Fifteen-year-old Poisonous Insect 'ouyang Feng' 🕷🦂🐍tests Poison, Seedlings New Book Review
十五年老毒虫'欧阳锋'🕷🦂🐍试毒，幼苗新书评
(We clean out old books and add new ones from time to time; books with the most likes are ranked first; we guarantee that every book has been tested by a single author; please pay attention and collect it.) In 2003, I just entered college and started reading online articles. I almost witnessed the development of online articles. After reading a lot of online articles, I feel that even if they are online articles, good books will still resonate with readers and portray the human nature of the charm. I will list the mistakes that are often made in the web articles I have read: First, there is no main line. Many authors think that the main line is something ethereal and dispensable. You must know that online writing is a work that spans a long time. If there is no main line, the author will easily write a world that collapses in the novel. I've seen too many new books dumped here. The second is that the plot or characters should be written too bluntly or unreasonably. It's what we often call poisonous points. Third, there are no excellent examples of how to write online articles. Today's online writing is like a stage play. How to quickly deepen the audience's sense of involvement at the beginning, how to bring about the climax of the plot, and how to make the interaction between the characters in the plot more emotional. These are writing skills that need repeated practice to master. Recommended review: Below two stars, the writing is terrible. Two to three stars or less is considered average. Three to four stars or less is considered good. Four stars is considered a rare quality among online articles. Four and a half to five stars, it is a classic of online literature and a legendary work well known in the online literature world.
46My Husband is Too Humble
Xuanhuan我夫君实在太谦逊了
Broken Sword
Traveling to a world where monsters and monsters are rampant, Su Li becomes a son-in-law with no identity or status. In addition to a broken and dysfunctional sand sculpture system, he can't do anything and can't learn anything. In order to survive in this cruel and terrifying world, Su Li could only repair the system in a low-key manner and work hard to become stronger. Originally, this kind of life was very pleasant, until one day, his wife came back injured and lost all her cultivation. Su Li had to stand up... Then he discovered that there was no one in this world who could fight? ? ? Su Li: System, didn't you say that this world is super dangerous? Exercise modification system: --|||, when this system first woke up, wasn't it a bit stuttering? I just said 9 more 9s when scanning the combat power of those strong men. As for host, do you want to hold grudges for the rest of your life?
Traveling to a world where monsters and monsters are rampant, Su Li becomes a son-in-law with no identity or status. In addition to a broken and dysfunctional sand sculpture system, he can't do anything and can't learn anything. In order to survive in this cruel and terrifying world, Su Li could only repair the system in a low-key manner and work hard to become stronger. Originally, this kind of life was very pleasant, until one day, his wife came back injured and lost all her cultivation. Su Li had to stand up... Then he discovered that there was no one in this world who could fight? ? ? Su Li: System, didn't you say that this world is super dangerous? Exercise modification system: --|||, when this system first woke up, wasn't it a bit stuttering? I just said 9 more 9s when scanning the combat power of those strong men. As for host, do you want to hold grudges for the rest of your life?
Good. Recommended index: Samsung
47我靠算命当BOSS
Mogu
Yu Shan, a legendary professional (qiu) player in "Magic League", unfortunately traveled to the game world. When he opened the golden finger, he seemed to have a bit of a misunderstanding... "SSS level difficulty script? Didn't I choose the SSS golden finger?" "The host is too strong, the system automatically balances?" "System, you said I am handsome and I recognized it, how come I am strong!" "System! You don't cheat me, why do you want to cut me?!" "Compensate for the hidden profession... Fortune teller? "The plot of the main mission maintenance system?" "You are kidding me!" Yu Shan, who has a family to feed, can only live on the streets to tell fortunes and occasionally solve the world's crises. I used the computer to earn some pocket money... I thought life would go on like this, until 5 versions later, Yu Shan unlocked the system seal... Raise the most ferocious BOSS, lead the craziest players, shout the name "Yu Banxian", and start the counterattack! ! !
Yu Shan, a legendary professional (qiu) player in "Magic League", unfortunately traveled to the game world. When he opened the golden finger, he seemed to have a bit of a misunderstanding... "SSS level difficulty script? Didn't I choose the SSS golden finger?" "The host is too strong, the system automatically balances?" "System, you said I am handsome and I recognized it, how come I am strong!" "System! You don't cheat me, why do you want to cut me?!" "Compensate for the hidden profession... Fortune teller? "The plot of the main mission maintenance system?" "You are kidding me!" Yu Shan, who has a family to feed, can only live on the streets to tell fortunes and occasionally solve the world's crises. I used the computer to earn some pocket money... I thought life would go on like this, until 5 versions later, Yu Shan unlocked the system seal... Raise the most ferocious BOSS, lead the craziest players, shout the name "Yu Banxian", and start the counterattack! ! !
The author's writing is quite sophisticated, and the poisonous points are within an acceptable range. However, I have read the first ten chapters, and to be honest, they are still a bit redundant. The insignificant descriptions can be slightly refined. If you don't suffer from mental retardation later on, it can be a high-quality book. Recommended index: Samsung
48Create the Myth of the Heavens
Multiverse打造诸天神话
Male
[Creation Style] The Blue Emperor is born and dominates the world! Nuwa repairs the sky, there is a sky beyond the sky! I preach, who can compete with me? Seven Kings and Five Emperors, Six Paths of Reincarnation, All Heavens and Worlds... Were ultimately defeated by the Lord of Desolation, who glanced down at him with a glance. Raise all living beings, use the world as a field, use mythology and civilization as fruits, pursue the secret of the collapse of the universe, and pursue the way back home. From the monsters in the Book of Mountains and Seas to the establishment of ancient clans, from the [Reincarnation Hall] to the [Three Realms of Heaven, Earth and Man], create the ancient divine palace and six paths of reincarnation. The Qing Emperor, the Seven Kings, the Three Pure Ones, the Golden Crow, and the weeds with plug-ins... This is the story of a Thanos-style old farmer who created an ancient world... Ps: Online IQ, careful development, completely original magically modified plot, trolls please avoid it directly. He once used the book title "Creating the Ancient World"!
[Creation Style] The Blue Emperor is born and dominates the world! Nuwa repairs the sky, there is a sky beyond the sky! I preach, who can compete with me? Seven Kings and Five Emperors, Six Paths of Reincarnation, All Heavens and Worlds... Were ultimately defeated by the Lord of Desolation, who glanced down at him with a glance. Raise all living beings, use the world as a field, use mythology and civilization as fruits, pursue the secret of the collapse of the universe, and pursue the way back home. From the monsters in the Book of Mountains and Seas to the establishment of ancient clans, from the [Reincarnation Hall] to the [Three Realms of Heaven, Earth and Man], create the ancient divine palace and six paths of reincarnation. The Qing Emperor, the Seven Kings, the Three Pure Ones, the Golden Crow, and the weeds with plug-ins... This is the story of a Thanos-style old farmer who created an ancient world... Ps: Online IQ, careful development, completely original magically modified plot, trolls please avoid it directly. He once used the book title "Creating the Ancient World"!
Pig's feet get a small blank world and then evolve. The setting of the small world is original and unique, quite good, and close to the ranks of high-quality products. Recommendation index: three and a half stars
49玩家请自重
Yu Yunfei
Player - the legendary fourth natural disaster. No one could have predicted what a time traveler who was forced to bear the fate of the Demon King and a group of sandbox players would do in the special world of "Bloody Arena". When Wang Hao stretched out his finger towards the enemy... "Long live the charge!" "Demacia!" "For the Alliance!" "For the tribe!" "Wait! Kill the one who charges Long Live first, beat the one who calls Demacia, and then we brothers will show off!" "Okay!" Wang Hao: I%$#@%, it's too difficult for me ... After finally coming back from that hellish world, you actually want to open a game company to cover up that world? Wait, my shell company has become the light of domestic games. What the hell is this? -------- The author, who has been in the industry for 17 years, has many excellent completed novels such as "Storm God". Please feel free to collect and subscribe. Fan Penguin group number 551430919
Player - the legendary fourth natural disaster. No one could have predicted what a time traveler who was forced to bear the fate of the Demon King and a group of sandbox players would do in the special world of "Bloody Arena". When Wang Hao stretched out his finger towards the enemy... "Long live the charge!" "Demacia!" "For the Alliance!" "For the tribe!" "Wait! Kill the one who charges Long Live first, beat the one who calls Demacia, and then we brothers will show off!" "Okay!" Wang Hao: I%$#@%, it's too difficult for me ... After finally coming back from that hellish world, you actually want to open a game company to cover up that world? Wait, my shell company has become the light of domestic games. What the hell is this? -------- The author, who has been in the industry for 17 years, has many excellent completed novels such as "Storm God". Please feel free to collect and subscribe. Fan Penguin group number 551430919
Develop virtual games, connect the consciousness of fellow earthlings, and collaborate to fight in other worlds. Belongs to game flow. The first 17 chapters are well written, and can be said to be close to the level of a masterpiece. Unfortunately, it soon became a big poisonous point. In the wild, the low-level Pig's Foot was attacked by a high-level female elf and was about to be killed. Pig's Foot used the trap he had prepared before, and managed to turn defeat into victory and capture the female elf. Then, because the other party was a beauty, she let her go without any checks and balances. Even if the author wanted to write about the plot of Pig's Foot Fuck 13, he couldn't act like a little virgin with sperm in his head. When I saw this, I gave up the book. All I can say is that the author needs to pay more attention to these minefields that cannot be touched casually in the future. To be honest, everything else is well written. It was originally at the level of three and a half stars, but the final recommendation index is: two and a half stars.
50World of Gods
Xuanhuan众神世界
Eternal Fire
On Mount Olympus in the center of the world, Zeus, the King of Gods, holds the Thunder Spear tightly and looks at the world with a smile. In front of him, the gods were like a forest. In the Silver Hall in the north, Odin on the Supreme Throne holds the Spear of Heaven and looks down at the world. There was endless wind and snow in his eyes. On the banks of the Nile in the south, Amun-Ra, who was steering the sun boat, set his sights on the Aegean Sea. Under his feet were mountains of dry bones. In the land of two rivers, Marduk, the king of kings, looks west to the world. His hero-king, Gilgamesh, carried the oracle on his back and set out on an expedition to Greece, with a fleet of warships like the sea. In Plato's Academy, a young man named Su Ye walked up the mountains and reached the top.
On Mount Olympus in the center of the world, Zeus, the King of Gods, holds the Thunder Spear tightly and looks at the world with a smile. In front of him, the gods were like a forest. In the Silver Hall in the north, Odin on the Supreme Throne holds the Spear of Heaven and looks down at the world. There was endless wind and snow in his eyes. On the banks of the Nile in the south, Amun-Ra, who was steering the sun boat, set his sights on the Aegean Sea. Under his feet were mountains of dry bones. In the land of two rivers, Marduk, the king of kings, looks west to the world. His hero-king, Gilgamesh, carried the oracle on his back and set out on an expedition to Greece, with a fleet of warships like the sea. In Plato's Academy, a young man named Su Ye walked up the mountains and reached the top.
Good. Pig's feet travel to the world of Olympic mythology. Recommended index: Samsung