Super Ghost Asylum

Author: You have written several books. I feel that my writing skills have not improved much, but have declined. This book was good at the beginning, but later on, the routines and character descriptions failed. I guess you are a bit out of ideas. After writing a book, you need to analyze the shortcomings and understand what people like to read. The author really did not do this.

Alive, incredible, I thought he was a eunuch

Don't have too many women around the hero. And don't be so flirty with other women, okay? I'll do it

I'm disgusted with these books with disgusting female characters. I felt really uncomfortable reading them. Damn it.

To be honest, the beginning of this book was okay, but the more I read, the less I wanted to read it.

Rubbish, I have never seen such a cowardly protagonist, and he is also a licker, and his writing skills are even worse!

The protagonist of this book made me want to vomit after reading it. The main character is so fucking timid.

Ma Xiaoling and Kuang Tianyou are true love, you can just watch them, and there is no missing girl, so why do you have to accept them? Sometimes witnessing a great love is more touching than tearing down a goddess.

Damn, I'm looking for a supporting role. My code name is Bingyu. You can play the male role as you please. These are the code names of my girlfriend and I! ! ! Thank you~. ~

The writing is so good. I like it very much. But the update is too slow.

Can the author update it quickly?

As mentioned, I also read your book, but when it came to Sadako, it started to get confusing. There were all kinds of information, all kinds of conjectures, all kinds of reasoning. I barely managed to get to the part about the charcoal-burning female ghost. I also watched that movie, mainly chasing Ma Xiaoling. Sincerely He said that the movie was particularly bad. You still wrote so much about that kind of movie, and you messed around a lot. You were sometimes a master and sometimes a senior brother. It felt very confusing. I didn't like that book. So, I suggest you finish that one quickly. It would be great to concentrate on writing this one. [Fn=2_3]

Everything has been good in the last few chapters, but it was Chapter 73... The male protagonist was too annoying, pretentious, and deliberately overacting, which gave people a 2=B image. Especially the later ones, there are too many inner descriptions, and some unnecessary descriptions, but they fall down. The description of the similarities between the movie versions of Xiao Zhao and Qiu Shuzhen is very good. But after that, of course, Lin Jue didn't pay much attention to this mentality. Of course, when he watched "Eternal Dragon Sword" before, I personally think that this section... Except for the skin-to-skin kiss in the middle, everything else is redundant. Too much description of the male protagonist's inner world lowers the quality of this chapter and pushes the male protagonist further into the 2=B diaosi path.

In the original plot, Zhang Wuji became the leader because he found the remains of Yang Dingtian in the secret passage, learned the Great Shift, killed Cheng Kun, and resolved the danger of the siege of Guangmingding. However, according to the development of the plot in this book, it is not his turn to be the leader. Even if he is the deputy, if his imagination is too big, he will be suspected of having a brain deficiency. . .

The protagonist is so licking, looks disgusting, and is still at the level of a novice

I have been reluctant to give up reading this book, and finally resumed updating it. Support it.

I'm busy! ! ! I have read this book🤔

Let me say it again, I don't want to see anyone else

. . . Dozens of chapters go back and forth in the city where acquaintances of the protagonist encounter ghosts. In the past, those who opposed the protagonist were villains. Asking the protagonist how his friends survived in the past, the protagonist was surrounded by ghosts except for the protagonist who was not a ghost. He also said that there are not many ghosts in the world

Chen Yiwei raped his stepmother, is he referring to Mrs. Chen? ? ?

I prefer Xiao Zhao who appeared recently, but the character description is a bit lacking. Others are very good.