
My Model System
我的模型系统
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 336k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Superpowers
- Updated
- 10y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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142Chapters
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What the hell is Wen Yating at the end of the introduction Don't think I don't know what it is
[Comment] Actually it's okay
It's not as bad as the book reviews said, and it can even be seen that it is better than ordinary urban novels =w= First of all, the author describes the major events relatively clearly. Although most of the developments are quite quick-thinking, there is not much nonsense. It is a common truth that the protagonist does not like to talk nonsense. It's not like he has become a selfish man who will force his woman to practice and become stronger. The most important thing is! The protagonist does not preach to the little loli! The most annoying plot in urban literature is when the protagonist talks nonsense to a child, and then in the plot, no matter whether they are arrogant, yandere, inferior, arrogant, cute, rebellious, perverted, or iceberg, all children of any type will turn into little darlings == and then the protagonist touches his head and gives him a candy, and whatever he says next is what he does. Their readers are still commenting on the good writing, saying that good children can be cultivated with sticks and carrots, and that the author is proficient in education and so on... What an egg! What is the charm of Loli! Is it easy to push down someone with a soft voice and a soft body? These are just superficial! The biggest charm of Loli is innocence! Arrogant, yandere, inferior, arrogant, cute, rebellious, perverted, iceberg! Aren't these the most innocent things? The things we originally had back then, as people grow up, these things are gradually discarded and become more and more boring. Parents will say that this is called growing up and becoming mature, but I feel that I am getting older and becoming boring. The beauty of Lolita is that they still have these innocent and beautiful characteristics! Every time I see precocious lolita, my heart aches unnaturally. They begin to hide themselves at an innocent age, and they cannot experience the carefree fun... This is a lot of gossip 😥 Continuing with the analysis, the author has a better grasp of the cool points, not too much and not boring. However, I feel that there are a bit too many female protagonists, and I can't remember too many. Although it is a common problem in urban literature, I still hope to control it. Although lolita has good reviews, I have to give good reviews to those who are not lolita. Villa The two sisters are completely soy sauce... I don't know what they do, but they are more useless than the female teacher... I can't remember their names. It doesn't matter whether these two people have feelings or not==Then there is the female teacher, at least she can teach Lolita to read and write, it's not too useless, but I just don't like the urban royal sister, come and bite me [fn=2_4] The power system is a bit confusing. I think it would be better if the system is divided directly into 1 to 10... Sometimes I can't tell who is strong and who is weak... Ming Jin, Dark Jin, I don't know anything from now on... One moment it becomes energy, the next it is acquired... It's innate again, I've seen too much martial arts, I really don't want to see this classification anymore... Just a look at it will have a dizzy effect. Overall, cheers for the author, I would like to contribute to the collection, I don't like to log in == Recommendations come and go, eh! That's it😄
[Comment] Although well written
But I hate the protagonist's despicable personality and low morals, so I don't like this book.
What do you want to do as the last author?
Wen Yating? Am I wrong or did the author make a mistake?
[Comment]Ask a question
If you were given a choice, would you be kicked out by your boss, or would you go on your own? The protagonists in 3 of the 10 books are like this. Even though he knows that his boss wants to drive him away, the protagonist still has to wait for his boss to drive him away.
[Comment]Build an advertising building! Advertisers come in!
[Fn=2_4]As the title states, there is an advertising building. Any advertisements placed outside must be deleted!
[Comment] Well written
Return visit! Good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good, good!
Why did you write so little after signing the contract?
[Comment] Iron Blood is one of my favorites. . . .
Will the strength of the Predator be strengthened, otherwise it will be difficult to appear again in the later period? If the author does not plan to strengthen the Predator, please send a lunch to my Predator [fn=2_13] I personally think that a warrior can no longer be stronger than other opponents. It is better to die than become a scumbag. . . . Here I definitely don't have King Frieza who died on Namek in Dragon Ball [fn=2_4] It's all the screenwriter's fault anyway, right? 🤓 By the way, you have to add chicken drumsticks to the lunch box.
[Comment] I don't read much, don't lie to me
Don't lie to me. I don't read much. Who is Ye Tianlong?
[Comment] Don't you think it's worth complaining about letting someone like Batman join the underworld?
Don't you think it's worth complaining about having Batman or something like that be involved in the underworld?
[Comment] Is it so easy to lose one's energy? Be careful to write down!
Being able to block a tank gun head-on proves that he can fight a reinforced company
[Comment] As the ancients said, if you are caught by surprise, you will surely die!
As the ancients said, if you are caught by surprise, you will surely die!
[Comment] The real world is a bit too much. . .
Ancient martial arts, supernatural powers, and technology were already messy enough, but now even the bronze-armored corpses of cultivators have appeared. . .
[Comment] What a nonsense
I feel that the author is just talking nonsense. Several people were killed at the same time in China. It is already a huge criminal case. Hundreds of people die every day. The author said that there are only two to three million people in the Midtown gang. It is too nonsense. There are only ten thousand in one gang. What the hell do people do for a living? The author thought this was Academy City. It is such nonsense. How to write and I feel that the author has no outline and where to write.
[Comment] Didn't Pigfoot ever think about recruiting some resourceful and intelligent people to save the world?
Scientists are destroying the world! And the force is not high!
[Comment] Although I know, I still want to ask
Although I know that most of the protagonists look like this, I still can't figure out why the protagonist doesn't become Lu Bu from the beginning? 🤫
[Comment] Silently build a suite of buildings
[Fn=2_2] Friends who like it can come and build a building. All they need is a name. As for the role, it may become a stepping stone to become hostile to the protagonist, or it may become a brother who wanders the world with the protagonist, or it may become a big BOSS who dominates the world behind the scenes. Come and sign up for this rare opportunity!