Historical World Looters

Too many descriptions! Too many descriptions! Too many descriptions! Because there are too many, I have to say it three times. Writing a book still requires some skills. It doesn't mean that you just write out everything on your mind without any organization. The things in the description should be revealed sideways through character dialogue, character actions, etc. To advance the plot, rather than written directly. In addition, the psychological activities of the characters should be clearly specified, and should not be written out in a blur. Of course, the author knows who is thinking, but the reader is not so clear. Writing it out will make people feel confused and affect reading fluency. In addition, don't mess around with the author in the text. What readers are reading is the story, not the author's comments. This will take people out of the substitution situation and affect the sense of substitution. In addition, there is a small historical flaw: before the Yuan Dynasty, adults could not use it casually. There are only two situations where it can be used: addressing parents, elders, and high-ranking officials such as the Three Gongs and Nine Qings (the Hu people call all powerful people adults, which is a different matter). Therefore, under normal circumstances, calling someone "sir" before Yuan Ming means that you recognize him as your father. This is a great shame, and no one with any self-respect would do it. A typical example is the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, which was written at the turn of the Yuan and Ming Dynasties. The title "adult" appears only in one place in the book: when Diao Chan decided to use a honey trap and was talking to Wang Yun in the back garden. But at that time, Wang Yun had already accepted her as an adopted daughter, and it was in line with etiquette to call her "sir". One of the most poisonous things about history books is that they are full of mouths. Generally speaking, when you see the word "adult" and the dynasty is before the Yuan and Ming Dynasties, you will immediately abandon the book. This book depends on the author's opinion, otherwise I won't be able to read it.

Personally, I feel that the biggest problem is that the plot is fragmented, with small chapters of thousands of words jumping here and there. As a result, the main line is unclear and the story is confusing. In addition, the pig's feet can jump around at will, and fast forwarding will reduce the tension of the plot and lack of suspense. In short, multi-thread parallelism can still tell a good story. Not just anyone can play it. If you are not skilled enough, you need to be self-aware.

Don't let others say that you rely on the plot, and then your flow will speed up... The opinions of book reviews are not that important. Just write it according to your own ideas. If you think the plot is slow, you can add more...

In the Song Dynasty, the Yang family general was a tragedy, no matter whether it was a man or a woman, it would be interesting to change it.

Prajna, Mei Changsu, Fei Liu, and after a search on Baidu, I finally found out why it felt wrong... In this order, how should we understand the mood of the protagonist when he speaks?

The protagonist's luck is bland, and because of this he is looked down upon by others. Therefore, I don't want the protagonist to improve his so-called luck in order to cater to others and the world. A person's true strength lies in his inner ability, not his superficial luck. If it is pale, it will always be pale. Who says you can't do great things if you have little luck? As a protagonist, you have to break the rules and eventually be strong enough to make rules. Instead of changing yourself into what others say, you should not become what others say. The protagonist wants to change the world even if his luck is always pale. This is the powerful protagonist I want to see. Or another way, the protagonist's luck color is still improved, but it is not an inexplicable improvement (absorbing other people's luck or something), but the protagonist's own inner ability becomes stronger, and then the improvement is shown through the change of luck color. This is also acceptable.

Although I don't want to rush the plot, since it is history~ The Three Kingdoms should not take up too much space. After all, if you write too much, it will directly become the subject of the Three Kingdoms~ Looking forward to other worlds!

History is already a niche, but you, the author, are in the wrong place. Your grades will be huge. At least it will be better if you switch to the science fiction category. A book has a chance to change categories. You can consider switching to science fiction. At best, switching to urban cities is better than staying in the history category.

Tell the truth Titled by the protagonist's title as King Zhao At least one state Liu Biao from Jingzhou, Liu Yao from Yangzhou, Liu Yan from Youzhou, Liu Yan from Yizhou, Liu Zhang and their sons This shows that the Han clan clan still had some strength at that time. It's impossible for the protagonist to be assigned to a match, and he usually only gets one county.

You have obtained the title of King of Zhao, you are famous all over the world, and you have recruited so many famous people, yet you actually go to kill Liu Bei, and you are still afraid of Cao Cao. *I'm so drunk. Cao Cao hasn't changed his mind this time, okay? Cao Cao changed his mind later, when he coerced the emperor and ordered the princes to do so, okay? Now that Cao Cao has no troops, he would rather be a loyal marquis, okay? As for Liu Bei, it will be the same now. He will change later when he has the strength. As long as the protagonist gains momentum and rolls into an army, who can be the leader? In front of Cao Cao and the others, who were not even prosperous, they knelt down in a matter of minutes. Moreover, the protagonist is still King Zhao, and you are the royal family. At that time, the royal family still had some final dignity. I feel like the author wrote this just for the sake of word count. If we analyze it carefully, Liu Bei, Cao Cao and the others would not be able to get up at all. Reunification will take at most 5 years, hateful word count party