Crafting Divine Weapons

You are so talented when you use a prose style to write stories about tough guys.

After reading the first two chapters, I had two impressions. In describing the background of the story, the author spares no effort in writing. The hunger and madness of the refugees, and even the scenery, are like scrambled eggs with leeks and dough in the eyes of people. In short, if you are hungry, you can survive, even if you eat dead people. Therefore, in this context, what will happen, even the robbery can be understood and forgiven. Such a helpless and sighing background of the times. Then, the army came, and the dialogue between the army generals and soldiers, "reporting", "telling",... Short sentences, not only express the urgency of the military situation, but also the tacit understanding among the army, and let the readers enter a harsh situation. In this case, there is no need to have any emotions, just do things, kill what should be killed, and seize what should be taken, just like any industry that has been in it for a long time, just respond mechanically. The child Yang Gou'er has not seen much yet and dare not comment, but the way he introduced it is advisable, because children are the most sensitive and ignorant, and what they see through his eyes is the most direct and vivid. Luluo feels that this is a book that can be read. The story may not be that extraordinary, but the author treats the story like a feast, and all materials, procedures, and techniques are very particular.

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He said that when reading this book, he always looks forward to the ending. I hope the author can reveal a little bit about it. Thank you~

Sometimes, humor does not need to be deliberately written, but put into details, which makes it more contagious.

The subject matter is novel, the writing is excellent, and the story is compact. It has the potential to become a god, but be careful not to overdo it.

In fact, no matter what kind of expression, as long as the author writes with his own heart, the pulse of his soul will beat. Everyone's experience, background and personality will be different, so when reading the work, the author really needs the understanding of others ^_^ Friends, come on! I will always pay attention to your work:) Support it by voting, come on!!!

It's just 8 votes. I'm just doing an activity, but I can't see the bounties for sincere votes. Replies like that are just for convenience, and I'm also learning from others. You authors post a lot of bounties, but you only reply without voting. There are also sincere votes without rewards. Many people just leave their votes in the account, and some authors post a lot of bounties. . I was very disappointed when I saw that there weren't many recommendations. In fact, if you saw them complaining about me in their replies, why would I go out of my way to vote? It's just 8 votes. I'll just give you my reward support.

The writing is beautiful, the momentum is magnificent, the plot is twists and turns, and there are many clever tricks, showing the profound connotation.

Although the novel only has tens of thousands of words, it can be seen that it is a very powerful novel.