The World's First Village

Take a look and tell me what you think! Although it's several years late! First: The biggest bug in this book is the heroine. It is said at the beginning that this girl is only 18 years old. She looks like a 15-16 year old with a baby face. I just want to ask the protagonist how you did it. If you are 18 years old, I don't say that I have graduated from high school. She can't be more than a freshman, right? The girl's family conditions did not allow her to go to school. This setting is really amazing! It is even more ridiculous that an 18-year-old can design a building complex. In the end, he can manage a tourism company. This is even more ridiculous. An 18-year-old who is not a genius can actually be so defiant. This is too much to write. It is difficult for this book not to be a hit! Second: The layout of the whole book is too small, and there are too few descriptions of the village. It can be written that there is a small lake next to the village, a big lake in the mountains, next to the big lake is hundreds of thousands of acres of plains, and on the back is the virgin forest. In this way, I can write a lot later. Small lakes can be used to raise fish and can be developed and utilized. The big lake can be the living area of ​​those birds, and the plains can be developed into pastures. Hundreds of thousands of acres. In that pasture, you can write more about prairie wolves and prairie wild horses. There are so many things to write about and they are more exciting. Third: The protagonist's golden finger is too weak. You might as well have a legacy in a space. What dream system you want to compile yourself, there is no place to compile it. With a legacy, you can write more adventures. Just go to a primitive forest and you can write a lot of wonderful things. Fourth: Why do you write about so many celebrities when you have nothing to do? Are you having an affair with the protagonist and are you not staying? I am sure that many people will be disgusted when they see this. Here comes Huang Xiaoming, here comes Mr. Bei. Writing these things is really disgusting. The animals in this book are very good and can be written about a lot. I remember there was a farming novel where the animals were very unnatural. Animals have become strange beasts in nature, and the protagonist has to conquer them. Every time there is an animal that defies nature, it is a story. Of course, you can also cultivate it yourself! Fifth: Lack of fantasy. Having a heaven-defying system is a kind of fantasy. The author just broke away from this. The whole book I read was lifeless, home appliance fantasy, add some Feng Shui, add some ambiguity, maybe this book will get better results I won't go into details. It's just that I haven't found any better farming articles recently, which is a bit annoying!

Is your mother Bo Is Sister Xiong Xiuzhen not finished updating yet? Is there a new book here?

There are still black and white TVs, have I returned to the 1990s?

Was the first one so wrong? ? ? Why are names always messed up?

I hope that real people will appear in the book, like the celebrities mentioned in the introduction, and they will be filmed on location and so on. . Collect and fatten...

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