Chip at the Beginning6

Shang Shang Hua Sheng

1.1M6.250

Question: If I create something that can compete with i9CPU and sell it, will the country punish me? Answer: If there is no difference in performance between it and the i9 CPU, from the moment you are arrested, top law firms will provide you with a defense lawyer; as the news clears your name, people will discover that there is an additional genius in the world. The world's richest men and women invite you to attend the party. Celebrities are proud to take photos with you. One of the top directors in the country invites you to star in a movie and become the box office champion, even if you only have ten seconds of footage. Fifty years later, your deeds will be included in textbooks, and children will follow your example. Musk was impressed by the "New Starlink Plan" you proposed. And when mankind encounters a comet crisis, you become the hero of all mankind. But soon, you gradually discover that the universe will eventually reach heat death. You begin to peer into the origin of the universe. And you discover that the ultimate meaning of the universe is exactly 42... The truth about the universe that you cannot accept the most is that the universe is actually a multi-faceted Möbius strip. What is the truth of the universe, you ask. The answer I got was that individuals make up the universe. Twenty years later, you will be in your twilight years, lying on the hospital bed, surrounded by various police uniforms and soldiers in white coats, as if you saw the day you were arrested. As the chief developer of the Nantianmen Project, you watch the Xuannv Kongtian you developed travel in outer space through superhuman artificial intelligence fireworks. You lament that life is too short. Your legend is far more than that... This book is also called: "Backhand at the beginning and send yourself to jail!" >>

Curator4

Very poisonous After reading a few chapters at the beginning, he was first snatched up by the principal's goddaughter, then scolded by his tutor and expelled, then he was caught buying a fake chip, and finally the chip technology was discovered by the superiors. He thought it would be fun at this point, but as a result, first the only teacher who helped him was arrested. Internet violence, and then people said he was escaping from prison. The Academy of Sciences didn't even explain a word, and let the good guy on the protagonist's side get scolded. Then I skipped to chapter 45, and the protagonist just said a light word and forgave me. I was so aggrieved. The plot was really disgusting.

I'm at the Pinnacle of Directors7

Mo Fangqi

696K8.221

When Qin Huai traveled to a parallel world, he lost half of his investors' small target at the beginning. Faced with this sudden start, Qin Huai said he was not panic at all. With the earth in his hand, he had everything! Awards? Domestic, international, get soft! Box office? Sorry, I am number one in the world's film history! Starry? Actresses all over the world are vying to be his Huai girl! Is this the end? Qin Huai said that the structure was too small and he wanted to build a big entertainment empire. He not only wants to be an international leader, but also a capital boss! This is called standing at the pinnacle of directing (tactical retreat)!

Curator3

Like But there is a fatal problem that I have to say, there is no piracy.

Movie King: I Pick up Attributes on the Set8

The Farmer Is So Sweet

1.2M7.8168

Hengdiao group actor Lin Yuan awakened a superpower. He can pick up various acting attributes on the set. An actor takes one shot to the end? "Dingdong, congratulations on picking up [Line Skills +1]" An actor burst into tears during a scene? "Dingdong, congratulations on picking up [Crying Scene +3]" A certain actor had a great time fighting in a martial arts scene? "Dingdong, congratulations on picking up [Shenfa +2]" An actor plays the role of an old man with a stunning look? "Dingdong, congratulations on picking up [Old Acting +2]" ... Lin Yuan, who had this special ability, silently began to wander around various studios crazily. After many years. When he became the best actor, he still walked around the set happily. The whole Internet calls him [the most diligent actor in history] [The struggle of little people starts from the sidelines! ] ....... [Fan group: 777132224 (drive a car)]

Curator4

I don't want to read Chapter 40 anymore In the early stage, the smell of literary youth was too strong. A dream-chasing girl fell into disgrace and lost her original intention after her best friend was kept. However, she still didn't dare to go on stage and was slapped by a scumbag and left her hometown. Before leaving, he left a letter saying that he liked the protagonist. If you really like tragedies so much, why don't you copy Luotuo Xiangzi? Are you insisting on system-flowing and attribute-flowing stories that are disgusting?

The World Begins with Hong Kong Comprehensive World9

Bamboo Leaf Cake

1.2M8.9

Xu Luo traveled through time, and when he opened his eyes, he saw the scene where the robbers were dividing their loot. Because he did not inherit the memory of the original owner, he mistakenly thought that he was really a robber, so he chose to take them all and swallow up the diamonds worth 50 million! After achieving financial freedom, two policemen suddenly found him, saying that he was an undercover agent, and ordered him to investigate on the road who committed the diamond robbery and where the stolen goods went. Xu Luo was numb all over at that time! I can only do one set of tricks with my backhand ~ PS: This book is also called "People in the Heavens, Doing Whatever They Want" Note: Zhu Tianwen, the prodigal son, the protagonist is a bit disdainful, unsystematic, does whatever he wants, lets himself go, don't get in if you don't like it.

Curator5

Good looking The first world, Hong Kong variety show The second world, a combination of three Ming Dynasty TV series The Third World, Uncle Nine's Zombie Movie Comprehensive There are only a few worlds in total, and they feel pretty good. The male protagonist lets himself go, does not take the initiative, does not refuse, is irresponsible, and is naughty.

I Really Don't Want to Be the Savior10

Things In Fire

2.6M8.9380

The new book "Global Human Shrinking" has been uploaded, please support it! ... This book is also called "Thousand Years of Looking Back". The 31st China Science Fiction Galaxy Award for Best Internet Literature Award-winning work. ...[Chapter 62 takes off, Chapter 92 explodes. This is a story about an ordinary man trying to transform himself into the savior of civilization. ]In 1977, Voyager took off. In 2010, Voyager 2 sent some strange messages back to Earth. In July 2021, Voyager 2 completely lost contact four years ahead of schedule. At the beginning of the twenty-sixth century, civilization on earth was sealed off and kept in captivity. At ten o'clock in the morning on October 27, 3020, mankind will perish. One year before his death, Chen Feng, an ordinary young man in the 21st century, traveled through time and space and arrived a thousand years later, and he discovered that he would return to the 21st century after his death. Read history in the future and change the future in history. Chen Feng began to search for the only light in the darkness for himself and mankind in this seemingly eternal cycle.

Curator1

Like An ordinary young man comes to the future in confusion, and then comes back inexplicably. From being confused at the beginning, to seeking his own benefit in the middle stage, to finally realizing his responsibility and fighting for mankind, it is quite good.

Coroner Ke Xue11

Coroner Ke Xue

Light Novel

The River

2.5M9.0753

[This is a Conan fan] The full title of the book: "I was named by a famous detective as the number one criminal suspect just after I traveled to the world of Ke Xue. As a coroner, I am not panic at all now."

Curator3

Yes, most fans of Conan fandom have read this book. The male protagonist is a coroner. In the world of Conan, he uses scientific autopsy techniques to solve cases. The female protagonist Shiho.

The Wizard in the Detective World12

Dream Chaser Love Ping

6.6M8.74,421

A ghost wizard from the end of the Dharma era was killed in a car accident. His soul traveled through time and found that he had come to Japan and was possessed by a Japanese man. Just when I was thinking about making a name for myself in Japan, I picked up a newspaper and glanced at it-- Kudo Shinichi, the Sherlock Holmes of Japan's Heisei era, the savior of the police? Damn it, how did I end up in the two-dimensional world? Well, all in all, this is a story about a wizard acting as a passerby in the world of Conan... PS: The author Jun has also completed the works "Refining Ghosts and Cultivating Immortals" with 6.53 Million words, "The Evil Ghost Lord" with 3.65 Million words, and "My Mechanical Octopus" with 2.18 Million words. Friends who are idle and bored can take a look. Well, there is another book called "The Last Immortal Cultivator". This book has been banned, so ignore it... Group number: 512240405, full ~ Group 2: 670934518

Curator2

I don't like it. It can be said that it has eliminated all the bad points about reading this kind of book for me. 1. The plot of the original case, I don't like it personally, it's a low-grade poisonous point. Second, Ke Xue's world view has changed. In the "Heavenly Punishment" case, you said that there was a witchcraft to explain the curator's strength. This is understandable. The foggy dog really exists, and the murder of the cursed doll is seriously problematic. If you assume that if the male protagonist does not appear, will the development of the plot be the same as that of the original work? Medium poisonous point Third, the male protagonist forgets the plot. Although it is true that people in the real world cannot remember too many plots, in the world of Conan, you have to rely on familiarity with the plot to crush Conan. The male protagonist in this book does not know anything except Conan. He only relies on Goldfinger Wave and high-level poison points. Fourth, the character design is seriously inconsistent with the original work. In my opinion, Haibara Ai is the kind of lonely girl who is venomous in words and arrogant in behavior. Xiao Ai in this book gave me the feeling of a tsundere little loli with two ponytails. On the first day we met, she said "... I will not thank you!" Moreover, her relationship with the male protagonist progressed very quickly, which is moderately poisonous. Fifth, it is not an invincible or semi-invincible novel. Personally, I feel that the main character who travels through the world of Conan is to be invincible and crush Conan in terms of reasoning. If the plot is not pleasing to the eye, the plot should be slightly changed (without affecting the subsequent cases). Similar to "Ke Xue Coroner", the male protagonist is an ordinary person without super powers or anything, but it is also an invincible novel, which is not bad. Generally speaking, it is completely opposite to my favorite genre in every aspect. If you feel the same way, you can try "The Corpse Scavenger in Conan", which is the same ghost-control genre, but I really like the protagonist's temperament and plot development. (Not disapproving, just a personal feeling)

The Corpse Collector in Conan13

Fairy Boat

8.0M8.7304

Interview with the protagonist: Q1: What is your secret to becoming the [Ace Killer] of the black organization? Jiang Xia: "Take Conan and visit the target's house." ---- "Fake Moriarty's Distillery Career", "How to Correctly Get the Aura of Death" ... Jiang Xia took a puff of the fake cigarette and blew out the smoke ring sadly: "I just wanted to take advantage of some cases and pick up corpses, but I didn't expect that I would become a 'criminal planner' in the eyes of the villain." "What? Why doesn't the protagonist catch me?" "... Maybe it's because in their eyes, I am the contemporary high school student version of Sherlock Holmes." ------ Interviews with detectives from Kexue World: Q1: What do you think of Jiangxia? Detectives: "Nothing short of solving the case too quickly." . Q2: We are both detectives, why not join forces with Jiang Xia to fight against the black organization? Detectives (waving their hands hastily): "No, no, no, we can't tell him. The dark side of these worlds is too heavy for him." ------- [Qidian app, Detective Conan fan], there are some cases of Kindaichi

Curator4

If you like Conan fan fiction, you can take a look, it's good

Technician's Manual14

Listen To The Sun

4.4M8.5365

In 1668, my city was rated as the most secure area in the country. I have made an indelible contribution to this. Because I was caught.

Curator5

The target is a light novel, I think it should be considered a fantasy type. I don't like reading fantasy books, but this book attracted me. It's the only book I'm following now. The general plot of the opening chapter is that the male protagonist has just time-traveled into a cult leader and was arrested, and then blah blah blah (I won't say more in case you think I'm a spoiler, but it's fun anyway)

Alliance Voice Pack, Become Stronger by Playing a Role15

Reciting Books Zxy

883K8.092

When he woke up, Muchen traveled to 2017 and became the passer-by king specially recruited by RNG, and received the "Alliance Voice Pack" system. As long as you play the character of your chosen game and pronounce Chuuni's lines and even make shameful moves, your game level will improve. In order to live a better life, Muchen had no choice but to embark on this road of no return. "I once chased the unruly strong wind. Now, I am hunting the storm transformed by darkness! Brother, the strong wind also has its way back!" After saying this, Muchen controlled Yongen to kill Rookie's Yasuo alone. . "What I have accomplished is irreversible!" After saying this, Muchen started Jie's personal show! "My energy is endless!" At the S7 World Finals, Muchen, who had chosen the Dark Leader, was heard saying a cold and royal voice. The rest of the teammates: "This game is stable!" Letme said with excitement: "Queen, please trample on me~" Muchen's mouth twitched slightly and said: "Letme, please calm down..."

Curator24

LOL article, being serialized It feels pretty good, funny and hit the mark To say heroic lines on the field is so shameful hhhhh It's just that there are too few updates, only about 50 chapters.

I Got Zero Points in the College Entrance Examination and Became a Scientist of a Great Country16

Three Spoons Of Sesame Juice

1.1M8.21,178

[Recommend a completely free novel. One person guards the country and plays the role of the Wudang King at the beginning. This book is free of charge. It is free from beginning to end. Read it to your heart's content! Have fun watching it! ! !! ]Wake up. Zhang Xiao was reborn in the college entrance examination room. He was confused at the time. "Others go back to one month before the college entrance examination, but I..." [Ding! The great power's heavy equipment system has awakened, and the current host has obtained the 3nm chip calculation formula, the fifth-generation engine design drawing, and the Longan millimeter-level satellite positioning system! ] "What's the use of this? I just asked what's the use of these?" An hour later. Zhang Xiao came out of the examination room. Reporter: Coming out so quickly, this classmate must be a god of learning! Zhang Xiao: Haha, I don't know if I am a god of learning, but I know that I handed in a blank paper! Reporter: What? ? ?

Curator2

Brainless cool article Various haloes of wisdom, various slap-in-the-face plots, netizens are shocked, beauties are shocked, all kinds of shocks, if you can bear it, you can still watch it.

The Villain Who Dresses as a Female Vlogger17

Tango Dancing In The Snowy Mountains

581K8.1271

... This is a male video, the protagonist (male) is on the wrong channel... Introduction: She drank the glass of poisonous wine given by the Regent and watched her former good sisters smiling proudly in the Regent's arms. She has never slept with the Queen Regent since she married her. She has been relegated to the sidelines since her wedding night. It turns out that the Queen Regent only cares about her family status. She was still running the palace conscientiously and never thought that the regent had already been secretly hooking up with her sisters. She was punished by nine tribes and given poisonous wine. When she was reborn at the age of 16, she just wanted revenge. System - Your current role is the regent, you cannot tell about time travel, and you cannot kill the heroine in advance.

Curator1

Don't like I thought it was, the innovative writing method, the background of the female channel, the style of the male channel, and the struggle for hegemony of the male channel In fact, from a different perspective, the background of the female channel, the brainlessness of the female channel, and the various emotional dramas of the female channel The poison is gone. Say goodbye.

Endless Dark Game19

Re-enter The World

850K8.7294

[Farming + construction flow, not survival] When you wake up, you find yourself in an endless dark world. Everyone is the same as you. There is only a single room, and there is endless darkness outside the room. In the darkness, there are both opportunities and dangers. No one knows whether death or glory awaits them after walking out of the room. Everything depends on their own luck to explore. But luckily, you can actually see the hints in the dark. [The woman in red outside has finally left, and you now have twenty minutes to explore] [Remember, after going out, there is a box thirty meters in front of you to your right. Take it back, and there will be a surprise inside] [Fifty meters in front of you and to your left, there is a nest of mysterious insect eggs. If you take it back, it will have unexpected effects. Don't go straight, there is a poisonous snake there, staring at you closely. ...(This book is also called From Darkness)

Curator1

Don't like it, don't agree with me First, the various descriptions are extremely confusing, and the value of materials is unclear. Second, he has great potential as a businessman. He keeps hundreds of fish in the pond in front of his door. He eats steak and drinks milk for breakfast, and brings his own water for bathing. It sells only 30ml (about the size of a bottle cap) every day. 30Ml is exchanged for one rune. It is also known as the early stage to accumulate resources and later on, it will help the public. Third, what makes me most unhappy is that the male protagonist sells local aboriginal things while giving them away. He treats the bear people to drink fish soup, and then casually sells his own bath water to his compatriots. To measure the physical strength of the earth and gain the favor of dark creatures? So, if you don't care about the male protagonist's outlook, you can still watch it.

Rebirth of the Starry Sky Giant Mosquito20

Buyue

12.9M7.0711

A story about a blood-sucking mosquito with the soul of a college student. In order to take revenge, he grew from weak to strong, step by step, from the humble planet of life, "Earth", to rise powerfully in the entire universe! Literary version: Reborn as a larvae, strives for self-improvement, and finally transforms into a terrifying giant mosquito. From now on, you can travel across the world and travel across the vast starry sky! Hot-blooded version: Cowardly space creatures! I am using my mouthparts to suck the nutrients from the center of your home planet. What can you do to me? Funny version: Do you dislike me? Hate me sucking blood? Still want to slap me to death? Just wait for me, one day I will crush your house under my feet! Daily updates of 2 chapters and 6,000+ words, bursting out from time to time! I beg all book friends for your collection and recommendation support, thank you! The first fan skirt: 433842923, the second fan skirt: 466122798

Curator1

Extremely poisonous! The male protagonist was beaten to death by a rich second generation because he liked a girl. After being reborn as a mosquito, he went to seek revenge from the rich second generation. He found out that the rich second generation had lied to the girl, saying that the male protagonist was not dead and would not harm the male protagonist as long as he obeyed. You taste it, you taste it carefully. The plot is really disgusting!

After Handing over the Space Door to the Country21

Recite Poem Title

382K091

Question: What should you do if you find a space door connecting to another world at home? Zhu Rengong: If you are as smart as me, of course you can explore a different world by yourself! Two weeks later. Zhu Rengong: I have decided that I will hand over the space gate to the country. As mentioned above, this book is a story about a protagonist who is "lucky" to obtain a space gate and is tortured and cried by the natives of a different world. After that, he goes back to the country as a backer to explore a different world.

Curator

No gold finger writing (I think it can be said) Not feeling any better The male protagonist obtained the space gate, was bewitched after traveling through time, had no choice but to hand it over to the state, and was then controlled to perform tasks. Overall, I feel that the male protagonist is too useless. He handed over the space gate and left nothing behind. He was also tricked by the author into completing the task and became a pitiful tool in front of a group of talented academics. When I saw the martial arts conference, I couldn't stand it anymore.

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