Especially Wang Jinxian

Very well written, I just wish you could update it faster

It's a really good book. I hope to become a great god soon and be worshiped by thousands of people! 🌹🌹

This is indeed a rare good book, especially in terms of writing, which can be said to be first-rate among modern fantasy novels. It will not be a problem to make it a classic if it continues like this, but the plot development is a bit immature. If the author can slightly strengthen the control of the rhythm and highlight the character creation, I believe more people will like it.

The writing is full of talent, and the description of the characters and their style of life reflect your profound understanding of human nature and the world. This makes your novel feel authentic and credible, with a strong flavor of life. Hope to see new chapters sooner! Keep up the good work!!!

This book is great! I hope the follow-up will be more exciting!

The novel is remarkable both in terms of plot and writing style. I would like to make a suggestion. It is good to have delicate writing style, but too much emphasis on psychology will slow down the progress of the plot.

I have read all the updates so far. To be honest, if the author is not an old author or a great master, then there is only one possibility. The author has written scripts before, or has a high knowledge reserve and literary background, and is very good at writing. The ideas are clear, the story is rigorous, the structural framework is very good, the writing is beautiful, and the writing style is beautiful. Hahahaha, to be honest, I bet that this could be a book written by a newbie who just started in the industry? ? ? But when I saw that there was no information about you and no other works, I felt embarrassed. I wonder if you have written other long books before? Well, having said that, I'm not here yet, I hope you don't be proud, because I really like your book, so I decided to write a long review to praise you. Although this book currently contains too little content, it is already very fascinating. I think the core of a novel is the plot, but the soul of the plot is the characters. Wei Daoda's portrayal of the characters is really good, very full, and very emotional. This aspect is very successful. It feels very down-to-earth, as if the characters written in it are real, allowing us readers to step into this story little by little with your book. For example, take the opening chapter. Ji You quickly gave me the impression that he was a very pure and loving cute girl, Huaichun, which made me feel very good. Then Xi Jin made me feel very good and cool. Then when I was with Ji You, I imagined for a minute whether the two of them planned to rush forward and enjoy the prosperity of the world. Wow, it was so charming. Then, in terms of plot, some readers like to see clear-cut romance, some like to watch sadomasochism, some like to watch strong women, some like to watch harem battles, some like to watch the ambiguous supporting characters Hua Cong, some like to watch the kind of spiritual love pig's feet that never gets married, and some like to watch funny and humorous ones. It is difficult to satisfy the appetites of our readers. It is difficult for a book to have every element, and it is difficult to have every type of plot. I hope I can maintain my own style when I'm older and write in this style. It's really good. One thing that is very important in online novels is the audience. If you want to abuse it, abuse it to death; if you want to enjoy it, enjoy it to death. This is probably the truth. Never add elements or change the style of a book randomly, otherwise readers will easily give up on the book. The best thing about this book is that it has a strong sense of immersion. The plot is wonderful because it requires a strong sense of immersion. It's really great. I fell in love with You Wang Jinxian's book in a matter of minutes. Okay, now that I've boasted about the advantages, don't be proud before you reach adulthood. Next, let's talk about the disadvantages. The only shortcoming of this book, which is not a shortcoming, is that the number of words is too few, hahahaha, there are too few words sincerely, and it is not enough to read. The subsequent story makes people think about it. If I want to talk about a serious shortcoming, it is that the elements cannot satisfy my appetite. In fact, I prefer to read stories about strong women, the kind that are passionate and exciting. Hey hey hey, actually I really want to see the pig's feet in the bridal chamber right now, the night of flowers and candles, the sex, the sex, you know. Ambiguous and fragrant, it is still very beautiful and attractive. Hehehehe, I hope there will be more of this kind. It's best to tell a romantic story about pig's feet, haha. It's really hard to find the shortcomings. I managed to find this shortcoming that is not considered a shortcoming. Alas, don't be proud. Unconsciously, having said so much, in fact, you don't need to refer to my opinions. No matter how you write, I will continue to pursue it. Just write according to your style. I love this book of yours, especially Wang Jinxian. There are too few chapters at the moment. Once the number of words increases and the current level is maintained, it will definitely become popular. If it doesn't become popular, I will kill myself by swallowing shit.

Very good writing skills, clear ideas, distinctive characters, and will not be forgotten for a long time after reading.

The novel is very interesting, I must support this novel!