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1/5 Xiaobaiwen, This book became popular mainly because of the book friend who helped change the introduction. Streamlined, engaging and suspenseful Many people came here to see the explosion in Chapter 92 When I saw the middle section, I felt that it was tasteless and abandoned it, so I pursued it. It's just a fantasy novel with a sci-fi skin. It's still the ancient dragon and proud type, pretending to be a good talker and copying the public Because of the entertaining beginning of the last 62 chapters, Later, a quarter of the main sci-fi plot will be used to copy songs and explain the importance of copying songs. It still feels fresh when I am reborn to Chapter 200 Slowly reaching chapter 350, it starts to feel repetitive. Ability improvement means the evolution level increases by 0.1% 0.1% Makes a huge difference The armor is strengthened, but the fighting style remains the same The ships were strengthened, they were all lined up, the cannons were firing, and the kamikaze ships were ramming. New technology is new germs, high computing power, new bombs The difficulty is always the operation, but there is no other way to operate except experience. The protagonist successfully ascends to the throne and defeats the future people smoothly Looking back, the so-called explosion in Chapter 92 means that the first 62 chapters were too poisonous. Let people's expectations drop to freezing point, and then give a 60-point answer sheet The writing style is zero, the creativity is okay, but the logic is basically nonexistent. The core idea is to plagiarize and pretend to be a stingy little person. A story of unlimited opportunities to change your destiny

2.5/3 Rebirth in the future, farming, plug-in text The protagonist is a primitive tribe who uses technology and tactics to Farm and become the leader of the tribe step by step Unify the North again, and then unify the white Southerners The primitive tribe in the early stage has very good online IQ. In the mid-term, we are planning to deploy in the South, and there will be some blackening and discrimination. Moreover, using the hook to control his subordinates is too fierce, and Jinfu is invincible. In the later stage, the overall situation has been decided, and then it becomes a refreshing style to defeat the opponent. The south is even more boring, it feels like extermination and total killing. The ending is to fill the hole, and the northern mob passes by suddenly Still strong enough to marry an AI

2/5 Su Yang, born as a commoner, has above average intelligence Get a system to add points for each task Add some anti-Japanese and anti-American elements to a lot of items to unify the world In the early stage, the focus was on warm and prosperous daily life In the mid-term, there are various female protagonists, and the entertainment and film circles are rolling around. Post-installation forced to slap the face in the global layout To put it mildly, the brave man finally became the evil dragon. But the main character Ma, if you want to be righteous in your 3 views, resurrect those with 3 incorrect views and do practical things 😂 It's okay to kill time, and it's good to write about the female characters. Insufficient knowledge about the global landscape

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3/5 Ancient house fighting essay The eleventh mother-in-law died of illness and entered the prince's palace, pampering her and raising her legitimate son. Train Fourth Master Manman well Use wisdom to start hell and open it successfully No golden finger, less about imperial power -Mainly writes about relatives of the emperor, middle and lower gentry, and dignitaries ecology in ancient times -Relatively bland

1/5 The ending is too bad and poisonous The protagonist is a bit miserable in the first 50 chapters, and everyone can step on him The process of becoming a pretty girl is very confusing and weird. It's weird that the protagonist ideally wants to have no hatred in the world. The domestic plot in Dai Viet is okay, quite enjoyable and exciting. When we push the big world view to the south, it starts to get out of control. In the plot of Dayan Kingdom, it is about bombing nuclear bombs. In the end, the salvation plot was pushed to whitewash the whole world and blacken Jiang Li. There is no logic anymore It's unnecessary, and it also contradicts the main character's behavior all the time. Finished in Dai Viet, Don't write secrets about your life experience Don't mix in Western magic elements Pure Shuangwen will be more comfortable It's cool, forget about the writing and plot. The ending was messy and unhappy, and the ending was very poor. The last 150 chapters are so poisonous that I can hardly stand it anymore Forced to cleanse Jiang Li and separate Jin Mulan without purpose Destroy a bunch of planets to save the earth A lot of people died in the end Wow, this is so messed up that it bleeds and puss

2/5 Emperor of Heaven Spirit Seeds vs. Gods East Fighter vs. Thanos vs. Earth vs. Others Each battle has 5-6 faction targets. 1. There is no end to chaos, the main line is to kill, kill, kill 2. Use 200 million to defeat your 190 million. 3. The earth and human worlds are basically the same in the end. The protagonist wants to be the king of the three realms but wants the earth to die first. 4. The human world is the fundamental power of seeds, but because of the protagonist, he can only commit suicide and cannot be killed, making it so-called heroic 5. The protagonist is a pawn from the beginning to the end. From war~earth~heaven~seed The war wants to use the protagonist to liberate the three realms, the earth wants to destroy the world and take revenge, the sky wants to trap the human race and harvest its original power, and the seeds no longer want to be seeds. 6. The solution is for the cat and the protagonist to take turns as seeds. The cat does not agree. The protagonist will deteriorate over time. The origin problem is solved, but the problem of separation still exists. The cat may forget and the protagonist will deteriorate.

3/5 Never been able to get on the shelf The last 100 and a half tj This car is super fast @@

2.5/5 Pretending to be a disciple, having a bad mouth Keep repeating routine At the end, the author probably had something to do, so he ended it after three chapters.

4/5 System text spiritual energy recovery The writing is very clever and cheerful. It's a lot better to mutter something for two seconds Lu Zhou's second world adventure has room for improvement But the polar body is really good

3.5/5 System document Founder's story of growing up A little Zen-like and positive energy The protagonist is a little bit crooked Quite novel

2/5 It's a very tomato book, with a big layout and very few things written about it. Text refinement is too low The main plot can be written in about 500,000 words, and the rest is just water. Go straight, finish the story in five chapters The routine of pretending to be weak while trying to show off when you get promoted all the time Level is not important, enlightenment is abbreviated Jumping to two or three realms to show off is amazing

3/5 Yang Ling traveled through time and changed history, collecting 12 harems There are too many characters, and most of the new characters advance the story and then are discarded.

7/10 After passing the human world, he continued to practice pretending to be weak and fighting And it's a bit messy

2/5 Modern man's space adventure and cultivation of immortality 1: There are many characters, and the supporting roles are too streamlined. 2: The theme of the story [reincarnation] is limited to discussing whether it exists or not and using time to prove it. In addition, the writing was deliberately vague, which turned into a big failure. 3: The level of cultivating immortals was not well defined in the early stage and was very confusing. Dacheng, kings and emperors, all kinds of physiques, the writing is a mess 4: Basically all supreme characters are villains It seems that I wanted to write about a story about people's hearts that are old and it is difficult to maintain their original intentions. However, in the end, the relevant issues discussed are minimal and are just the foundation of the protagonist's power. 5: The timeline is chaotic, the immortals and the ancients are in chaos, ancient times, ancient times and recent times. I wrote until I was dazzled and didn't plan well. 6: Both the protagonist and the opponents have an invincible heart, a habit of pushing sideways, and their own adventures. They even have a transcendent mind and a special physique. Why is it that only the protagonist is invincible? 7: In fact, after the ancient road is completed, it will be transformed into a fairy road. Once the hidden lines are resolved, it should be completed. Finally, I forcefully add the background story of the Immortal Emperor Wu Shi the Great Emperor the Ruthless Emperor. It was too much and obviously out of control. It should be written well before the appearance or even in the middle when the mystery is solved or when the protagonist has speculations. 8: As usual, Chen Dong's book explores too lofty themes, too many characters, and too complicated subplots. But if the protagonist slowly grows up and has various strategies and tricks, it is really enjoyable. And the laughter is natural and easy. As long as we plan more for later development, cut off the hidden lines and branches one by one, and focus on the main line It's more perfect.

3.5/5 I love eating animal milk the most, and I've pushed all over the world. Deducing the eternal loneliness of dictatorship. Even though there are reincarnations and time travel, we can even see the past, present and future Everything is determined in advance, and there is the darkness of cause and effect The characterization of the characters from the Little One to Sanqianzhou period is thoughtful There are not many bugs in the plot, but there are a lot of pitfalls. In the middle period, when I wrote the foreign land and the origin of the funeral rites, I started to lose control a little. For example, the power struggle is too confusing, the villain suddenly becomes mentally retarded, The Heavenly Court is established, and the reason for the final destruction of the big boss is: The liquidation process and the results were chaotic and chaotic There should be one group of strong men in the realm of the sea, the immortal realm, and the lower realm. Even if there are differences in the process, the big goal is to prevent the invasion of black matter The process of the last 300 chapters is forcibly accelerated There are countless bugs, and only 70% to 80% of the pitfalls can be filled. The characters and supporting roles have also become flowing through, with no background story and no description. Only a villain who can match the protagonist's strength appears, and suddenly his IQ drops. Then the protagonist either pushes sideways or forcibly upgrades The charm of the Tao of itself [seeking for oneself] [Tao follows nature] and [transcendence] has been lost. It should be a small confusion in the mid-term, plus it goes against the main line and the writing is too big The result snowballed out of control. In the end, the more I wrote, the more tired I became, and I decided to finish the book early. However, it took nearly 500 chapters to finish the book, and I tried my best to wrap it up, so that it wouldn't end like a cliffhanger where two or three chapters would cover a thousand years of events. It is the best reward for readers It is admirable to persevere even when you are out of control and tired.

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3.5/5 Su Yan, a genius who turned into a useless person, experienced being betrayed by Nalan Yanran and regretted his marriage. With the help of Yao Chen, the grandfather who possessed Jie Zi, he practiced hard for three years and went to Yunnan Zong Yi to avenge his shame. In the academy in the Black Corner Territory, he developed a disciple, Sumen, and became the first person in the academy. He also met Cai and gave birth to a son. In Zhongzhou, he fought from the north to the center, and recognized Yao Lao's old friend, and began to confront the Soul Palace. The ancient clan seeks out their childhood sweetheart, Gu Xun'er, and is recognized to learn about the past and inheritance of the eight ancient clans and their own Su clan. Go west to the beast realm to help Taixu ancient dragon Ziyan ascend the throne In the end, there was a duel with the Soul Clan and its Swallowing Xuyan. The former ascended to the throne with the creatures of several races, while the latter ascended the throne with the inheritance of the ancient emperor. And defeated the Soul Emperor at the cost of his imperial body, and ascended to the upper world 50 years later

2.5/5 Lian Xiaxia wore it on an ordinary monk He trembled and used his intelligence and temperament to seek the path to ascension, and finally won the master, apprentice, pet, and the adoration of the male protagonist Gu Lang In the beginning, there is no luck, no chance, no magic weapon, I just believe that I am good alone With the support of my master, I have the magic weapon and adventure, but I still don't lose my heart, I don't rely on external things and others. Obtaining artifacts and space spiritual roots is just the icing on the cake, accelerating and exciting this story of grassroots monks cultivating immortality. It can be regarded as a good presentation and creation of a normal world of cultivating immortals. Eliminate love, artifacts, and talents as much as possible There are several other branch plots, such as Su Baiye's rebellion and Yan Jin'er's master-disciple love tragedy, so that the complex relationships inside and outside the sect are well laid out. Unfortunately, there are too many details about the characters, and the unstable crisis in the middle and later stages is too easy to pass; the last two big bosses, Shaoxin and the extraterrestrial demon, are easily defeated. Compared with the detailed description in the previous stage, the clues buried under each incident and even the spiritual roots of space are of little use. Provide only one reason to be chased by the boss