Becoming a Saint on the God List

What the hell are you writing? An emperor is someone who immediately becomes a disciple of anyone he meets. He doesn't have the aura of an emperor and is not true at all. This is bullshit.

If nothing else, I just read Chapter 2. Just say, how dare a slave see his master in a daze and call him stupid? This is not possible even in a landlord's house in a rural town, let alone the emperor, His Majesty! ! ! !

What we are looking at here is that King Zhou is the emperor, and how did you write the protagonist? Do you want the protagonist to be involved in the battle between the two armies? Seeing a cultivator show off to his grandson. The main plot has not been seen until now. What the protagonist does all day long makes me laugh. What is the main plot of your book? It's random. Oops, for a while, nothing about the identity and temperament of the protagonist was written. This is a world with no level of cultivators. The protagonist must be practicing the emperor type. There is no need for other messy skills. As mentioned earlier, you made firearms that can fight against immortals? Don't be ridiculous, it's really boring. There is no description of the powerful royal temperament of the immortal and the appearance of the celebrities of those eras. What route will the protagonist take in the future, the fate of the emperor? Or else, don't let him appear in those unnecessary plots. It's boring to read. That's all. If you delete it, I'm right.

Shang, who belongs to the Jiejiao force in terms of the list of gods, actually thought of worshiping Taiyi as his teacher and talent.

I'm not a troll either, maybe the author thinks it's okay. I am not a data emperor, but this book has too many loopholes.

Read a few chapters. First, it feels like a retelling of "I'm the Proud King of Zhou". But the writing is a little worse. Second, what is the main line? This point is not explained clearly. Reading the title of the book means you need to become a saint. But there's not enough time. It depends on how the author handles it. Three, mentality! There is a big problem with the protagonist's mentality. When you meet a dog-legger, you pretend to be a dog; when you meet someone from the Three Religions, you become a dog. Encountered a war. What are you doing as a prince? If you go to kill the enemy, what are the people under your command doing? Fourth, the progress of the article is not well controlled. The pace is not fast enough. Fifth, the writing is not rigorous enough. . . That's all for now. I hope the author can pay attention to the following writing.

Perhaps the author is not satisfied with some aspects. Personally, I think it is not easy to write such a work. Subject matter such as Conferring Gods is inherently difficult. I saw that some book friends in the book review section have strong opinions about the author, but that's your attitude. In fact, in an era when online works are proliferating, you don't have to read them. If you have time to criticize others, you might as well use the time to write a work. Maybe you will become a god. Support the author~!

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I've been busy editing articles these days, so I'm late~(@^_^@)~

Seeing this way of writing Tiangang Disha, I instantly lost interest. It looks like a lot, but the bells and whistles are of no use. Much worse than Sun Wukong's 72

The writing is so messy that a concubine and a wild man dared to assassinate the prince Taixin. Is it because Tai Xin will die a violent death before he becomes emperor?

It feels like your start is impossible to succeed, because the so-called god-making is just because the heaven is short of manpower, and no immortal is willing to work, so you can only find a reason to fight, so it is not that King Zhou was originally a faint king, but he couldn't fight without fainting. In other words, this is determined by the way of heaven. There are saints, Daluo, golden immortals, heavenly immortals, and earthly immortals. Why can you resist? If you have cultivation, the saint will know it without pinching your fingers.

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