Han Women's School

There are some inconsistencies in what the author wrote. In the first part, he said that the clan members believed that the glory of Jinmai City was taken care of by heaven, and later in the story he said that other people in the Han Dynasty believed that the glory of Jinmai City was due to data fraud. Isn't this contradictory? The heroine's character is somewhat unpleasant. When she was a child, she discovered her shortcomings (nymphomaniacs) and tried to overcome them. Later, she discovered her cowardly and withdrawn side, and her wrong mentality of treating her admirers as enemies, but she still did not overcome them. I don't know if there will be a male protagonist, but judging from the current situation, I guess it will be a cultivator on the other side of the system. It can be seen that the author has tried his best to rationalize the plot design. When Liu Bin appeared, I almost thought he was also a time traveler. The author has a lot of descriptions of psychology, characters' personalities, scenes, and backgrounds, but there is less dialogue. The characters have personalities but are not stereotyped.

There are very few dialogues, and there are too many descriptions of psychological activities and story backgrounds. It is very verbose. Some things can be explained in a few sentences, and there is no need to write everything. In my opinion, even if many parts are deleted, it will not affect the reading. The author's words and sentences are not concise enough, and many of the plots and heroine's settings appear to be very retarded. I can't believe that the heroine did not receive nine years of compulsory education before she wore it. I feel that my IQ has been insulted.

For example, quite replaces very, side replaces side, if replaces if if etc.

Don't you know how to do squats? Do you have to do pumping? Otherwise, just defecate anywhere? The heroine is too pretentious

In fact, the intention of this article is very good, but I think the biggest problem of the heroine is that she has no sense of crisis, which leads her to do many things without knowing what to do, such as being sold at the beginning of the chapter, experiencing drowning and being sold. As an ordinary person, you should have a little understanding of the coldness and helplessness of the Han Dynasty. Infant drowning is not guilty, selling children and girls is common, slaves have no personal rights, and martyrdoms have been unearthed in Han tombs. After the heroine was sold, her future was uncertain, and casualties could occur at a moment's notice. This was not about saving up strength to save herself. Life came first. She had no money, no appearance, no freedom, no background, and no ability. Although she didn't know what she could do with her points for the time being, Goldfinger might be the way to save her life in the most dangerous time. In the end, she actually used her only points to buy novels...... ......... Also, when working with Bo Qing, there are actually many crises under the calm. Bo Qing is a young man and does not have the cunningness and cunning of the older generation of politicians. The heroine's products are not to the level of heaven-defying, so he can be calm. However, the heroine's low status actually has a lot of variables. The Bo family, the Jin family, the Wang family, and even other families who are interested in the heroine's abilities may be shaken slightly and the heroine may go to court. No guarantee, her peaceful life was given to her by Gold Finger, Bo Qing, and Wang Lao. She shouldn't have a sense of crisis to improve her abilities. What if she loses these powers? The result is that she always wants to exchange points for quilts and flush toilets, which is a waste of points. For quilts, you only need to transplant the cotton, pick up the cotton bolls and let people study how to weave them. There is no need to worry about the mature silk craftsmanship of Han Dynasty. Heart, and complicated things like toilets are completely unnecessary except for enjoyment. Nowadays, public toilets are mainly squat pits, which are also clean and tidy. Thinking about toilets is better than thinking about biogas pits. Nowadays, crops grow well and rely entirely on golden fingers. But knowledge is always yours and golden fingers are not necessarily so. Continuously improving your ability when using golden fingers is a good choice to deal with the crisis-ridden big man. With a low status, there is no sense of crisis at all, relying on golden fingers but no own wisdom, squandering points for enjoyment but no life plan. This is why I don't like the heroine. I've only read the first part now, so I don't know if there will be any improvement later.

Why did the heroine sell herself 😥

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Why are there no comments? How is this book?

Please, this is the Qidian Chinese website. What's going on in this article that's full of irregular wording? I have met a person before. In order to express his petty temperament, he deliberately typed you as you, and deliberately changed several words into traditional Chinese or typos. I never thought someone who writes a book can be like this. The use of standard words should always be done well. Do you dare to write this in your graduation thesis?

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In the first chapter, the names are all wrong 🤫🤫🤫

The heroine who sells herself. . . . It looks weird...

A bit poisonous😵

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