Born on Duty in Heaven

The protagonist is a bitch. If you write it like this, I will give up this book in an instant.

That Ye Yiliang cheated on her, betrayed the protagonist, and begged another man to have sex just to let his younger brother study. It was a few days before the protagonist got his diploma. I don't know how many times he was played by that man. No matter how the author tried to clean it up, I still felt that this was a shabby shoe. This is not a rant, but just saying what I think. I can't afford to hurt others with my brain! ! !

I just read the first 10 chapters. In the sixth chapter, the protagonist rescued a hostage in full view of the police and was shot in the back. The police came and asked him to go to the hospital. A week later, the police found the protagonist and commended him, including the hostage's father. No one mentioned the protagonist's injury. A normal person would definitely have to ask. How are your injuries? Especially the police. They are very sensitive to gunshot wounds. It only took 7 days for the shoulder blade to be injured and you can move freely. Let's do a little more investigation. Well, there is no medical record of the protagonist in the past 7 days. How did he recover? The author is deliberately lowering the police's IQ.

I know that these kind of urban types usually just get some super powers, adventures, and Bai Fumei come out to throw themselves into their arms. Can they have some success and pursuit? Don't develop development first? ?

First, the protagonist's family had difficulties and borrowed money from relatives. They even refused to pay tens of thousands of yuan even if they borrowed money. This should be a huge favor. Later, when the protagonist's father had an accident and even the doctor said he couldn't survive it, they didn't force him to pay back the money. They just asked him to sign a certificate to prevent his money from being wasted. Is there a problem with this? Can this be the reason for the protagonist to fight regardless of family ties? People's money is not brought by strong winds. If you have your own position, can't others have other people's positions? Second, the girlfriend made an appointment with a friend and had dinner with the protagonist for the first time. Shouldn't you dress up? Even if you encounter a car accident and save someone, can't you wear decent clothes? Don't talk about whether you are used to it or not. This is the most basic respect for your girlfriend and yourself. Why do others see you through your mediocre appearance and penetrate into your soul when they first see you? Besides, when you rescue someone, you won't make a phone call? No matter how nervous you are, don't you know to call and say something on the way to take a bath and buy clothes after saving someone? You've been talking about how angry you are that your girlfriend doubts you. Don't you know that you have done things that make others doubt you? She still had the nerve to say that her friend was the one who provoked her... To put it another way, from my friend's point of view, seeing that she had found such an unreliable boyfriend, I had to find a way to provoke her. Why do others have to spoil you? Moreover, if a normal person really didn't contact me in advance, they wouldn't explain it when they arrived, and would just keep apologizing. Go and explain the whole story to your girlfriend in private, otherwise no one will believe you!

It's just that sometimes the paragraphs seem a bit abrupt, and the story doesn't feel very smooth! There is nothing else to choose from! Come on [fn=3_4][fn=3_4][fn=3_4]

It's just one word, how many times do you want me to say it?

Are you really serious about updating so few words in one day?

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Speaking of which, does this book have a female protagonist? The one written by Zhou Tingting feels so silly.

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This book is too flattering. It shouldn't have been written by a child prodigy. It's a mess.

It turns out I didn't clear it up == I saw it wrong

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Chapter 40 is really similar to "Future Eyes". They are the same children, but the female bather is replaced by a male one.

I've read both of your books and they both smell like that, I can't put my finger on it.

It is used as a land temple to celebrate and build a land temple. It's basically the same thing as retracing the soul's wish, collecting a black cat, etc. I saw this and hereby asked.

I saw the five VIP chapters, why can't I subscribe?

You should be more ruthless towards your enemies. Why are you so lenient when others come knocking on your door? The protagonist should not join a national organization. It would be boring if he was assigned to fight for this organization in the future. I still like the strongest abandoned young man. When an official tried to win over him, Ye Mo said coldly, "Go away, put away your tricks."