The Eternal Divine Kingdom

The book is a good one, and I'm not a novice, but I gave up when I got into Gryffindor. Why would anyone like Gryffindor? I hate naughty kids the most.

The idea is quite good, but you failed to write it well. There is no main line, the details are vague, and the layout is too big. The problem is that you can't handle the details even if you only write about them. I hope you can continue to work hard.

The author's writing of Harry Potter in American comics is a real failure. In an American comic that is full of perverts and is not as popular as a star, what can HP's system do? What's the use besides water word count? The HP system is closer to that of a bloodline wizard. The prerequisite for learning magic is to awaken magic (those who cannot awaken are called Muggles) and be able to use it (those who cannot use it are called squibs). Releasing magic is just like a joke. There is no need to understand the principles, and there is no arrangement of runes, magic circles, etc. Magic can be released as long as the pronunciation and movements are accurate. There is no meditation method for magic power, which increases directly with age. It's better to go to Kama Taj to learn magic from Ancient One. At least he can extract magic power from different latitudes to match the protagonist's kingdom without having to borrow or steal the power of those dimensional demons. Writing HP, the protagonist has been developed for so long and is still a weakling. He can't even protect the people around him. Even with a powerful plug-in like Kingdom of God, he can develop like this. This book is indeed not a show of pretending to be slapped in the face, but a story of the protagonist being pretended to be slapped in the face.

Is this Kingdom of God a combination of farm and ranch? The protagonist has inherited the legacy of a god. If he wants to learn extraordinary abilities, he still needs to go to Hogwarts??? Moreover, HP's wizards are really weak in terms of combat power. There is no denying that some magics are very good, but other systems are not without them...

The first few chapters feel like the Middle Ages, but then a TV suddenly appears, and the picture is very contradictory.

Due to the limited vision and mentality of the pattern, God is put into the dust, wishful thinking, and the human heart is unclear and does not know. It is written with the innocence and innocence of children.

After reading the free chapter, I still don't know what the protagonist wants to do.

It was really boring to watch. There was no main plot, and I just saw the protagonist wandering around without any purpose.

Disgusting

This book is a complete abuse of the master. First, they talk about how powerful the Kingdom of God is, how good the protagonist is in boxing, and how powerful the protagonist's technology is, and then a random soldier comes and presses the protagonist to the ground and rubs him.