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High Above the Sky1

Yin Tian Shen Yin

4.4M8.9176

Crowdfunding for the physical book of "Above the Sky: Ruins of the Abyss" has started! The crowdfunding gifts include: postcards + character stickers + bar set + laser bookmarks, and more unlock items are in progress! It's still the same place, WeChat mini program Dimension Core, the quality is really good, you can try it! ==All the stars twinkling in the sky have experienced billions of years. Most of their lives last a lifetime, and even the momentary brilliance of the stars cannot match it. No matter how great a civilization and country is, it is just a fleeting stream of light under the stars. But what if even the starlight dims? In this late night when the stars have disappeared, only the fire on the earth burns. But there will always be people who don't want to gaze at the dazzling light above the earth, but choose to look up at the dark starry sky. Then, try to reach the sky. "I don't care at all how people in this world live, whether they have enough to eat, whether they can wear warm clothes and live well, whether they have dreams and hopes. I don't care about their likes and dislikes." "I just want to go to the sky." - Ian. The prisoners looked out from the window of fate, mostly staring at the dirt. Only one looked up at the stars. ====The protagonist is a prophet, so there won't be any difficult or meaningless battles of wits or courage. The point of the story is not that. Readers who want to see frustration and conflict rather than smooth development may be disappointed, so I'm giving you a preview in advance.

Curator

The pressure is too heavy. About 400 chapters have been completed in the Novice Village. The first level has been pressed and pressed and lurked just for the sake of leveling up. The disadvantage is that the description of the background is scary and terrifying, and then it will not exist if you don't care. I continue to level up and develop. I saw the author who said it was too late to argue, and the delay is just a delay. After reading it, I felt that it was too late to even think about updating it. There are also maintainers who said that I like this. Uh-huh, if the author's writing style and update volume were not low, it would become pure torture. What is the growth speed of killing monsters? Is the development speed correct? The pace is too heavy and the pressure in the background keeps adding to the sense of crisis. It is a bit too contradictory to play with real development. It is almost 500 years old in Western Fantasy Farming and it has not been planted yet. I am immersed in describing the pit and misery. Don't you have an extraordinary revelation? In the end, 80% of it is still solved with all your strength. It is better to develop quickly. The design status has always been stuck and described in detail. It is really thanks to the writing and the amount of updates. It's not that you can't write in detail, it's mainly a matter of pacing. You have to go up to half a level after several big events. You have to stop it in moderation and stay with me for a long time. If you want to accumulate time, it's better to skip more. Things that are not a problem at the same level will be dealt with at the first level. If you keep looking at the higher level, you will always be at the first level. The level system is really torturous if there is no teacher role to give knowledge about potions. I only see all kinds of torture and can't get ahead🤔

Super Mechanic2

Qi Peijia

5.2M9.710,005

Han Xiao, a hardcore power leveler of "Xinghai", was thrown into the traveling army by the mysterious force from the east (zuo) side (zhe), and turned into an NPC with the player panel. He returned to "Xinghai" before the public beta, and resolutely chose the most difficult mechanical system. Battleships line up across the sea of ​​​​stars, star mechas are as powerful as dragons, psionic cannons destroy the world, and there are endless mechanical armies. Just one person waiting quietly in the warehouse is the legion! If players hadn't appeared, this book would have been a serious theme of traveling through another world... As an NPC, a normal NPC would have all the functions of a player... Is it a mission to issue? Favorability adjustment? Teach skills? Hey, wait a minute, I know all these players, and the real world has returned to ten years ago. Group 2: 157302881 Group 3: 884339155 Group V: 547599250 (requires 1w fan value to be reviewed by management)

Curator

Yes, it is very interesting, but the upgrade system in the back is becoming less and less effective. Not a single mechanical value is taken up, and there is a finale that I can continue to write without wanting to write. The resources are also used a bit and it feels like playing in the mud. First of all, the gap in evolution and advancement is too small. These specialties are also given to buckles. They are said to be super A-level. In the end, none of the specialties can compare with the fleshiness of the budding leader and the mechanism of returning to blue after being beaten? I have been secretly suppressing the combat power, but it is difficult to break down. The mechanism does not cooperate with the left and right feet. I thought I was researching the skill-increasing mechanism because of the perfect mechanical sense. Among them, one of the gods and the Tool Nation was super A. I thought the powers were invincible. I used the power supplement mechanism to step on the left and right feet, but the result was that the genetic chain was too much to negatively suppress the combat power. There was also the Tool Nation's sugar-changed Xing disciple who required his own blue. That was useless. I thought the mechanic would research it. Make whatever you want. Later, use the supernatural gods as materials and use the evolution cubes to create a strange object with special powers. It is best to build a special power panel for yourself and talk about science while using super powers. I thought that playing mechanical civilization and mechanical feedback would have no special skills. I couldn't see any science of mechanics. I only saw Aba Aba copying without thinking. I thought I had left the circle to study literature. Tomorrow I started to use the technology rolling mechanism and the research system experience upgrading system to add tasks and specialties. After getting the World Tree, I thought I was going to do this. But it turned out that the author didn't want to write it and just accelerated the fast-forward to the end. Oh my, the specialties are real deductions😥The racial talents are also real sugar. They have chosen their own talents. Why don't we create more mechanisms? I know that the protagonist can mutate, right? Technology is What, talking about technology and superpowers at the same time, you add superpowers to technology, and you still have the old Barabala civilization. What is the fire of your mechanical civilization used for? The technology of civilization is not technology, right? Does it really mean that the upper limit has been stretched and cannot be researched? Uh-huh, what is the concept of super supernatural mechanical energy? If you don't use superpowers, you can't use the alliance's technological methods to cultivate your mechanical civilization? There are also pure machines, right? Biotechnology can also cut out technology, right? Haha, virtual specialization cannot intelligently coordinate monitoring forces and can only monitor manually. Oh, unlimited energy, what is the concept? Mass-energy conversion means unlimited resources. You can't explode one person to become a country, let alone the transformation of information entities. You guys are really playing in the mud. It's also amazing. It doesn't add up to your own values or apply it to your own strength. The mechanism is really a mess, pure secret pressure, and the conversion rate is even worse. While talking about real-life technology, I usually use the game board to be stuck. I just refuse to step on the left foot and the right foot. It gives me a headache😩It's such a pity. Alas, it feels like a good hand is snowballing.

Mysterious Resurgence3

Laying Flowers In Front Of Buddha

5.3M9.35,143

"My name is Yang Jian, and I am already dead when you read this sentence..." A strange parchment scroll, an eye peering into the darkness, this is the story of a person who survived. ------

Curator

It is not unreasonable to write about humans and super ghosts, and to write about ghosts and super gods. A third- and fourth-rate urban super fantasy plot, and a second-rate and first-rate gui monster setting system with novel bonus points. It is really difficult to describe people at a glance, and the more you think about it, the harder it becomes. While emphasizing the scarcity of charioteers, they treat them like consumables to fill the gap. They say they will self-destruct and revive after being used too much, but they are not worried at all, as if they can be used casually like a superpower, using it as an excuse to affect the spirit. , Saying that they are all short-lived and afraid of coming and going, the result is that one of the supporting characters wants to stir up trouble, and that one wants to suppress and beat them up. Hello everyone, hello, hello, everyone. Who knows if your ability is needed? Technical support is just a phone call away. Psychiatrists are not available. There are even so few research scientists like Wang. The controller is so rare that there is no team of security psychiatrists, scientific teams, and experienced seniors. Since I started researching customized driving routes and handling after-sales, I just used people to fill in events. Hundreds of millions and hundreds of millions are even more sugar-coated. I didn't use things like gui to scientifically use them for modernization. Gold is also unregulated. I was wondering if I could create something like the past with gold in front of the king of hundreds of tons. I thought there was a mysterious resurrection. In the end, I fought endlessly. I didn't feel how serious the recovery of the world was. I just felt that people were quite relaxed. In the internal fight in Super Power Awakening, the protagonist is almost over and still has black shadow, black hands and red eyes. The field seems to be very strong and useless, but it can't close the gap. Black Shadow's ability has not been fully utilized. Ah, you can use your abilities casually, and the eyes are about to revive again. They fight each other. In the previous event, I thought it was a usage problem at the fifth or sixth level. However, it turned out that the stacking value of the flying bricks was increased to seven or eight levels. The red eye was still too easy to operate. Those seniors are also done with sugar. Why not interfere with the route of the younger generation? You don't need to leave any experience to figure out a route with your bare hands. You want to fly before you run. Heritage and knowledge are not willing to be left behind, leaving people in the dark. The unlucky ones are asking questions. I don't know if there is anything that cannot be copied. Is that right? Then you should leave a record and study it, or make a guarantee of a route that can be passed down. Hey, after recovery, While talking about future generations and letting them go, you hid the knowledge and didn't want to come forward. You said you handled the incident before, um, you resisted and didn't look for inheritance. After you recovered, you didn't stand up and hold on, delaying the development of future generations. Brother, who is playing random numbers with you? You don't have a long life, so you should pass down the knowledge and power first before talking about anything else. You want to solve it completely. You really have it, and the sacrifice flow will be brilliant, right? Trying for a few decades would be a waste of money, and trying for a few thousand years would be like a bird. 6, It's so cool. The way to fight for recovery time is to forget and seal it instead of researching it. This is different from the world view of modern scientific research, discovering major results and then closing your eyes and pretending not to know. No, let me watch for fun. Finally, there are no organized guards in Guanjiang Community and other places. These elders and the Suiren family dug wood to make fire and hid it and then told others about it. I don't know if it's right or wrong. You are not allowed to use fire or other things, water, wind or metal. Hey, most of the book is just black shadow and red eye. If you are not afraid of resuscitation, don't play Pinduoduo. The black shadow will be strengthened. Ah, it will revive again. There is no red eye fire puzzle. You can't put your left foot on the right foot. It's a third-rate plot and a second-rate setting.

Pastor's Tantra4

Pastor's Tantra

Light Novel

Do Not Pray Ten Strings

4.2M8.677

During the ritual to summon the devil, Aiwass finally recalled the memories of his past life. This should be an online game published and operated by its own company for six years. Now his adoptive father is the latest version of the leader of the villain organization. And his identity will be exposed six years later, and he will jump back from the protagonist's side. In the end, because he decided to block a fatal blow for the player character, he was beaten to death by the eldest brother in the cutscene CG without even a chance to enter the book. --But actually it's not a big problem. Because Aiwass also knows many secret promotion routes that are exclusive to player characters, as well as the rules of each path as secret knowledge, he will definitely be able to reverse his unfortunate fate... So now there is only one question left. "According to the original plot, shouldn't I have been rescued by the protagonist before this ridiculous ceremony started?" Aiwass, who was tied to the ceremony table as a sacrifice, fell into deep thought. ------This book is also called "When Plot Skip Players Enter the Game World" Keywords: Victoria Fantasy, Amber Flow has already published "Player Super Justice", "Toppled Tower", "Mercury Blood" and other works with a total of nearly 10 million words completed, credibility guaranteed!

Curator

It's hard to break down, Luo Li is so verbose, I've been explaining the logic for a long time and it's still a bit unclear. When I look at the progress, it feels like I've deliberately controlled it and it's like a turtle crawling. The battle of wits in more than two hundred chapters is speechless. After going around for a long time, the examinee and the examiner are working together to target each other. Bb said that everyone is smart, so how come they still miss the mark? From a God's perspective, it's better to vote. If you don't want to win in the target game, don't win. This is the level 20 breakthrough book.

Don't Confiscate My Citizenship5

Poor Xixi

3.3M9.1281

"She was originally a demon. How could she be led evil after meeting a human like me? Those critics always say some ridiculous things." In 1798, Cardinal Ranchi was asked in an interview with a reporter about his relationship with the exiled demon. Regarding the past of the Descendant Princess and the recent signs of the revival of the demon clan, he said: "I have made too many efforts to safeguard world peace. I am convinced that under her leadership, there is no possibility of the demon clan returning to the country."... In the winter of 1802, the demon clan successfully recovered. [Based on the above materials, please identify who is the main war criminal who led to the return of the demons, and explain why it is Lan Qi. (10 Points)]--Selected from "Classic Questions Collection of Imperial History Unified Examination"

Curator

I can't stand it anymore, I open high and move in the middle, the card setting at the beginning is interesting, the power system and the plot are good, and then it gradually goes downhill. I rely on the intensity of daily love to set up the gameplay of cards that have no sense of existence. The setting of reincarnation is not good, and the plot is blank and boring. The ending is light. From the last two chapters, it can be seen that the author is not able to write well. He wanted to take the civilized governance route but failed to make good use of it. For this reason, he also failed to make good use of his strengths and avoid weaknesses. In the end, he relied on the strength of the single target, which was almost divine. When playing the card system, he relied solely on the low-level bottom and did not change the route diversity at all. He stayed on one path. The board is not as interesting as the low-level flower activities. When you enter the shadow world simulation, you need to expand and play for fun. Take fantasy and walk into the starry sky, into myths, into outer space and transcendence. The addiction to leadership is still limited to a world sandbox. Limitations come and go. In the end, the source is still the author's intention. God's supreme destiny is already established and it is boring. The seventh level is over. As the protagonist, if you don't go up or go to the end of the road, you have been talking about the chain for a long time to restrain the vampires. After finishing the game, you can see that after digging out the mythical blood buff, you might as well make one with the materials and return the Black Sun Tyrant's Pardon. Is it really a pure support? Is it really possible to tie up a system with a first-level card at the beginning? Don't you want to play something different? It would be great if the Tyrant's Pardon effect had more buff mechanisms to be worthy of being the highest rarity in mythology. For example, the spell would cause damage and impose several designated negative buff stacks, with a sealing effect. There is a small probability of permanently sealing the blue blood attribute, a medium probability of sealing the blue blood attribute for a limited time, and a high probability of sealing the blood and blue attributes during the battle. If the gap is too large or the superimposed seals are reached, the opponent can be sealed directly. Another example is to add a blue blood attribute seal to the specified On the character summons, find a summoned purification and purification whiteboard derivative card to self-destruct, allocate the amount of attribute blue to teammates or yourself to strengthen. The sealing points are converted into permanent attributes as skill point bonuses and saved for yourself. The blue blood extracted from multiple sealing points is added to the summons and then blessed on yourself. As a result, this red seven pure spell has no mechanism. It is not as interesting as the counter-mechanism of other people's vampires. How do you seal the vampire and treat it like a bomb? Is the explosion a permanent death? No, your seal depends on the level difference and consumes mana. It's too much to weigh. I really want to play in the mud in this continent. The diversity of cards is so much. There are too many card slots and there is no sense of existence in the later stage. It's Douluo Continent. It's a little bit of everything. It's included. Only daily love is the core. The writing and design of this point are drawn by supermodels. The characters are second-rate and above average, the plot is second-rate and below average, and the daily funny love is first-rate. Why don't you just write a love comedy with all the hardships and hatred? Don't mention it, it's really love. I love comedies. This romantic comedy is really good, but the others are really bad. I want to start writing but I don't have the ability, so I can only just scratch it. The more I think about it, the more regretful it becomes. Once I become the Prime Minister, I can get out of the barrier, and other historical wars may be inspired to create an ideal. I played the civilization simulation game "Start to the Stars" to expand my brain. In the end, depending on the strength, you let the protagonist become stronger. The completion of the whole seventh level was too hasty. I felt that I couldn't hold it back and had no choice. But I still think that the red myth is too pure. Isn't this a mechanism?