Go Back in Time and Be a Goddess

Transformation, Rebirth, City, Bai Xue, Guiquan is really chaotic, zhiyu The first four volumes are quite good. The plot rhythm and character creation are all in a stable but steady development. Although it is a bit too daily, I personally still like it. Starting from the fifth volume, the plot is a bit outrageous. I know that the author wanted to turn around and highlight the conflict points of the plot, but he neither grasped the degree well nor overwrote it well. As a result, the perception of the fifth volume was extremely conflicting. The three female protagonists felt as if they had suddenly changed. The plot had already taken a turn for the worse, and the characters gave people a strange feeling, which was unacceptable. The plot behind it is quite imaginative, but the rhythm is still not well grasped. It has been foreshadowing all the time. Two-thirds of the novel has passed, and it is still foreshadowing. It is only in the last third that the foreshadowing is suddenly revealed. How many people still remember the foreshadowing that was laid at the beginning of the plot, so many people in the comment area said that the author suddenly added settings. And the author also likes to draw cakes. After seeing more than half of it, he told me that it is definitely a happy end. The result is such an HD, right? It would be more comfortable if the master of the village was killed directly by a hatchet In general, the advantages are: writing, imagination, and character creation, all good There are also disadvantages, such as poor rhythm and occasional illness.

The large number is not connected to the mobile phone, so I will change the number and leave a comment. Those who like Su Susu can stop reading after seeing the breakup. The author has a lot of problems with character creation. The character of Su Susu was vividly created, but he was discarded casually. Lin Youluo, however, didn't have much description. In the end, she still gave people a vague feeling. Her characteristics didn't reflect anything. You can put these characteristics on anyone. But Su Susu is unique. The author brought her to life but threw it away at will. In the end, he gave Su Susu a so-called good ending for the so-called HE. But this is also the most disgusting thing about this book for me (I won't go into details about spoilers. In short, this ending is far-fetched and a bit insulting to my IQ). Maybe in the eyes of the protagonist, Lin Youluo is How perfect, how much she wants people to get close to her, but the author didn't use much pen and ink to describe Lin Youluo when she wrote it. As a result, Lin Youluo has no sense of existence in the eyes of readers. If she is not the person the protagonist has always liked, maybe many people will not remember her at all, because this character has no characteristics of their own.

As far as I'm concerned, it's a poisonous bunch. In my opinion, Lin Youyou is very straight, and there is nothing to induce the pig's feet to bend. Will Lin bend in this way? I don't believe it anyway. If she is like the best sister, then her sister should be very supportive of her. I can't understand all the troubles that follow... Maybe the author just wants to write a cool point: After being reborn as a girl, you can enjoy the jealousy of various girls? Such an obvious *sh*t mentality, after living in vain for so long, a girl is really drunk without changing. This is equivalent to living for another twenty years... I feel that I am not sure how to handle it... Either to use the domineering spirit to shake off the girls; or to write more realistically and not change the characters. They looked uncomfortable, as if they were imitating others.

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I'm a little confused about some separations. They both have feelings for each other, so they are so willing to give up. Bai is like this with his ex-wife and Su. Su made changes to cater to Bai, but Bai would also abandon Su for the best Lin in his heart. The reason was "we are not suitable"? Some people live in happiness, but some people live in the shadow forever. I don't understand why Bai came to this world. If it was for Lin, he shouldn't fall in love with Su just to numb his own feelings. But he obviously had feelings for Su, so why did he try to escape?

The writing is quite good, but it's really too watery. After reading Chapter 20, I just saw that the heroine has some menstrual cramps.

I don't want to read other novels, my mind is full of Bai Xiaosheng! ! ! !

I have to say that the subject matter is okay, but it's just too ink. It's always reminiscing, it's always sensational, and the story line is slow. I can't stand it anymore. Let me briefly talk about the predecessor. Writing the story well is the key. Don't talk about it. It's depressing. I don't know what you want to express after reading it. Tell the story again. Write the story first before talking about the sadness.

It's a top-notch whitening story, but not a first-rate urban entertainment/business story. The entertainment and business plots are awkward to watch, but the emotional entanglements between the heroine and the girls are really well written. What's sad is that the relationship between Youyou Susu is not clearly explained, and I can't read it twice. I really understand why Su Su is forced to kiss Youyou. The extra story is so blinding. Suddenly fantasy + *** housekeeper and Su Rong + the two wives no longer want the protagonists. Don't write these things suddenly. Give me back my pure Lily, okay? The author, please don't commit literary youth~

Bai Xiaosheng I love you! ! ! !

Bai Xiaosheng I love you! ! ! !

Bai Xiaosheng I love you! ! ! !

Daily Bai Xiaosheng I love you! ! ! ! ! !

I just think this novel is very real. It doesn't mean that the author must have had some kind of experience before he could write the corresponding novel. Rather, the emotional entanglements, characters' temperaments, and plot coherence are all natural and smooth. I have read too many protagonists with perfect personalities and the author deliberately kept my appetite low, but for this novel, from a reader's perspective, it can be said to be really good. It is long, but the content is not complicated. Instead, it has a certain strategic depth, or tension, and layering. The protagonist's character also has visible growth, and is not static. Before and after, to use Chinese terminology, we call it echo, and the ambush is naturally clever. As a person who doesn't use my brain much when reading novels, I only have hindsight. The author of Ailuo is indeed a person who pays attention to details as he said. I like it. The language is not detailed and may not be expressive, so please forgive me.

For the author's book, I registered an account for the first time, recharged the account for the first time, and then ordered it all. I read it all in one go and had to wait to gain weight again 🥺

It's been 3 months, and I haven't forgotten this novel for a single day. Now I spend every day in a trance... Maybe it was the first time I read Zhi Yu Wen, and it really hit home, and I understand it more and more! It turns out that the thorn of the black rose is really stuck in my heart and I can't pull it out... It's not that I don't want to give up, but. That heart-wrenching feeling can't be eliminated... I tried reading other novels but I couldn't read them... I'm so desperate... I feel like I'm going to collapse... There are so many things about this book that make me uncomfortable... Why are Youyou's worried, crying and companionship in front of Bai's bed not as good as the bouquet of flowers Susu sent to Bai's bed? The faint support and greetings are really not as good as Susu's greetings on the white desk? Why did Susu decide not to let you be alone when she saw Bai Bai was sad? Have you forgotten that the person who always stayed by Bai's side and helped Bai when Bai was in desolation was Youyou? Why is it that Youyou, who has been wearing twin ponytails for three years because of Bai, regards Bai's birthday as more important than her own, and holds a birthday party so carefully? Lin's attitude of cherishing even an ordinary hair tie given for free did not affect Lin's feelings for Bai at all after Bai's confession. He showed that he cherished this friendship as close as sisters, cared about supervising Bai's study, and cared about Bai's career. Bai couldn't see this? Not even impressed? Why can Susu ignore Lin's sacrifice for love in his previous life just by blocking the gun? Sacrifice for love in this life? Classmate Lin's silent dedication in this life? If you are so moved by Su, why can't you see Lin? Is true family affection inferior to love? Are people like this? Accept the kindness of your loved ones as a matter of course, and then feel grateful for others? Bai also said that he is a person who gives silently! What did Bai Weilin pay? I can't see anything! On the contrary, it hurt Lin from the beginning to the end, let alone give up the family feud! Did Bai give up in his previous life? What led to Youyou's despair was that she could only repay filial piety and die for Bai! In this life, Bai didn't hate him so much, and the Lin family was not the real murderer. There was no need to kill Lin's father. Bai Geng never gave up taking revenge on the Lin family! I laughed at Bai's shamelessness... Pay for it! Bai also wrote in "Zhu Xian" that when Zhang was in crisis, only Bi stood up, haha! What did she think of Lin? Is this how Bai thinks of Lin? Can't Lin do it? Lin dumped Bai, but in his previous life, as the boss of a Fortune 500 company, Lin had "***" with Bai. Bai didn't know if Lin was married! Doesn't this mean that Lin has never forgotten Bai? So if you work hard to make the company strong, aren't you really just like Bai who want to bridge the gap between family backgrounds? Why did a 17-year-old girl want to rebel against a big family that straddles politics and business? He thought he could run away like Zhuo Wenjun? Bai cannot understand the despair of being unable to resist. Just like Lin said, Bai has never understood the despair in "May this moment last forever". Just like Bai said to Lin, (I will see you 20 years later) in my memory, there is lingering sadness in your eyebrows... Maybe I am overthinking, but I think this is the fact. Lin Cai has suffered all his life! Lin waited for Bai all his life, but what he waited for in the end was that his family was ruined by Bai, and he died for Bai. Lin is a more infatuated person than Bai! No, it's painful for two lives. In this life, Bai's torture of Lin never stopped. ……………………………………………………………… Is Bai's true love for Su? Why is Bai Weisu so moved and so kind to Su? He paid school fees when he was a child and risked his life to save her innocence! Times Square risked his life to save her, stayed with Su when she was sad, and took care of Su's humble life. He went out of his way to say that he would stay with Su and give her a prosperous life. Giving her a villa, silently waiting for her to vent her feelings during the quarrel before coaxing her, keeping all his promises to her, and deceiving Lin? . . . Why did he sarcastically treat Lin Bai and act mentally retarded regardless of the situation, causing her so much trouble, almost killing him twice, and the final report almost caused Lin Bai to die together, but Bai could not care at all? In the end, he risked death and left Lin behind to save Su! Did it ever occur to you that this was unfair to Lindor? To Bai, Su and Xia were ex-wives and ex-girlfriends, but to Lin, they were strangers and love rivals! Why should Lin take this risk innocently? This is unfair to Lin Duo, but Bai wanted to save him, but Lin still supported Bai, believing that he could solve everything. This is Lin! Lin has always been devoted to you silently without asking for anything in return. Lin who never really blamed you for being hurt by you, Lin who could put aside her past grudges to help you when you lost your memory and came to help you, Lin who was deceived by you but still willing to believe in you again. Lin can resist your biological mother and protect you in his own way. It was Lin who broke up with his father because of you. It is the black rose that has amazed you through the years, but Lin has always been the hot water bottle that warms you. Lin has a strong desire for control, but isn't this desire for control the ultimate concern? She hoped that Bai would say everything to her. Didn't she hope that she could share Bai's joys and sorrows and help Bai? Classmate Lin has never said how much he likes and loves Bai like Su, but he has always protected Bai in his own way. Concerned about Bai. Family love is like this, giving silently without asking for anything in return! Express in detail, be great in silence! More durable and indelible than love... Love will turn people into tools, but it will become two kinds: becoming the other person's shield, protecting her from wind and rain; becoming the other person's sword, cutting through thorns for her. Whether it is about love or family relationships, Lin has achieved the ultimate in dialogue... ……………………………………………………………… Why did Susu forcefully intervene between Lin and Bai? Why is Youyou so angry? Why is Susu so possessive? Are you so sarcastic towards Youyou? Why does Bai like Susu so much? Why did Youyouhui forcefully tease Susu? Why did Youyou's personality change so quickly? Why would Susu be so mindless and willful, causing Bai a life-and-death crisis? Why won't Susu reflect on her behavior and become more mature? Why did Susu and Bai break up? I should have been very happy, but why did I feel so distressed? Why does Susu write so pitifully? Why do you brush it off even though Youyou is in more pain than Susu? Why did you brush aside Bai's inner pain and struggle? Why is the post-production process so fast? Why doesn't the ending end with Lin Bai staying in both places? Although it is a good ending for the three of them to be together, it is very heartbreaking.

The progress of this book can be summarized as follows: Su Susu pursues the protagonist, Su Susu falls in love with the protagonist, Su Susu is raped by the protagonist, Su Susu has a brain attack, and the protagonist opens a harem

The people who watched it were blown away. It almost rubbed their IQ to the ground. The speechless plot and the speechless heroine made the people who watched it disgusted.

I didn't want to read it after reading the comments. I'd better read other articles. I don't like to read self-abuse articles. I have a normal psychology and real life has not sorry for me. I don't need to mentally abuse myself. Maybe the author prefers mental sadomasochism. Other book lovers may not be able to accept the plot behind it, so it is better not to read it, otherwise the author will be blamed again.

Anyway, I no longer want to open this book after Su Su left. Today, I was reminded that it is limited to free, which is also interesting. The author likes to play, so I can play casually until Susu comes back and I will read it. Anyway, just skip and read the content written by the author and it probably won't have any impact.

If I were Miss Lin, whom the protagonist has a crush on, I would never be emotionally involved with the protagonist. Here he is confessing his love to a girl, but there he is being stalked and beaten by another girl. The protagonist still gives in half-heartedly, with a carefree attitude and insecurity.

Bai Hewen actually belongs to three people? ? There is a green grassland above the head, and there are several places where it is quite obvious that Youyou is interested in Su? What kind of routine is this? . . (Am I too naive??) There was also a side story that clearly hinted that Youyou and Su had put Bai aside together, and I was convinced too! ! This is the first Baihe novel I have read. In fact, I prefer the one where Youyou and Baihe are together😷😷😷

Forehead. . . . How does it feel. . . What about the protagonist who changed from male to female and turned into a 24K green tea bitch? ?

The portrayal of the protagonist and supporting characters is difficult to describe, and even a bit disgusting for today's people. I have never been in a book without a main character that I liked. This book did it. I personally do not recommend watching it

I've always seen men being gay and it's acceptable. Why do I accept being incompetent when it comes to women? I honestly don't understand the reason why the male protagonist loved the female protagonist so much in his previous life, and then he behaves like that after being reborn. I don't understand why he liked the female protagonist in his previous life and married another woman!

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The overall look and feel is not recommended. There are too many flaws and the logic is not smooth in all aspects. It should be renamed - A Bad Thing to Live Again.

The more I watch it, the more uncomfortable it becomes. I really can't stand it.

It turned out that I didn't like Su Susu very much when I saw how controlling Su Susu was, but I couldn't accept the protagonist abandoning her so ruthlessly, especially without any foreshadowing. After all, we shared the sorrow together. I originally liked Youyou, but the author didn't spend any time on Youyou in the early stage. He portrayed Susu so deeply that she suddenly abandoned her. Give me an explanation: Childhood sweethearts? Looking at Xia Zixuan's comments at the end, the protagonist is a scumbag. No matter how good others are to him, his childhood sweetheart is the most important. Even if he was left out in the past, his childhood sweetheart will immediately greet him with a smile on his face as soon as he shows his kindness, and he can also quickly treat Infinite He ruthlessly abandoned his good current girlfriend, especially when he described what he said when talking to others about Su Su. It was a bit harsh. She was really a scumbag. In fact, there are many ways to write about the entanglement of love and hate. Why did Xiao Sheng have to be portrayed like this? . .

In essence, it is Mary Suwen with Su Susu as the protagonist.