Lord of the Deep

The author should try to write some smart novels. Although brainless novels are fun, they will not help you practice your writing skills. Novice writers can write novels, so you can try to write more orthodox novels with IQ!

The missing chapters are too serious, and the main character is too arrogant. I just picked them up one after another, and I was completely indifferent.

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I just want to ask if I can open a harem. If I don't open it, I won't watch it! ! !

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There are many people named Lin Fan. Today I met a man named Lin Fan who wrote five novels

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Tridacna is really not that exaggerated. There are so many in Hainan that none of them are more expensive per ton 🤫

I have been following it until now, and I have a few small suggestions. I originally wanted to hold back, but I couldn't help it. After all, it is not easy to find a book that is interesting. I hope the author will pay attention to it after seeing it and stop being so careless in the future. First, this book contains a large amount of content that appears to be copied and pasted from Baidu Encyclopedia to introduce sea creatures and certain places in reality. Although I have to write the plot when it reaches this point, can I control the quantity a little bit? Don't fill the whole paragraph with hundreds of words, which may seem like watering down. In fact, a few hundred words is enough. If there is such a large amount of popular knowledge after it is put on the shelves, the number of subscriptions will be beyond the reach of readers! Secondly, could the author please take a few minutes to check for errors in the chapter before uploading? The so-called errors refer to some grammatical errors. It does not mean that the author uses the wrong grammar, but that the author often omits something in a certain sentence. Sometimes the subject is missing, sometimes the predicate is missing, and sometimes the adjective and attributive cannot be found. I know this may be an unconscious input error by the author when coding, but if it continues like this, it will cause great reading difficulties and readers will not be able to do it! There is another point that I haven't understood until now, which is what is the current diving depth of the protagonist, and what are the diving depths of other ordinary people? I think it should be 70 to 80 meters for ordinary people and over 100 meters for the protagonist. However, why do I see sentences like "Lin Fan has dived to more than 500 meters"? What exactly is the author going to do? 😭 Finally, I want to say that it will be on the shelves soon. It is always appropriate to give an initial order. If there are improvements, full orders will also be included. [Fn=2_6]

Good fiction!

I stopped watching it at noon and I still can't watch it now. My phone is broken or something 😢

Not bad, not bad <>[url=f2226n] Ask the world, where is home? The master kills and fights for hegemony. What a shame, wasting my years. Sunset, several places in the world. The stars and rivers tremble, and the turbulent times are filled with cold smoke. Xuanming Palace, all grudges are over. The sun and the moon are cold, and the world will be in chaos. The sky is darkened, the world is destroyed and the stars are gone. Sigh for white hair, your fate is about to end. Unfortunately, it is now banned in all directions. Once again, the universe is empty. The prosperous world has returned to seclusion again. The drunken dream fairy sword leads, and the pattern is engraved on the reincarnation heart.

The update is so slow. How come there is only one chapter in one day? How many more chapters can I give [fn=2_6]

Life is very short. When you open your eyes, you are stunned and you sigh, it is a day; when you are busy every day and month, it is a year; when you snap your fingers, you meet someone, and you run around, it is a lifetime. When you are alive, you should try your best to live well, and don't make the person you live tired and miserable. Don't care about some things, don't care about some people, don't dwell on some pain. Pursue what you want, cherish what you have, find balance when your mentality is tilted; listen to music when you are depressed, a happy life means staying half awake and half drunk. Life is a journey of mountains and water, trekking through hardships; life is a cup of joy, a cup of sorrow, and a taste of sweet and sour. Every encounter is a kind of fate. To get acquainted, we must be sincere and real; to interact with each other, we must devote our whole heart and efforts; to use affection, we must have no guilt and no regrets. Everything you experience is wealth; everything you encounter is harvest. Whether you love it or hate it, it will eventually be the mark of your life and the richest story in your life.

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Personally, I prefer this type of work. Please update the author more quickly 😭

I need to fatten up your little pig and slaughter it!

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It's well written. Please update it better. I support you. Come on, author.

It's a very good book. I will keep reading it and recommend it to you! Come on!

I have read more than 50 chapters, and it is estimated that 1/3 of the text was copied from the encyclopedia introduction.

Also, do you really want to selflessly donate the national treasure? If you are so patriotic, why not send alien spacecraft to the country?