Super Body Leads the Era

The protagonist has lived for nine lives, with extraordinary achievements in each life. In the tenth life, he is a god-level genius with 40% of his brain developed. But why is it that the protagonist is shocked when he meets every celebrity? The thick slut temperament and extremely poor psychological quality are really not worthy of the protagonist's legendary experience and super abilities, and it feels completely inconsistent! ! ! It is more reasonable for the author to change the protagonist's birth to an ordinary otaku who has never seen much of the world! ! ! ! !

Don't write too fast. It's too late to put the brakes on it. The world that was originally a good place had to study the T virus and eventually turned into a zombie world. Write about the road to fame and the city well. If you want to add werewolves, vampires and the like, that's fine. After all, it would be quite fun to treat it as a Marvel world, but what the hell are you going to do? Zombies are the rhythm of doing big things.

First of all, I want to apologize to everyone, because what I say next may not be pleasant to listen to. Recognizing a relative will cause a series of problems, the most important of which is the paradox of time and space. Even the same world will change. Besides, if the world becomes a magically modified version, can it still be the original world? ! At least there is no current protagonist! Neither his biological parents are married, and the protagonist is anxious to worry about it. What if something went wrong a long time ago because of the butterfly effect? What should I do if there is no protagonist in this time and space, or the child is still there but not me? What should I do if my parents don't get married? The protagonist travels back in time and space and changes the world. This world is also a magically modified version, and when he was born this time, there must not have been the current protagonist, let alone these factors that affect the world! Have you heard about the time-travel paradox? Even if they recognize relatives, they should be children of the corresponding age. Isn't this the same as traveling back in time and recognizing family members at that time? Even if they recognize each other, according to the ideas of the Chinese people at that time, with the mentality of the philistine and the attitude towards women, it is not impossible to show off, because of traditional concepts such as the importance of passing on the family line, the three obediences and the four virtues, forcing the protagonist to become a traditional lady and marry! Even if the biological parents are liberal, what about the elderly at home? What should you do if you have a protagonist and a daughter who is always embarrassed? Also, according to the previous profile, I had various toothaches. Why do I feel so awkward? ! Especially the third one... An absolute ** rich mentality!

The protagonist's mental strength is so powerful that it suppresses his own IQ. . .

After reading it, I found it really unfinished. The story was obviously getting more and more exciting, but it suddenly ended along with the plot. The same goes for "The Goddess Shines on America". When the plot is in full swing, it suddenly looks into the future and ends... Ah, "Blooming America", after all, the millions of words in "Blooming America" ​​are considered as extras... These books are really not fun to read! ! !

I have wanted to say it for a long time. The meaning of sneer is: to laugh with ridicule or contempt. I think you used the wrong words in several places, especially when writing about Sissi, you always use sneer, which is very awkward to read. 😥

Well, it's not a big deal. I saw the word feck used in several places in the article. Based on the context, I automatically made up the word ****🤓. I wonder if the author wanted to use the word ****? 😏

I see the author sucks! It's a pity. I found this book when I was in a book shortage. It looked pretty good, but the plot was a bit too big! No readers criticized the author for his bad work! No one came to scold the author, so we can understand why the author failed!

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Avril Lavigne? Didn't watch it

Good book, but the grades are a bit poor

"Skynet Terminator in Another World" sweeps the charts and leaves traces for later reading

I have read the first thirty chapters so far, and my preliminary evaluation is that the positive description of the protagonist is quite good, which can be said to be a good preview. However, among the characters, such as "Sissi", I failed to understand the purpose of portraying this character. I directly reduced my intelligence and struck in front of her. I feel that the setting is a bit broken, and the plot description also feels a bit stiff at this point. Maybe it is because I want to write an emotional drama? However, many times, poor portrayal can actually turn people off. There are some unreasonable places, but they are all tolerable, except for a few. Generally speaking, the focus is a bit off, and the writing style should be strengthened. There are some difficult to describe things that are best skipped.

There are many plot lines and they are not handled well and it is very confusing. The background setting is also the same, Jisuke.

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