The First Immortal of the Southern Song Dynasty

I have been chasing books for 15 years, but after four years of putting them on the bookshelf, the author disappeared without a trace.

It's hard for the author to come up with such a good plot and work so hard to update the article every day. I sincerely thank the author!

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I have to say that the writing is wonderful, the plot is compact, and the overall feeling is strong. I like this style of story, and of course I hope the author can be more proficient in language. The author's copy has roughly introduced the direction of the story. I have read a lot of rebirth articles, but I was attracted to it without reading the copy. I really want to know how the author plans to narrate such a story, and whether the plot is exciting. At the beginning of the article, the protagonist is a little depressed because the girl he likes does not like him, and then he chats with a man named Uncle Zhou in the article, and by the way, he talks about his career. Then this is like an excellent foreshadowing. The protagonist is also ill-fated during the Southern Song Dynasty. The period when the protagonist lived was not very wealthy and developed. It seemed that there was still famine. The protagonist followed a Taoist priest into a Taoist temple, and then asked the Taoist priest to accept a disciple, thus starting the prologue of how he produced in this era. What can I say about the plot development? It's a bit hollow and a bit boring. A lengthy introduction is sometimes a form of torture for readers. Of course, good writing is not achieved overnight. This article may have felt a little boring in the early stages. I hope the author can pay more attention to this. Overall, it is good, very coherent, and the connection is natural. This is probably also due to the author's good writing style. The plot seems to be the author's weakness, but the writing style is pretty good. There are even wonderful articles everywhere, but this work also has its own brilliance. The author's writing style is like gentle water, slowly connecting the whole story together, the camera slowly zooms in, and many things gradually become clear. I quite like the tasks in the book created by the author. The characters are very three-dimensional. Each character seems to have a foreshadowing when they appear. Some of the introductions are detailed and some are brief. But it is also wonderful. Each character is very three-dimensional and has a lot of memorable points. When a character has a memory point, it means that we have remembered and understood the development of the story and plot, so we will watch it with this kind of curiosity and look forward to various subsequent developments. The following plot allows us to see a different male protagonist, indeed a smart man. Of course, the character of the male protagonist is not perfect, and there are many flaws. Because of his identity, or perhaps because he was reborn from the 21st century to the Southern Song Dynasty, many things are probably buried, and sometimes things are exaggerated. However, the male protagonist is also growing step by step. He is thinking outside the box, smart, knows what is right and wrong, and even knows what he wants. He can deal with everything bad or good without changing his expression. At this point, I have to say that the author was very successful in creating such a character. Especially the character of the protagonist is full and profound. People can clearly feel the emotional changes of the male protagonist. The later development is obviously more exciting than the previous one. Of course, all this is due to the author's good writing style, which outlines the characters and describes the characters' psychology very accurately. Although there are some shortcomings, overall this is indeed a good work. Every article will have flaws, which is inevitable. There are more or less problems in the articles written by the author. For example, the plot is old-fashioned, the perspective is too confusing, or the author has not written anything new about this subject. But for those of me who have watched this work, these are not problems. The author's writing is great. I hope the author can continue to bring us good works. I hope each one is better than the last. Come on, I look forward to your continued updates.

It's quite exciting. It tells the story of the rebirth of the protagonist, but the setting is also interesting. The protagonist has a solar charger and a lot of books on his mobile phone. The plot is very good.

Let me go, has it been updated? ! ? !

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Although the plot of this book is divorced from reality, it is very lively and down-to-earth.

After reading a few chapters, I feel that the development of the plot is a little slow in the past, but this is not a big problem. A good story is really good. Even if there are a few typos, it doesn't matter. So, the author, just don't let the plot stall.

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There are a lot of suspenses set up in the front. When the author reveals them one by one later, it will be very exciting. I am looking forward to it.

I must say that this novel is a conscientious work, and it can be seen that the author put a lot of thought into it.

The writing is beautiful, the momentum is magnificent, the plot is twists and turns, and there are many clever tricks, showing the profound connotation.

Just reading the introduction, I feel that this is a quite complicated novel. I am looking forward to how the author will construct the plot. I will collect it!

The large brush strokes are concise and clean, and look comfortable and smooth. It often only takes a few strokes to outline a realistic picture like ink.

I have read countless books. I have been reading novels for more than ten years since Qidian. Com was established. I have been reading here since Qidian. Com was established. I have read a lot of good books, but there are only a hundred or so novels that can be ranked in my mind. This novel is definitely among the hundreds of novels. It is a great blessing in life to encounter so many good books. I hope the author can work hard! Finally, let me tell you something that readers often say, please update me quickly, update, update again! ! !

Reading the copy, I feel that it is a very interesting story. The protagonist was a librarian during his lifetime. Later, he was a little sad because the girl he liked did not like him. He had dinner and chatted with his uncle Zhou, and then talked about his career and high-tech development. The protagonist has millions of books stored in his mobile phone. It is like the author is explaining the background and the past. Probably because of the protagonist's out-of-the-box thinking or the protagonist's setting, this man named Uncle Zhou gave him a solar charger, which is meaningful. Then, the author was reborn in the Southern Song Dynasty, and by chance, this charger brought him a lot of help. The foreshadowing here was cleverly laid, so a series of things that happened to the protagonist later are quite explainable. The protagonist shines in this dynasty with his own innate conditions. Of course, the early stage is not that easy, and this is understandable. Such a story is not simple at all. When you write it, you may think that such a plot and such a story are nothing, but when you really look into it, you will find that this story is actually quite innovative. If you read the protagonist's character carefully, you will find that there are subtle changes, both in the early and late stages. The author handles these changes very well, and to a certain extent, it seems that the protagonist is becoming more and more full-bodied. There may be many stories with similar themes, and it is also a coincidence that I came across this article by the author by chance. I did not read it carefully at the beginning, but I did read it as the plot developed later. I also hope that it will become more and more exciting and more and more people will like it. After all, this article is still worth reading in general.