The Ultimate Dandy Master

Who gave you the courage, Ruby Lin? Nine years of compulsory education, RuHe Xiu!

How poisonous is he? When I was in the golden elixir stage, I had to move goods at the Immortal Terminal for 300 yuan a day. How could I practice 30,000 elixirs and not get it? Do you really want worldly money in your eyes? Even more so from behind. . . All comers are welcome, and a character is created to be able to poison a group of people to death. 88 (To Chapter 15

This is the most trashy cultivator in the Qi refining period in urban immortality novels I've read 😫😫

From the south to the north, from the four poles, there are more than two thousand chapters of water.

, I think you should go to a female channel, the novel is written like a soap opera. .

I thought it was a good book at first, but after reading more than 200 pictures, I couldn't stand it until Ye Qingyun died, because it is impossible for a character like the protagonist to survive to the golden elixir stage in the world of cultivation. Who would always allow enemies to stab you in the back?

We are all scholars, how can we say we are robbers? It's a reference, it's a reference, it's a reference. Only after you have to say it three times can you know? It's just that the plots are a bit similar, so don't make a fuss.

It's understandable that authors need to write code to make a living! But please understand one thing, if the content cannot be reflected? As soon as a character or thing is mentioned, explain it in the entire article or in several consecutive articles! Nonsense! How many people will read it?

With endless pretense and endless slaps in the face, you can write more than a thousand chapters, I admire you!

3 Votes have been registered for "The Great Refiner"

It's so boring. There's been a book shortage recently. Is this book good?

This book is so interesting, I read it all day. But why is the popularity of such a good book so low?

He is always pretending to be cool and slaps his face, and he always messes with the protagonist who is dressed in ordinary clothes.

The writing is quite good. I hate the Madonna novel the most. The protagonist kills the cripples decisively without leaving any marks

The wonderful "Cultivation~Character Description" paragraph becomes more simplified and "random" the more you write it.

This book is finally finished. Although I only read the urban chapter and couldn't read it anymore, I still want to say, This novel has several shortcomings that make people unable to look directly at it. 1. The whole novel is too long-winded, with too much nonsense. One thing is repeated over and over again, and it is described over and over again. In fact, one sentence can fill a chapter in the end. If you are trying to make money, you must have someone read it first. The biggest failure. 2. The protagonist, Holy Mother Bitch, since you wrote according to the outline of Goose is Lao Wu, why are you not as decisive as Lao Wu in killing? Maybe you feel that this is enough, but you forget that this is a novel, and novels are things that cannot be realized in reality. If you can still maintain a pretentious attitude when people are going to kill your whole family, it can only mean that you are also a loser in reality. The second failure. 3. The characters in the story are confusing. This novel actually forgot the heroine or mixed it up. I was really convinced. The first heroine was written to be gone, or turned into another woman. I didn't understand. When I looked carefully, I really didn't understand why the heroine was gone. What is this? The third failure. There are too many 456789, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too much, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too many, too pretentious, too illogical, and too lazy to type. This novel can only be said to be boring.

Unscientific? After writing so much, there are so few comments?