I! Shocked the World

One for students, but seeing the author working so hard, it's a reward. It's not much, it's just my heart. I just watched The Rise of the Humble Family, which is updated every two days. Then I read the author again, who updates five times a day, and there are ❤👍

Let me talk about my feelings about this book. I feel that the author is suitable for writing martial arts or fantasy, and the urban plot in this book is really outrageous, forced and awkward in some places, and the grasp of various relationships in the city is also not good. Either there is a harem behind it, or there is only There is a single female protagonist, or even no female protagonist, but I think it is related to many girls in the front. This may be easy to jump out later, and it also depends on the author's level. Generally speaking, if it is a martial arts cultivator in this city, it feels okay, or if it is urban life, there are really many loopholes. I hope it can be improved.

Great author! Many chapters are missing. Please fill them in quickly! Everyone who watched it felt sick!

I want to say that in 2012, there were anchors and so many people watched it. The author didn't write anything through his brain. He wrote whatever he thought and couldn't be practical.

When I saw it before it was put on the shelves, I felt a little anxious. I haven't read much and don't know how to describe it. Let me use an analogy. It's like drinking Sprite in the summer. After a few big gulps, it just feels good in my chest. Before I can burp, it comes again later. The book is still good to read.

The author doesn't even have an explanation! Why does it end like this?

A book where you can guess the plot

Author, are you doing one chapter a day? Short and small

With an investment of 3,000, don't let my investment go to waste.

Raise your hands for book friends who come from The System Must Die

The writing is beautiful and I will give you a thousand rewards for support. Come on, stick to your own style, don't be influenced by book friends, listen to good opinions, and ignore unreasonable ones. Everyone has their own ability to judge. Support you.

The author's writing is very simple and has a sense of substitution. I hope the author can check the information when writing, and book friends who read the book should not care too much. After all, it is a novel. I wish this book will get better and better and reach a higher level 🙏🙏🙏 Please improve it.

This novel. . . Maybe I've been reading daily novels lately, so I read this one. . . It's full of a sense of contradiction, and it's so exaggeratedly written. At the beginning, I wrote about how my sister died of illness in her last life, but from the female anchor's point of view, her sister has become a prop. If nothing else, your own sister is so hungry that she can't walk, and you are still in the mood to wonder whether it is disrespectful to people to throw money at you to make Wensi Tofu. . . This really doesn't suit me,

I want to apply for an essence, can you agree?

Why is there a sister again? Wouldn't the writers of Qidian not add a sister to promote the development of the plot?

If a guardian violates the property of a ward, I think everyone will call the police, right? Don't talk about mortgages or anything like that. The protagonist's parents are dead. The first heirs are the protagonist and his sister, right? The protagonist even said proudly that I would redeem him. I'm speechless. First, this house is shared by the protagonist and his sister, and you have no right to execute it. Second, it is impossible for the aunt to mortgage the house because he has no rights.

It feels pretty good, I really like this type. Nowadays, everyone is following the trend of writing books, and often can't find what they want to read. I used to really like the Almighty Wizard of the Nine Finger Immortal Lord, but I was too squandered in the later stages and couldn't catch up to the end. I came across this book accidentally and found it quite to my liking, so I kept supporting it.

I started reading online articles in 2006. According to the style of this book, if it was 10 years ago, this book would definitely be popular. But now, reading it now, it is poisonous from beginning to end.

Wouldn't it be better if you pretend less to slap someone in the face? It was okay at first, but the old routines of teachers, classmates, police, army, and banks since childhood have become really annoying. Are you going to write about slapping the heroine's parents in the face next? It's 9102 years and the supporting characters are still as brainless as a bunch of idiots.

Her parents died nearly 5 years ago and her sister was 5 years old (Chapter 4). If the author said she was one year old, then her sister was less than one year old when Pigfoot's parents passed away. She was raised by her uncle's family. This sister is still such a foodie and can dance so well (see Chapter 7). When she comes to rent a house and sees the kitchen, she wants to rely on other people's homes for food. This is such an uneducated character and she is obviously spoiled. It shows that Uncle Pigfoot's family is at least very obedient to his sister. Has anyone ever seen a child who is not sensitive, timid and cowardly?

Has the author been demented? The protagonist's sister is still in the hospital, but the protagonist is still in the mood to record songs and broadcast live.

In fact, many people like the best beauty cultivation system, and I hope the author will continue writing

It was fine in the early stage, but since I won 800 million in the lottery, I feel that I have started to lose money, especially since you dare to sell a word for 10 million. I really don't know where your advanced calligraphy comes from. Now that you have enough money after winning the lottery, you should downplay this aspect, instead of taking tens of millions as improper money under the influence of the 800 million, easily reaching tens of millions. You are still so obsessed with money that you have forgotten the original intention of why you want to make money in the first place, and it runs together with other urban novels with the oldest routine.

It's on the shelf now. You can think about the plot. It's really fun to read. There are very few books that I don't like. I can catch up on this one until it's finished 🌹🌹

It's a rubbish novel, forget it if it's unreasonable, the more you read it, the more embarrassing it becomes.

Ever since the bank episode, it felt like there was a different author. The writing style, the characters' IQs, and the plot are so clueless that they're a complete mess.

It was pretty good at first, but then it got really disgusting. I think the author should be pretty good at writing fantasy novels.

It's really too ink-filled. In the world of the novel, more than 80 chapters can be written in a day and the day is not over yet. Doesn't that mean that the whole book is finished? It's only been a week in the world of the novel.

Author: If the plot is more reasonable and the polish is better, more people will like your work. The purpose of writing a book is to show it to everyone. Of course it would be better if more people like it. It may take more time to make the logic clearer, but the quality of the work will go up. Your book will be better. Of course it is easy to be simple and crude. The protagonist does things too recklessly and does not consider the follow-up issues. If anyone looks back and thinks about it, he will find something strange about him. People seek advantages and avoid disadvantages. It is even more impossible for a soldier to be so stupid, unless your idea is to directly connect with the state machinery and actively expose yourself. Of course, if you just want to write cool articles for beginners, just pretend you haven't seen what I wrote.

I remember that the author said that he would finish it privately, but I have never been able to find it. Can you provide it?