See how she leads her family to make a fortune while gaining ordinary love.
The new book "The Farmer's Widow Comes to Farm" is published by Yunqi. It is warm and not abusive. Welcome to the pit~
Reader comments
I don't understand why Zhongtian Wen has to talk to the prince! When it comes to the relationship between the prince and the prince, it seems that without the prince or prince, there would be no love. I can't write it.
A harmonious family
What a harmonious family! I occasionally have great relatives and neighbors, but they can't make any big waves. It's really peaceful and peaceful, and the years are quiet
I read some comments about princes and princes, but I thought the plot was cliche and boring and not very enjoyable.
There are too many typos
The writing is pretty good, but there are too many typos.
There are red bricks that can be used as a fire wall. How convenient is the fire bed! If you have to do geothermal heating, how much care will you need? It will be inconvenient to clean and maintain the pipe in the future, and there is no current geothermal equipment.
The opening scene of a family working together to farm and make a fortune is quite interesting, but the writing lacks appeal.
What to watch: A time-traveling girl guides a harmonious family to make a fortune through farming, such as collecting herbs, growing herbs, and baking bricks. Compared with other online articles, this family is prosperous but very warm and united. The elders are fair and reasonable, the son is honest and down-to-earth, the daughter-in-law is hardworking and filial without too many small thoughts, and the younger generations are sensible and polite. Therefore, there are almost no conflicts within the family. The whole family works together to make money and make progress! Although it is unrealistic to create such a family, I have to say that the atmosphere is very good. I like to see them improve their lives, change their destiny, and live a warm and down-to-earth life through their hard work and wisdom!
Disadvantages:
1. The author's writing style of using scenery to express emotions is okay, but he seems not good at writing human narratives, and sometimes his writing style even seems immature! Therefore, no matter whether it is the heroine, the hero, or all the supporting characters, the characters are not vivid enough and lack appeal!
Take the heroine as an example. She traveled through time as an 8-year-old girl and made suggestions for making money to support her family. She contributed many ideas, which shows that she is a very thoughtful person! However, due to the lack of description that highlights the heroine's temperament and inner feelings, the heroine's words and actions are dry and uninfectious, so her early presence is not strong! There is a plot in which the heroine accompanies her mother, aunt, and sisters to a bank to buy jewelry. When she is looked down upon by the little Ergou, the heroine's reaction is to angrily ask why they can't afford it, and then angrily smash the banknote and "look what this is." Although it's a bit cool to slap her in the face directly, the method is too low-level! Well, the few close-ups of the heroine give people the impression that the heroine is smart but not very wise! Quite disappointed! Is this way of doing things really suitable for getting together with the Ice Prince?
2. The advancement of the emotional line is very blunt! The author Jun wrote over and over again: When the male supporting character Situ returned to the capital and was surrounded by all the beauties, he often thought about the unique heroine - an 8-year-old village girl! To be honest, from Situ's perspective (not God's perspective), I really didn't see how "special" the heroine was! As a noble son of a top aristocratic family and a young master of a super group involved in many industries, it would be too rare and strange if he could be easily moved or even taken in by Xiao Yiyi's few words or a recipe! There is a suspicion that the male partner is stepping on the heroine's personal charm!
3. The attitude of the heroine's family toward the best in the article is so gentle that it makes people annoying!
Like the best one: Ma, a shrew from the same village, deliberately spread rumors to ruin the heroine's reputation. The heroine's family decided to teach Ma a painful lesson - so they found some kids to dig a hole in the road to tease Ma's son! Then, nothing happened
Like the best two: Shen, the shrew mother-in-law who was mean to her daughter, used filial piety to suppress others, forcefully snatched money, scolded her, indulged her son and beat her sister-in-law... - Took the daughter back to her parents' home, and agreed that the son-in-law gave money in exchange for freedom. As a result, the shrew only took the money and broke the promise, repeatedly causing trouble, and then the heroine's family came to the rescue every time, and then nothing happened every time. After that, the shrew continued to return to her old ways... Again and again. Thirdly, the heroine's family is really good-tempered! Even if peace brings money, it shouldn't be used to treat the best! When similar plots appeared again and again, and the author was not tired of it, I decided to abandon the article.
I don't understand why Zhongtian Wen has to talk to the prince! When it comes to the relationship between the prince and the prince, it seems that without the prince or prince, there would be no love. I can't write it.
A harmonious family
What a harmonious family! I occasionally have great relatives and neighbors, but they can't make any big waves. It's really peaceful and peaceful, and the years are quiet
I read some comments about princes and princes, but I thought the plot was cliche and boring and not very enjoyable.
There are too many typos
The writing is pretty good, but there are too many typos.
There are red bricks that can be used as a fire wall. How convenient is the fire bed! If you have to do geothermal heating, how much care will you need? It will be inconvenient to clean and maintain the pipe in the future, and there is no current geothermal equipment.
The opening scene of a family working together to farm and make a fortune is quite interesting, but the writing lacks appeal.
What to watch: A time-traveling girl guides a harmonious family to make a fortune through farming, such as collecting herbs, growing herbs, and baking bricks. Compared with other online articles, this family is prosperous but very warm and united. The elders are fair and reasonable, the son is honest and down-to-earth, the daughter-in-law is hardworking and filial without too many small thoughts, and the younger generations are sensible and polite. Therefore, there are almost no conflicts within the family. The whole family works together to make money and make progress! Although it is unrealistic to create such a family, I have to say that the atmosphere is very good. I like to see them improve their lives, change their destiny, and live a warm and down-to-earth life through their hard work and wisdom! Disadvantages: 1. The author's writing style of using scenery to express emotions is okay, but he seems not good at writing human narratives, and sometimes his writing style even seems immature! Therefore, no matter whether it is the heroine, the hero, or all the supporting characters, the characters are not vivid enough and lack appeal! Take the heroine as an example. She traveled through time as an 8-year-old girl and made suggestions for making money to support her family. She contributed many ideas, which shows that she is a very thoughtful person! However, due to the lack of description that highlights the heroine's temperament and inner feelings, the heroine's words and actions are dry and uninfectious, so her early presence is not strong! There is a plot in which the heroine accompanies her mother, aunt, and sisters to a bank to buy jewelry. When she is looked down upon by the little Ergou, the heroine's reaction is to angrily ask why they can't afford it, and then angrily smash the banknote and "look what this is." Although it's a bit cool to slap her in the face directly, the method is too low-level! Well, the few close-ups of the heroine give people the impression that the heroine is smart but not very wise! Quite disappointed! Is this way of doing things really suitable for getting together with the Ice Prince? 2. The advancement of the emotional line is very blunt! The author Jun wrote over and over again: When the male supporting character Situ returned to the capital and was surrounded by all the beauties, he often thought about the unique heroine - an 8-year-old village girl! To be honest, from Situ's perspective (not God's perspective), I really didn't see how "special" the heroine was! As a noble son of a top aristocratic family and a young master of a super group involved in many industries, it would be too rare and strange if he could be easily moved or even taken in by Xiao Yiyi's few words or a recipe! There is a suspicion that the male partner is stepping on the heroine's personal charm! 3. The attitude of the heroine's family toward the best in the article is so gentle that it makes people annoying! Like the best one: Ma, a shrew from the same village, deliberately spread rumors to ruin the heroine's reputation. The heroine's family decided to teach Ma a painful lesson - so they found some kids to dig a hole in the road to tease Ma's son! Then, nothing happened Like the best two: Shen, the shrew mother-in-law who was mean to her daughter, used filial piety to suppress others, forcefully snatched money, scolded her, indulged her son and beat her sister-in-law... - Took the daughter back to her parents' home, and agreed that the son-in-law gave money in exchange for freedom. As a result, the shrew only took the money and broke the promise, repeatedly causing trouble, and then the heroine's family came to the rescue every time, and then nothing happened every time. After that, the shrew continued to return to her old ways... Again and again. Thirdly, the heroine's family is really good-tempered! Even if peace brings money, it shouldn't be used to treat the best! When similar plots appeared again and again, and the author was not tired of it, I decided to abandon the article.