Although There Are Many Words, I Am Not Talking Nonsense (I Am a Troll)

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This book can actually be read, but the problems are not small and the fan problem is also obvious, so I will add it to talk about it. If you want to read this book if you want to read martial arts novels about various martial arts and sects, I have read two thousand points and it doesn't show much (although there are some, such as Qi, Blood, Zhenqi, Tian Dao Sect, etc.), So I'd better look for other martial arts novels. Compared with martial arts, this book is more like a novel about a gangster in a classical world who practices martial arts, so there are also fights between gangs and the extermination of families. In short, this book is actually quite good and can be read. But the problem is not small. The author took the physical route earlier and may not understand Qidian very well. He views Qidian based on the prejudice of traditional literature against online literature. I think it's ridiculous. The starting point is much better than in the early days. The emergence of various daily and casual texts is an example. This website can now accommodate novels of various styles, but it does not mean that readers can accept that your job is to be a martial arts novel. As a result, warm and sensational descriptions take up a lot of words. If you want to read about family affairs, you can just go to other websites or magazines that focus on this. If you can't do it, you can consider it nearby. Qidian also writes about this. But those of you who came to the martial arts category are not here to read this, no matter how realistic and heartwarming your writing is. Specific to the plot, for example, the often positive description of Zhang's worry about her son, is it necessary? The protagonist is a person with ties, which does not mean that he should always be fettered and always have his hands tied. In modern society, when children are in their thirties or forties, how many parents will actively and passively contain them? Even family matters are left to the children. Therefore, after the protagonist takes charge of Wutong, Mrs. Zhang should have a mentality towards her son, "I'm very worried about you, and I also hope you don't go out to fight anymore, but I know I can't and can't stop you, so I won't even show my worries to make it difficult for you." Finally, give Zhang a profile description, such as "My son was called out by his subordinates to fight, and Mrs. Zhang watched him go away alone at the door." I came back to the house after a long time but the lights were still on." I think it's better to write it like this (rather than just follow my colloquial sentence) than the protagonist who keeps being persuaded by Zhang or asking where he is going. I also have a grandma at home. Every year when my parents leave home after the Chinese New Year, grandma is reluctant to leave and keeps asking why she wants to go out and if she can stop going out. But if you don't go out to work, how can you make money to live? ? The poor have no choice but to leave their homes. There are old people who keep asking, and naturally there are also people who are open-minded and know how to give up. Why does the author have to write the former instead of the latter which is equally true but can make readers more comfortable? In my opinion, this is a common problem among traditional writers who are not strong enough in writing. They insist on some "routines" and think that they must do this in order to better express certain emotions, such as crying after death and being reluctant to leave. Another example is that the early portrayal of the character Li Gouzi was too dull. This "too" refers to the fact that compared to the early stage, the author gave me the impression that he was a person with excellent writing skills. As a result, the character of Li Gouzi was very disappointing. Fans, on the other hand, think they are superior and look down on those who say this book is not good.

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Is this book toxic? I haven't read it at all. My reading record is empty. I wanted to reply to a certain post in the comment area, but I found out that I was banned? ? ? ? ? Then I randomly clicked on a book and found that I could post. I confirmed that it was not me who was banned by Qidian's system, but the author who was individually banned. I was confused. I haven't read this book either. Why am I forbidden to do it?

The Ancient Master has been away from writing for so long that he doesn't know where the starting point is now. Otherwise, why do you think readers would be willing to see all the protagonists included? Especially the author of this book. At the beginning, he said that he had done a long time of research before writing the book. He felt that what he wrote was very in line with the taste of current readers. However, just before the KTV conflict, some readers already pointed out that no one likes to force conflicts now, especially at KTV parties (this guy is really a prophet), but the author still insisted on having his own way. The only bright spot in these 8 chapters of KTV is that the gangster wanted to secretly stuff drugs into the protagonist and then call the police. I don't know if a real ordinary person can exonerate himself in this situation in reality (if those who stuffed drugs don't put pressure on the people handling the case and rush to convict), but this plot really made me feel scared and felt that people's hearts are sinister. Is Fang Shiling's real-life prototype the author's inner demon? I read an old man said that his last book, Forgotten Realm, also had a character like Fang Shiling. Was he unable to get past her? Or was it something else? Yuan Xi even bought her ex-fiancé's account (the male's price is lower but he is the number one in terms of female slaves, so they should be on the same level). Wouldn't it be over if the account who wants to buy a house just buys it at a lower price? ? If Fang Shiling doesn't want to sell, it's easier. Show your ugly face as a capitalist, suppress and sow discord, and instantly become a fan of Brother Chu in front of Fang Shiling. Don't invest in her company. What's the point of letting her make money? Yuan Xi's goddess halo towards her has long been broken. To Yuan Xi, she should just be a good-looking green bitch, right? If a normal person has a choice, he will not continue to get along with a green bitch (unless sleeping in vain, but for a big man like Yuan Xi, even if he agrees to sleep in vain later, it is impossible to sleep in vain)

I am the third person to read this book, right? In the first morning, readers who had followed the previous book started to support it when there were only two chapters; in the second morning, new readers discovered the seedling of a sacred book when there were only a dozen or dozens of chapters; in the third morning, it should be me, who fell into the trap when the book was first revealed in hundreds of chapters. I had never been exposed to the old book before but gave up because Gao Wu wanted to read it. I kept following it from about 100 chapters until I reached chapter 734, which I finally decided to give up. There was nothing wrong with that chapter, but I happened to find that the fan value reached 10,000. I guess I had accumulated dissatisfaction to a certain limit. This fan value gave me an excuse to give up. From the ordinary Fang Ping at the beginning to the invincible Fang Ping with the Qi and Blood plug-in, I have followed and appreciated this protagonist more and more. Compared with most other protagonists at the same time, he looks like a normal person with flesh and blood, social relations and communicative skills. I have no dissatisfaction with him. Some people even complained that "you dare to kill an "innocent" neighbor with whom you have no relationship because of an unfounded suspicion of being persecuted" (that is, in the beginning, Fang Ping drugged a fugitive who seemed to be a second-level warrior as an ordinary person). I think it is a very logical inference. These people themselves do not have the corresponding observation and inference abilities, but after the author has given corresponding descriptions and settings, they still use the perspective of an ordinary person to criticize the protagonist and even the author's incorrect views. For such people, I, a self-proclaimed troll, can't help but want to troll them. Later, Fang Ping, who joined Mowu, took advantage of Lao Litou, and even gradually went a little too far, causing dissatisfaction among many readers. I think this is more realistic and logical (a child from an ordinary family may even become poor because of martial arts, and suddenly face a teacher who treats you well and sells you things at a discount. I think Fang Ping just thought that this was within Lao Litou's authority at the beginning, so he insisted on asking for a discount. Although Fang Ping's constant nonsense is very annoying, this kind of plot is very real and logical), but as a reader with a God's perspective, it is normal to not like this kind of plot. At this time, the author should adjust according to the readers' response, because this is what excellent online writing should do. Excellent online writing should strike a balance between novels and reality, traditional literature and similar fast food literature, so as to achieve both excitement and authenticity. The author did a great job on this. The next day's update immediately asked other teachers to knock Fang Ping to let him understand that this was all subsidized by Lao Litou with his own savings. As soon as this patch was applied, I was instantly moved, right? I admire the author here. But the subsequent descriptions made me more and more disgusted with Fangyuan and Qin Fengqing, whom most book friends liked, which was also the reason why I gave up on them. There are less than two hundred words left to expand on. If you want to know what I think of these two characters, if my previous post there is not yet available, you can search it in my personal center. I think my analysis of these two characters is very correct. But no matter what, Fang Ping is still my favorite protagonist, and this book is generally very good. I wish you all the best.

This book is very unusual. If you read it without thinking, you will find it very enjoyable, high-level and professional. However, anyone with any brains can't stand it, it's so fucking stupid. Goldfinger is considered to be an invincible genre, but the stupid author arranged some bullshit plots to make it nondescript. It basically uses the framework of urban brainless cool novels from ten years ago to create an invincible genre. The supporting characters are stupid, the plot is awkward, the dialogue is pale, and the conflicts are forced. Let's give a few examples: ①What grudge does counselor surnamed Liu have against you to prevent you from getting a scholarship? Did you cheat on him or his father? Liu Zhenxi, the squad leader, is also inexplicably unable to deal with you? Is the whole world your enemy? ②Author's question: Why did you give Xu Yan a paper that could be sent to SCI and then help her revise the English version for free? The roommate spent 1,000 to find someone and the effect was only average. To put it bluntly, no one was willing to do the protagonist's effect for 5,000. Compared with the design industry, some small trademarks are indeed very simple and do not require much creative work. But if you are not familiar with them, how can you ask others to do it for you for free? However, in view of the fact that it is easy for readers to become the protagonist and be kind to others, the revised price of 3,000 is not excessive at all. I don't mean to ask the protagonist to ask for money to make up for it, but I suggest that when writing this paragraph, the author should first set a price for the help that he knows well and then arrange for the protagonist to make an authoritative decision (for example, let Xu Yan know that his roommate spent 1,000 and quickly take out 2,000 and transfer it to the protagonist, then let the protagonist decline, and then let Xu Yan insist on saying that this is the fruit of labor, and finally the protagonist accepts it freely). The subsequent batch editing of other people's papers was even more poisonous. The protagonists of the golden finger article were so urinary that they treated unearned knowledge as inappropriate knowledge. I have read a fantasy land in another world before. The golden finger obtained by the protagonist is to forge weapons that are of better quality than others and the success rate is ten times higher. However, the author allows the protagonist to sell it at a lower price than others. Every time I see this kind of plot, it makes me sick, as is wisdom. Is this plot interesting written by the author himself? If you really think that the protagonist has just gained knowledge and is not very good at handling it, then I ask you what did the author do for a living? Do you really think this is reality? The author himself didn't have the writing skills to give such a big gift, so he accepted it. Wouldn't it be enough to arrange a short paragraph for the protagonist to quietly figure out how awesome the level 4 medical statistics he got is? Why bother writing so much useless stuff? ③ In terms of postgraduate entrance examinations, the commonalities should be politics and English, but why is the description of the protagonist that he has never studied or reviewed politics? ? ④ I got the wrong certificate for Chapter 10 of League of Legends and Chapter 14 of the postgraduate entrance exam, and I don't know what they were written for. There is also Chapter 30: Beating the Teacher (the pirated version has the original text, which is simply a collection of poisonous points). Forget it, I won't start talking about it anymore. The more I talk about it, the more angry I get. Another book that should have been written well was ruined by the author himself. I placed an initial order and read dozens of chapters... Although I could tell I was quite angry.

I don't quite understand why I can't post... I haven't posted in this book before, so I can't be banned in advance. I'll post what I originally wanted to post here. Generally speaking, good books will not be buried, and this book is obviously no exception. It has a lot of flaws and not many bright spots, so it's pretty average. I admit that all kinds of big guys who forced licking in their previous life are very awesome now, but it is a coincidence that the success of each step has led to the improvement of skills. At the beginning, they were not awesome, so why did they have to lick them? Because of the so-called "they will be successful in the future, so investing in them now has a high error tolerance??" Also, I took the train and met three big guys one after another. They were awesome.

[The author is very wise but the book is okay] The first book I read by Aldehyde Shi was "The Great Painter". This book may seem full of loopholes to insiders, but for laymen like us, it is enough to open our eyes and not be misled. After talking about the book, it's time to talk about the author. After reading "The Great Painter" by this author, I read "The Free Fisherman" (it was free at the time), and then "The Little Rich Peasant in Shanwa" (it was from this book that I started to think there was something wrong with this author). These three books are all in this situation: the protagonist's first love is due to various reasons (such as the differences between the concepts of the great painter, such as The first love of a happy fisherman and a small rich farmer in Shanwa cannot understand that the protagonist is so laid-back and unenterprising ("because the protagonist's mentality is only suitable for capable people to go to the countryside to be independent. In this way, the protagonist is actually delaying the urban white-collar beauties") and the protagonist broke up but were later in the book. The protagonist became famous and came back to see himself in a state of desolation and regret. It's simply retarded. Was this author dumped by his first love? So vulgar? ? Not like showing off in front of the inferior supporting characters like in other books, but making her feel inferior and regretful in front of the woman she once deeply loved (and the separation was not because she didn't love her, but because the concept was inappropriate and they broke up peacefully)? ? This author is poisonous, really!

[Just early stage poison? It doesn't exist, this book has always been poisonous] It's so tasteless, it's like buying Haagen-Dazs mixed with shit. It doesn't matter if you don't eat it! ! I hope this author can understand soon that his books are still read by so many readers because he tells good stories and not because of some garbage routines! ! After watching more than 860 points, I finally slipped away. What I don't understand from beginning to end is why I can't write it well even though I can write it well? ? Don't you know what the garbage became in the early stage? ?

[The author is very wise but the book is okay] The wisdom of being completely brainwashed by the Bangzi Kingdom, no matter how well written it is, cannot cover up the essence of being unable to stand up after kneeling for a long time. There are always people who want to clean the floor. "My Sister" became so green, and some people said that it had been changed. I'm tired. The cuckold has a lot of bad history and there are still people who can pretend not to see it. I can't give you 666. Back to the book. There is nothing wrong with the book itself, although it is not to my liking, but I have also read "Jian Ye", an old book by a wise author. (Ning Que and Mo Shanshan are a perfect match, okay? Although the little maid is stubborn and independent, it is heartbreaking, but after all, it is not as good as the kitten. Teng Qingshan is so cute. The author's comparison of water and porridge is actually quite inappropriate, but I won't go into details here. After all, I am criticizing him now and don't want to say good things about him. I'm afraid I won't criticize him if I'm soft-hearted (˘̩̩̩ε˘̩ƪ)). However, while writing this book, the wise author knelt down and angrily complained to netizens that they did not understand right and wrong and could not clean up. What's even more ridiculous is that the website is maintained in every possible way! ! Compared with other small authors, who accidentally made a mistake and was immediately removed from the shelves, the operation of the website is simply breathtaking (although I understand that I have to be careful, but I am still very angry)

[The old book is okay, but this one is too wise] A long time ago, I watched his Mystery of the Mage. Although the routines were too old and had a lot of poisonous points, the story was very good and the flaws were not hidden, so I could still watch it. However, in this book, there are even more third-rate routines, and the rich storytelling in the old book is completely gone! There are a lot of poisonous points and I don't know how to change them. The readers' pertinent opinions were rejected by the author by writing a separate chapter, which can only be said to be a masterstroke. (Later, the author got scared and deleted the single chapter. If you want to watch it, you can go to piracy websites that even repost single chapters. Because some pirate websites will do fine editing, for example, single chapters and the author's words that have nothing to do with the novel story will be removed.) As I watched, I immediately deleted the book (even though I already wanted to give up reading it. There is a plot in the book that is like this in real life: the annual subsidy for the families of martyrs who sacrificed their lives for the country was put in the book. "I don't understand why families who no longer have the ability to practice need to subsidize so many precious resources? Wouldn't it be enough to give them some basic entry-level resources and worldly money? Doesn't this mean that people will go to crime?", And there are actually people in the area who dare to go to crime). Now I want to create a book list for the sake of wisdom (that's the b), and then I remembered this book. Let's make a digression. I just don't understand. Does it make you angry when a reader points out your question? It's just a pertinent question without cursing or trolling, so you're so angry that you're deleting comments and issuing separate chapters to troll people? Later, I asked my friend, and he said that if you tell the truth like this, it will affect his subscription performance, and he will naturally protect his job in every possible way without thinking. I just can't understand it. It's inevitable to write a badass. After all, it's just an illusory world built by one's own efforts. It cannot be as perfect and self-consistent as the real world. But readers have pointed out problems for you. Is it difficult for you to humbly accept them and make selective modifications? An old saying goes to you: You deserve to be thrown into the street!

[The old book is okay, but this one is too wise] I read his Imperial Golden Pill when I was in junior high school (I don't quite understand why Chaos was reincarnated as the son of the protagonist in the end...). Even now, I think this book is quite good. However, when I was writing this book, I was amusing myself with a lot of poison (for example, I am still writing about the boss and second child in the dormitory after a few years), and I did not allow others to offer a few pertinent opinions. I didn't believe it when I watched it at first, but then I got involved and realized what it means to deserve to be thrown into the street. In a fit of anger, I voted for a 1-star review of 250 yuan (a number that suits this author). Now that I think about it, it's quite a loss. If I invest so much at one time, the author will complain to the editor and cancel it, so my money will be wasted. Now that I've looked at it, it's true. But it wasn't a big problem, at least I felt quite relieved at the time.