Portable Redemption Space

Even if you only vote for Lao Mo once in your life, Lao Mo will remember you because it was your vote that allowed Lao Mo to persevere.

The plot written by the author develops too fast. The rookie has not yet succeeded in training, but there is an abyss when he comes up. And this alien world is so dangerous. If you have some points in the early stage, you will give them away. If you don't strengthen your own strength, you will die. You said it is difficult to earn points in the alien world. What are you doing? The author has a system.

I sincerely ask for advice on why so many people read such a big book. How can I modify the book so that more people like it?

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😃 It has been so long since I last talked about how magic can build a foundation, and finally it has been established again.

After reading the first three chapters, I found three problems. I boldly state that I don't want to criticize them! Please include more. 1. Way of traveling I feel that there is no good explanation to explain the reasons, so for the plot after time travel, the link is not so smooth, and the following reading is a bit inconsistent. 2. Open gold finger, this gold finger is not that gold finger This cheat is that the protagonist comes with an alien language translation after time travel. This is a drawback. I read it twice and didn't see it. I don't know if there is any explanation. I will look up it later. 3. After the time travel, the introduction of the background was not introduced in time, so it was stepped up. The above are some personal opinions, please don't criticize if you don't like them, I'm sorry. (Gucheng Cat) stay😁

I hope it won't be zero subscription! [Fn=2_7]

Tell me which brother voted, so that Lao Mo will have some idea.