League of Legends: I Am a Human-Machine

The bottom lane jumped... When everyone was blaming and scolding Galen, Qin Nu sold the only Philosopher's Stone in her body just to buy two more eyes, and silently protected Galen. Galen was working hard to develop... 50 Minutes later, a fierce battle A fierce team battle broke out at the baron. Galen got four kills and flashed to help the bloody Qin Nu block the fatal blow of the policewoman. The human-machine teammates killed the policewoman and rushed to the high ground, winning the final victory. Galen said on the screen: Now, it's my turn to protect you. All the machines were silent, and Qin Nu said, if the author hadn't forced me to do this, I would have blasted you Galen to death. 😃

[Fn=2_3]Written very well, first time to reward

First of all, I have to say that, author comrade, your game writing is very good! This must be commended. As for the blood and stuff, I personally think it adds to the realism of the battlefield, so I like it. But, as for the so-called "urban" part... Alas, not to mention others, I personally felt... Why do these plots look so familiar? I feel like this is carved out of the same mold as the various post-X and racial urban texts I've seen in the past. What about the positive energy you promised? Not to mention the usual tendency in this kind of writing to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger, and to kill everyone. I dare not call a guy who is a scumbag, half-hearted and sowing seeds everywhere, but asking him to spread positive energy... Is unlikely. Of course, the above are all words born out of personal extreme hatred for urban post-X and racial literature. This definitely does not negate the highlights you have shown in the game section, author. I don't dare to expect you, the author, to write the urban part with a single female protagonist, but I hope that you, the author, can increase the proportion of the game part, or differentiate between the city and the game part in the title of each chapter, so that the next person who hates post-X novels can have less trouble. The above words are definitely not an attack on you, the author, or on this book. All comments represent personal opinions only. Finally, let me ask, since the protagonist is Galen, the chrysanthemum letter has also appeared. So how long will it be before the three gay friends in the grass come on stage together? (Ah, this is also a personal curiosity. Comrade author, don't worry if you don't have similar plans. Don't let readers' comments affect your writing plans.)

I finally saw the latest version, and the battle writing is still very good. There are not only tactics, conspiracy, and calculations between the lines, but also blood, emotion, and fighting. But gradually there came a point where I suddenly started to worry. That is the contradiction between readers' growing character needs and the author's limitations of writing power. To know how many "effective characters" can appear in a novel depends on the author's own writing skills. You cannot just include as many as you want, otherwise the plot will easily become wild or meaningless. But the subject of this book is LOL, so there are many and varied heroes that readers like. If the author "accommodates" us and summons more characters to appear, it would be a waste of money to quench thirst! For example, in a scene, it would have been great to have three important characters in this scene. However, due to the author's previous work, many characters popped up, resulting in 30 people being squeezed into the scene that could only accommodate 3 people! In this case, either every character should be taken into consideration and the original plot should be lengthened so that each person can write a chapter. In this case, the enjoyment of the novel will be greatly reduced (for example, in many summoning novels on Dianniang, the author has the protagonist rush to summon many characters before the plot is on track, causing the plot to go crazy. The author cannot control it, and has no choice but to enter the palace or end it); or else many characters will be downplayed, but why were there so many characters before? I'm very worried about this, because judging from the current development, the protagonist will continue to summon heroes, but the current heroes are a bit out of control. Not to mention Teemo, who has been invisible for ten thousand years, the girls who are with the protagonist are gradually becoming more popular when they appear together, and it is difficult to express their personality. I believe that the author has also discovered this and has made efforts. Changes in the game mechanism and limiting the number of teammates can allow the author to only operate 3 to 5 main characters for 80% of the combat time in this book. But don't be careless. If many new characters appear in the future, how to reasonably allocate appearances and let a certain character fade away for a period of time will become a very important ability (Potato Tomato is not very good at this point. There are so many soy sauced original important characters in Dou Po and Devouring. Who still remembers Thor after Devouring... Another example is that almost any character in "Dragon" can be built, but after watching Dou Po for so many years, I have never seen Soul Qianmo... Everyone should forget about him...). I also hope that the author can do better on this point, because there are fewer and fewer passionate books these days.

First of all, will Raven chase after Singed? Secondly, even if Garen is imprisoned, it is impossible to run to a place where all enemy heroes have disappeared. The enemy hero's killing machine takes time. In this time, it is impossible to wait for Garen to run over and kill everyone, and the other hero to rush to the next one after killing everyone, and still be able to catch up with the ending. Moreover, it is not true that the three robots were led away separately. If the human and machine had feelings and thoughts, it would be impossible for three people to chase each other separately. If a normal AI human and machine would only stare at one and chase. The author's biggest flaw is poor timing. For example, I often use a skill to kill someone and then immediately use this skill to hit others.

Although some of the scenes were a little bloody, it was not a game, but a real battlefield. How could a real battlefield not be bloody? Moreover, the psychological quality of the protagonist is really good, and he quickly adapted to the battlefield environment. However, the biggest shortcoming of this book is the update! There are too few updates, Hundan! Can't there be more updates? Only with more updates will you get recommendation votes and rewards!

I hope the author can use the easter eggs in League of Legends

Remember to give me a reminder after you finish writing. If you watch the battle scenes separately, it won't be as satisfying. [Fn=2_3]

As I said before, they will have the consciousness of the current stage, but they will not have attribute bonuses and skill bonuses. In other words, even if it is a doomsday man-machine, the man-machine hero will only have super strong combat awareness, but all the skills are probably normal. So let alone the protagonist being the strongest king, it is not necessarily easy to use it.

I specially applied for an account to reward! Rewards when it breaks out!

A very good book, looking forward to it. . . . .

The policewoman heard that Vi had gone to Jace to talk to her again, so she got seriously jealous and started to look big at Vi. Vi was startled and grabbed Jace to block him in front of her. Jace pulled his good friend Ize with a frown on his face. Lux yelled not to rush in front of Ize, and Galen screamed and rushed over to him. Lux was guarding behind him. Carter thought to himself that the fool would teleport to block Garen. Talon gritted his teeth in pain and suddenly appeared in front of Carter. The sword girl frowned and flew to the line like a god and kicked Talon away... Then Teemo, who was sleeping invisible in the middle of the road, died.

I don't know if it can be published successfully: Although I am a hardcore LOL player, I rarely came into contact with such novels at the beginning. However, since I came into contact with it, I have not found any good-looking or novel themes. The sense of substitution is very far-fetched, and more content is based on the theme of e-sports dreams. For these, it is better to watch the live broadcast, and it is better to think about having a dream every day, which will give you a more direct feeling. But the author gave me a different feeling. The switching between reality and the game, the feelings and friendship between the protagonist and the game characters after they were realized, etc., All made me truly feel the touch of the two worlds blending together. Come on, author~ Maybe the small continent of Valoran in the book compared to the real world will be because of your description, let me, and many fans feel that LOL has two worlds, feel that every hero is vivid and touching, and you can touch the warm side with your thoughts~ Come on, this is the first time in many years that I have commented on the starting point to express my inner thoughts about a work~ Thank you~