Return to the Tang Dynasty and Become a Magic Stick

Come on! Lao Zhu. I've been watching you in the group.

The subject matter is quite good, but it's a pity that it's all obscene nonsense. When reading a novel, it depends on your obscenity, or the obscenity of Henan people. I'm convinced.

The book has big holes, especially the latest one! The protagonist meets Sun Simiao and talks about his life, which seems to be unpredictable, but is actually ridiculous and can be easily exposed by ordinary people. The reason is that the protagonist said that Sun Simiao will also be famous in the heaven in the future, but Sun Simiao has not passed away at this time, how can things happen in the future? The protagonist is a time traveler, but others don't know it. People think you are a god who has descended to earth now, but you are commenting from the perspective of future generations. It is still reasonable to use the book of life and death or fate to explain. Qin Qiong also has the same problem. The best explanation is that he is the reincarnation of the heavenly door god. How can the story of Journey to the West be told at random? The parties involved are all alive. Yuan Tiangang is willing to cooperate with you to retaliate, but is not willing to expose you every minute!

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"Uh, uh, uh," comes out in a funny and stupid manner when you open your mouth. The magician should at least pretend to be a master. If you had a title about returning to the Tang Dynasty and becoming a douche, I would be interested in reading it.

After reading a few chapters, it seems that the story is light-hearted and humorous, but under the author's hands, the protagonist always oscillates between being funny and being a stickman, with the more funny characters being more funny, and the stickman being more airy, and even if he is not aloof, at least he should be more generous. In addition, the work seems to have a bit of the daily style of a light novel. With this relaxed writing style, it is recommended that the author make the characters simpler. Good people are good people and bad people are bad people. Don't take the insidious and cunning path of rigorous historical novels. As a person who is considered to be an immortal, he doesn't open the middle door when he comes to the door, and lets a senior old man greet him from the side door. Why? And what kind of God is that Xiaoxue who is so funny but doesn't feel cute? Spend two chapters just writing about her? Forgive me for not reading the rest. Another piece of writing advice is, don't write the protagonist's inner activities in double quotation marks. It's very easy to get confused with what he said. Why not state it directly? From being recognized as a god through time travel, to being invited to Chang'an City, I am full of hope to see the protagonist struggling to survive in a state of anxiety. In front of others, he is a star king in the sky, and behind others, he is exhausted. It would be interesting to write about this kind of pretending to be B in front of others, and struggling behind others. But the actions and thoughts of the author's protagonist are too funny. "" Must have been a big killer in ancient times. Isn't it a bit too hasty to throw it out so easily? PS: I'm not here to cause trouble, I'm just expressing my humble opinion on the current chapters, and the author will scold me. I hope you can master the humor and write better as you write.