Peerless Divine Doctor: The Black-Bellied Young Lady

There are so many typos, there are many in each chapter. Sometimes, there can be three typos in one sentence! Everyone makes mistakes, but can the frequency not be so high? Some of the typos have the same pronunciation, so that's fine, but some of them still have to guess what they mean? It was as if I was happily marching on a beautiful mountain path, appreciating the beauty of nature. Suddenly, he fell into a pit. He got up, and before he had taken two steps, he fell into a pit again! ! ! (Black question mark face. Jpg)... Author, it is not easy for you to write an article, but we don't read it in vain. We all spent money to read it. It is a good article, but it wants to make us feel that piracy is full of mistakes... After you finish writing, can't you take some time to read it yourself?

Where is the author's peerless thief? Why can't I find it? Wow wow wow, my favorite Qi Xia 🥺

This novel is the longest novel I have ever read and I persisted in reading it to the end. I admire Ye Bei's thinking... The plot is exciting and very subtle, especially the content where the heroine criticizes people and things is very exciting to watch! Each hero is portrayed in his own way! Although some devils always say that there are many typos, as long as the plot is exciting, typos will not have any impact, hahahaha

This article is very good hahahahahahahahaha really

After reading it, the early writing is very good, especially the bond between the heroine and her friends. They support each other and make progress together. The topic of growth is always interesting, not to mention the friendship that goes through life and death together. The male protagonist... I personally didn't like him very much from the moment he appeared. Until the end, my impression of him was still flat, even worse than the little emperor Qi in the early stage. Apart from the double standards for the heroine and ignoring other people, there seems to be nothing else. The beginning still describes his bad attitude, changes in his attitude towards the heroine, and some changes in his emotions and attitude towards the heroine. Until the Tomb of the Evil Emperor, his image is completely unified. He is nothing but pampering. It may be in line with some people's appetite, but my brain was twitching when I watched it. Then the image of the heroine has always been in the middle... A cold and gentle woman, but the three-dimensional sense she gave me is not as good as her female master Xiaoya (I only remember one Ya. Female If the image of the Lord in my heart is described by color, her love and hate are so vivid and unreal, like a strong sketch, only black and white with a little gray, while her master Xiaoya is a colorful splash of ink, and his face is full of love that humans can have. She loves to drink and is a little slovenly like ordinary people, but she is an open-minded, gentle and heroic woman. What is also outstanding in this book is the appearance of the Iron Blood Queen Qu Lingyue as a little girl. The portrayal of her temperament and nymphomaniac is very profound, and her transformation after experiencing a huge blow is particularly touching. Then her little girl side is only shown in front of Jun Wuxie. Although the relationship between them has ended at the end, this is. The best ending is that she finally chooses to embrace the person who loves her most. If this article didn't have Jun Wuyao... She would really be the second heroine. The heroine's friends all had their own profound character portrayals and descriptions before the Twelve Palaces were eliminated. It can be seen that the author invested a lot of energy and hair in their image portrayal. But after their revenge, the five friends directly became Qiao Chu and others - In fact, The author became impetuous at the end of the writing, focusing only on the description of the plot and the language used by various characters to communicate with Zhou Xuan. To put it nicely, the world view is too big and he should focus on the description and omit unnecessary language. To put it badly, it means, "I'm rushing the plot, and you are all a tool for the heroine to stabilize her emotions. You are all tools for his ending. You just need to bubble up from time to time to show your existence." Although in the later stages, the author has given up on describing the characters, and even the world view The famous Evil Realm was built in a hurry. I didn't feel its brilliance and Peng Da at all. What it gave me was that the Twelve Palaces were the strongest forces in the three realms. The Evil Realm was just like a wild villa built in the middle of a small village, without courage or grandeur. , I can't feel the charm of this force at all. As the strongest in the three realms, it is still the force of the male protagonist. The author really did a poor job in summarizing it in two sentences... It would be better to focus on describing how others slander the female protagonist and focus on the environment. In short, this article describes the image of women relatively well, but the portrayal of men can be said to be a mess. There are many unfilled pitfalls (such as ring making, soul fixing methods), and the strength class is useless and very confusing. The heroine's advancement is rarely described in the middle period. It seems ruthless but affectionate, which makes many plots look like shit stuck in the anus. The male protagonist enters and forcibly kisses a minor and enters the bathroom to watch the female protagonist take a shower. It makes me a little disgusted. The male villain NPC disdains the female protagonist's little pussy, and the women are jealous of her. The main character is strong and good-looking, or the heroine is surrounded by Jun Wuyao. I endured the headache and read through the last 500 chapters quickly... I really like the settings of the Ring Spirits. The flowers like the little white lotus and the poppy are very cute, but there are really very few inks on these wood spirits. Poison Ivy was a wise man before he became Jun Wuxie's Ringwraith. After becoming a Ringwraith, he appeared in less than three episodes, and he had no lines. Only the main character Blood Velvet Flower had more appearances when he wanted to torture people, but the characterization of these later characters was really pitiful. I want to read it again later if I want to recall it, but Chapter 2000 is already the limit and there is really a bunch of answers at the end. I like the author's early descriptions, but you are really going downhill. People prefer to see things similar to them, rather than a piece of paper.

It's been 23 years, and I still can't forget your work. When will you come back?

Author, your peerless thief is nowhere to be found.

Actually, I didn't read this book at the starting point. I read this book in 2017, and I still can't forget Xiao Xie'er's character and specialness. Before I saw this book by Bei Bei, I had read a lot of books. When I opened this book for the first time, Bei Bei's words really amazed me. , I followed the new book for a few months when it was released. I found that I naturally liked Beibei's writing, but it no longer had the amazing feeling I had when I first saw it. If Beibei is in a bad mood recently, you can take a leave of absence and go out to relax. No one will blame you. Really, no matter what, anyway, Beibei, I support you❤

I read this work a long time ago. If I couldn't find a good novel, I picked it up and read it. Jueqi also read it several times. I really liked the two heroines and the characters in it. The content written by the author is also very vivid!

Has the author deleted any of his works? Today I want to look at an article you wrote before, but I can't find it. It's very sad.