Destiny Game: Sheng Hao

It must be admitted that the author put his heart into the concept of this book. From the preface, real-life background, game talent testing sessions, and game details, all have been carefully thought out. The realistic plot settings partially coincide with the future world I have imagined. With the concept and plot of this book, it has great advantages over most current novels in the game genre. It should have been popular for a while, and it should have accumulated a lot of loyal readers. But now it's very bad. To be honest, this book hardly attracts readers' interest. Usually the first thing that attracts readers to a book is the title. Not everyone can be on the recommendation column. A good title can attract many readers' clicks for you. Next is the introduction, cover, book review, and chapter titles. Well, in my opinion, the author's work in these aspects is not very to my liking. The author of the first and second volumes worked hard, and I guess he may have been imagining them for a long time. I think the entire real-world background and gaming talent test are more realistic, and are indeed possible for future development. Unlike many novels which are just nonsense at first glance. However, the author is not famous yet, and the various indicators are not enough to attract readers. If the beginning is so detailed and light, how many readers will the eunuch lose? Yes, I thought the beginning was too "light". The first volume is difficult to catch the reader's attention, but it has 17 chapters. A full 38 chapters in the first two volumes of a game novel are not included in the game, which will definitely lose some impatient readers. I gradually got into the mood after reading the first volume, and it was only after reading the second volume that I became more eye-catching. By the way, the writing style of the first volume feels quite different from the later parts, and it doesn't seem like it was written in the same period. The whole article is too detailed. I personally think that the first two volumes can be condensed. It should be detailed later. There are more than 50 chapters written in a copy of Spider Cave, which is too detailed. I originally wanted to make some suggestions, such as throwing the first volume into a side story, or cutting out some parts and interspersing some eye-catching plots. But thinking about it, I'm just talking on paper, so I'd better not mislead others. I hope the author can cheer up.

Reading progress Chapter 97, there is a problem. For online game novels, the progress you write is too slow, and the NPC strength jump in the early stage is too large.

The writing is quite good and the various settings are quite reasonable.

The protagonist is always the second child. . . And he is already 26 years old'. . . I have no interest in reading any more. . .

Updates will be slow recently, every two days, sorry!

In the early stage, too much writing was spent on describing the psychological changes of the protagonist, and it was actually placed in the first few pictures. It was a big failure.

Gulu gulu gulu...

Resurrection Resurrection_(:з∠)_

I'm so confused, the rumor is too...

It's 2021, the author can consider using this background to reopen a new book

Alas, the last good online game

Oh, it's been a while since I bubbled out.

Doesn't the author plan to find someone to recommend it?

It's 2023. I was lying in bed and suddenly thought of this book. I came here to take a souvenir.

Let me change it. Isn't this chapter free?

I would like to ask the author if he will write a new book?

.. This is the end of the book..

It's over. Do you have any plans to write a new book?

Is it also updated every two days? 0 0

I really think this book is well written, and the various settings are very reasonable. It's not like other novels that are just short stories, with a lot of logic that doesn't make sense, and it feels so awkward.