The Swordsman from Flower-Fruit Mountain

I have read less than ten chapters. Not to mention the writing style, I really can't stand the bugs in it. First of all, there are common sense errors. The author happened to write Tiangang 36 and Disha 72 backwards, writing Tiangang 72 and Disha 36. There are also Huaguo Mountain in Dongsheng Shenzhou and Fangcun Mountain in Xiniuhezhou. How long did it take Sun Wukong to get there? The main character arrived in just three days, and that's all I've seen. I really can't stand the rest of it.

Hey guys, I'm back, uh... You won't beat me to death, will you?

Some of the dialogue is nonsense! I thought my writing was very literary, but in fact it was just pretentious and failed.

[Fn=4_2]In order to motivate myself and stop being lazy, I specially ask the adults to supervise me! Well... The update plan is as follows: Weekly recommendation is 200; reward is 3000. If you meet one of the above requirements, add one more. Double it, add more, and so on! 🥺 [fn=5_15]

The plainness of the story shows the hardships of successful efforts. A small character gradually moves from an aimless life to his own life goal. The process is always more important than the result, we appreciate the process

Such a wonderful novel, I read the latest chapter in one go. I hope the author will update it more quickly. Come on!

This book would have become popular if it had less of a gory attitude at the beginning. Keep up the good work and keep an eye on you.