Midfielder

There are countless poisonous points. I can't stand it at all. I feel like there is a big problem with the plot setting.

1Manchester United doesn't want you. You have to be sent there like a bitch! 2The doctor who cured you is also a bug! You might as well write him to death! 3. Even though you have the ability to read minds, you still talk nonsense. You are afraid that others will not know! Aren't you afraid of being pulled into slices? 4 It's always 13 to 0.10 To 0. Why don't you write about basketball? This book has too many flaws...

I picked a few chapters and read them. I was so embarrassed that I just asked them to quit. It was really too poisonous. I gave you some suggestions. I just deleted them. If I could persist in reading, I knelt down and called my adoptive father.

Winning the cup in the third tier of England is probably a myth. Do you know how competitive the English league is? Do you know what bench depth is? People who read football novels are at least pseudo-fans. You still need to have professional knowledge, otherwise no matter how many books you write, they will be thrown into the street.

Unless the protagonist is written to be so "innocent" and "unsophisticated", I really wonder how he, who can be considered an orphan, survives in this world "without being stained by the mire". Also, it really is the animal world. It roars at every turn, which gives me goosebumps.

What a brain show! Don't talk about going back to Manchester United! The key is that people don't want you! Give up decisively

This book is for students below the first grade of junior high school, right?

I'm speechless. I've written so much for two internal training matches. Two hundred thousand words for only two games. It's not a problem to expand the plot. Just update it quickly. At least you can't update an excessive plot for several days. If the updates are slow and the plot is not compact, I can only leave it to fatten up, but I often forget about it.

The inner drama is also quite bad. As soon as she wins the game, my sister silently thinks of her father. She doesn't express a single word of her psychological feelings. She copies the inner drama she wrote earlier. She also wants to return to Manchester United. Why go back when she can win the championship with Wolves? Very good idea, the writing is not bad, why is it written like this?

It's a scumbag-like inheritance story, but halfway through, an uncle with a net worth of tens of billions suddenly appears and says that his father originally invested in his company. Is he sick? You might as well design the protagonist to be a reborn person and invest in some potential companies to make it smoother.

The author may have thought that writing a Korean Guardian reporter who specializes in black protagonists would be a good idea. The story is like a scumbag. The reason why you wrote this supporting role is entirely for the sake of the plot. There is also the 10-billionaire businessman uncle who suddenly appeared before and said that his company is invested by the protagonist's father. The plot is even more scummy. The scumbag written in it can be brushed off in one stroke. However, he is self-righteous and has a premonition that there will be many similar plots in the future. I don't read it. The originally good story has been finished by the author for his own pleasure.

There are so few comments in the comment area because everyone is scolding you for being deleted, right? The most important thing for an author is to control his own self-pleasure! Don't comment and don't want to read it!

The author writes that when Wolves were still in League One, they took a 7-hour train ride for an away game against Liverpool. In fact, it only takes an hour and a half by train from the city where Wolves is located to Liverpool. Also, the author wrote that the city where the Wolves are located is only more than 60 kilometers away from London. In fact, it is about 180 kilometers away. There is also a big branch of this book, which is that Wang Rui's sister Wang Ting has acute leukemia and needs millions of pounds in medical expenses. But the fact is that in the UK, British citizens do not need money to see a doctor at all (the two brothers and sisters immigrated to the UK with their parents since they were young, so they must be British))

After reading the book review, I felt like I didn't want to read it.

Why do I always struggle to return to Manchester United? I feel a bit like having a hot face against a cold butt.

I tell people everywhere that I can read minds, haha

I just can't understand why he has to go to Manchester United! If people don't want you, why do you still have to send them to their door? What an alien idea!

Rt, even though my career has just started, my writing style is lengthy and cumbersome. I can write several chapters on one half of a game. There is not much description of the theme. The psychology of some off-field secondary characters and even the 18th-line characters are very detailed, which leads to the progress being too slow.

I have read so many chapters, and if nothing else, I have hit the door frame and crossbar in many games...

The pacing is slow and I didn't want to read it until chapter 27.

It's okay to check it out at Super Book Zone Football games don't have big scores. Not all teams are as bad as the national football team. Being kicked by others with big scores is like a joke.